Painful part... i really hate akash for doubting payal such a foolish he is looking forward for akash to beg forgiveness from her for being such a spainless person... felt sorry for khushi mental condition m sure she is depressed now raizada boys are going to have hard time ahead... brilliant, wonderful emotional update... u made me cry with amazing update... . looking forward for next part
My second comment after re reading it .. This Akash needs to go to hell .. I mean he's a pathetic excuse of a man and payal is better off without him . Did he ever love her? Now I want a heavy hard extremely hard repenting Akash !! This guy needs his head examined . Again, u r an amazing writer :)
Your opening lines convey the gist of the chapter, dear!! Lovely!!
I have always enjoyed the stories where Khushi and Payal ,both, have stopped being the 'doormat bahu's' and have stood up for themselves.
Loved this fiery Payal very much. Actually this is something, I would have loved to watch on the actual show ; just like the much needed redemption track of Arnav.
Thinking of Khushi's condition, I wonder how much should Arnav grovel and plead and repent for his deeds and words, which have hurt her to the point she is 'breathing' and not 'alive' !!??
I don't know if you have planned Anjali's track but,its a request; make sure she uses those grey cells to see sense and not just be the damsel in distress.
Awesome.. Intense.. Heart wrenching... Can feel like I am watching kushis pain... Its unbearable... I hate akash...how can he accuse payal of such thing..n arnav is no less He should repent lottt...
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