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Ratri TS: kuch toh hai.. Shayad Pyaar Part 3 updated (Page 3)

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Posted: 24 April 2016 at 9:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nymphadora12

Wonderful update!
Wow, she knows archery! Great addition to her character! Loved the sherni dialogue by raghav!
Its hard to be put in a situation like that where she can't tell anyone and has to work it out on her own.
The archery romance was Embarrassed
Will wait for the next part eagerly!
Thanks for review. Yes as being a good CBI officer her aim was good but due to her tension she was not sble to do that. Raghav is master of all, he knew archery well and aim at once. I will update Next part soonSmile

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Posted: 24 April 2016 at 10:22am | IP Logged
Nice start to the story. I'm sure Raghav would soon come to know about the kidnapping. Trisha's dilemma is expected. waiting for the next part.

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Posted: 24 April 2016 at 10:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by braveheartdoc

Nice start to the story. I'm sure Raghav would soon come to know about the kidnapping. Trisha's dilemma is expected. waiting for the next part.
Thanks. Will post the second part soon
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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 1:11am | IP Logged
wonderful update dear loved it soo much so somebody has kidnapped trishas siblings. so trisha knows archery.loved the RaTri scene during the archery .RaTri were soo close.loved that scene soo much .waiting to see how trisha will help her siblings thanks for this wonderful update

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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 1:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Tasha1994

wonderful update dear loved it soo much so somebody has kidnapped trishas siblings. so trisha knows archery.loved the RaTri scene during the archery .RaTri were soo close.loved that scene soo much .waiting to see how trisha will help her siblings thanks for this wonderful update
Thanks for review. Yes Trisha will try her best to escape her siblings from this trouble. How Raghav will know about it will be in next part. So atay tuned
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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 2:48am | IP Logged
Wao awsm interesting story... Love RaTri scene... Aww Raghav knows Trisha very well... Mind blowing creation... Please continue...

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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 3:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shaina744

Wao awsm interesting story... Love RaTri scene... Aww Raghav knows Trisha very well... Mind blowing creation... Please continue...
Thanks shaina I will try to post it by tomorrow 
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   Part 2 

 Purani kothi ke peeche.

   There was a ruined building and the door was opened. Trisha entered the room with her gun ready to shoot but their  was nobody in the room as she was moving back to door She find a note in which it was written - "RaGhav! " and the whole paper was blank. Trisha read the note keep it in her pocket. She smelled something burning and turned around to find a rope burning which end with a bomb. She do not take a second to understand that it is a trap. She ran as quick as she can but the bomb exploded as soon as she came out of the house. She got minor injuries in her head and arms as the bomb was not so distructive. She ran towards her car and was opening her car and sensed something pinched in her neck. She quickly turned back to see and found a person in black hooded jacket trying to drugged her. Trisha is a trained officer so she rolled his fingers and kicked him back, the person was crying with pain. Trisha quickly drove the car to Raghav's resident but in the way she became unconscious due to the drug and the car hit the nearby tree but fortunately trisha don't get hurt due to slow speed.    
Raghav leave the office in tension whether trisha reached home safely or not. Raghav was driving to his home but his mind was lost in Trisha's thought. His mind again and again was asking questions - Where did Trisha went ?, Is she Ok? etc. Suddenly he stopped his car on the turning point and found Trisha's car parked at the side of the road. He quickly get out from his car and move towards Trisha's car and found Trisha unconscious on the driver seat. He quickly open the door and lift Trisha in his arms and placed her on the back seat of his car. 
Raghav (while driving) - "Trisha tumhe mana kiya tha me tumhe ghar drop kardeta hoon par tum kaha meri sunti ho bas apni marzi ka karti ho. 
Raghav listen that Trisha was murmuring something. 
Trisha-" Raghav... Rishab aur Tejal... jaan khatare "
and she was totaly unconscious. Raghav understood that something is wrong with both of them. He decided to take Trisha to his home in order to keep her safe. 

At Raghav resident

Raghav lift Trisha in his arm and move towards his bed room. He placed her on the bed. He saw some drops of blood on Trisha's coat and he realized that Trisha was badly hurt. He quickly removed her coat and found a deep burn on her shoulder.  He dressed her shoulder while dressing she lean on his chest. As he apply some spirit to clean the wound as soon as the spirit touches the wound Trisha  quickly hug him tightly in pain. Raghav knew that trisha is a strong person but she is girl by heart. Raghav consoled her by hugging her. 
Raghav-"Its fine Trisha me hoon na you will be ok. "
After dressing Raghav slept near her on the couch and prayed for her recovery. 

At 6:30am 

Trisha opened her eyes and find herself lying on bed. She woke up with jerk which resulted in pain in her arm. 
Trisha -" aah!! "
Raghav heard the cry and woke at once and saw trisha in pain. Raghav ran towards her to help her. 
Raghav-" Trisha are you ok!  tum araam se let jao tumhare shoulder me chot lagi hai. Take rest dear"
Trisha - "me tumhare ghar me... kaise... aur tejal aur Rishab kaha hai" 
Raghav - "kal raat ko jab me office se lot raha tha tab beech raste me tum mujhe gadi me behosh mili to me tumhe apne ghar le aya tum baar baar behoshi me Tejal aur Rishab ki jaan ko khatra hai bol rahi thi. kya hua hai dono ko" 
Trisha narrated the story. 
Raghav-"Tejal aur Rishab ka kidnap ho gaya hai aur tumne mujhe bataya bhi nahi kyo. Akele us sunsan jagah me jane ki kya zaroorat thi at least mujhe bata diya hota si I could be with you as backup agar tumhe kuch ho jata to mera... "
Raghav stopped and realized what he was saying. Trisha was looking at Raghav and his eyes was full of love and care. 
Raghav-" dekho pehle tum Fresh ho jao tab tak me kuch tumhare khane liye le ata hu"
Trisha holds Raghav hand and said-"thanks "
Trisha was going to enter in washroom and remember about her clothes 
Trisha -" Raghav!!"
Raghav - "haa bolo kya hua tum abhi tak fresh nahi hui" 
Trisha - "Raghav mere pahenne ke liye kapde" 
Raghav ( blanked) - "kya? tum ek minute ruko" 
Raghav moved towards his wardrobe and take out a beautiful short red dress. 
Raghav - "yeh lo tum pe acha lage ga" 
Trisha - "tumhare pass ladkiyo ki dresses bhi hai" 
Raghav-"Actually yeh dress maine kisi khaas ke liye kharidi thi "
Trisha -" oh to someone special us ladki ko bura nagi lagega"
Raghav - "well not use bilkul bura nahi lagega" 
Trisha took a bath and came out of the bathroom as she pick up the dress a note fallen down-"To Trisha" Trisha understood that the special person was none other then her. She wore the dress and was trying to close the chain placed at the backside of itbut was unable to do it. Raghav came with a breakfast tray and saw her struggling with the chain. He came near to Trisha from back and put her hairs at front. Trisha was stunned she saw Raghav in the mirror. Raghav came near to her ears and said-"May I help you ". 
Trisha was lacking words to say so she nodded in yes! 
Raghav slowly closed the chain but she closed her eyes.
Raghav-"hogaya"
Trisha-"Thankyou"and move towards the breakfast but was smiling secretly. 
Raghav-" tumhara ghao kaisa hai "
Trisha -" pehle se better hai well tum bohot accha breakfast banate ho"
Raghav - "thanks aur boss ke sath baar baar aise khane ka mauka thodi na milega" 
Trisha smiled but soon her smile disappear and she said-"tumhe us note se kuch pata chala"
Raghav was looking at the note and suddenly said-"kidnapper hume jaan bhujhakar hint de raha hai "

So what is the hint all in the final part. 
Hope you like the part. Please like and review it. All suggestions for improvement are welcomed. Embarrassed

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