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New ishra ss-meri mannat tu,pt 5 on pg 126 updt on Jul 20 (Page 45)

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Posted: 07 May 2016 at 4:57am | IP Logged
Lovely CS di

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Lovely prologue 
Cute

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Lovely...can't wait for the update

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its so beautiful, sweet, interesting, amezng plz continue soon

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Posted: 10 May 2016 at 3:15am | IP Logged
Wow di
Interesting and nice start
So ishra unknowingly already met...yay
Last 2 lines of theirs...yay
Loved it
Continue soon 

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Posted: 11 May 2016 at 6:18am | IP Logged
Hey Di...

This is the most cute story you ever written but after Pyar Deewana Hota Hai...

But you know what...after reading character sketch...I thought Raman would be very lost soul...very alone ...very rude...all grumpy...

& Ishita is princess of Iyer mansion...

Prologue was the most cute part I ever read...

You have so beautifully written it...



But after reading Prologue...I thought Raman is very happy & content in his life...

He turned listening her sweet voice.he saw a little girl looking at him and calling him .he went near her and saw her.he can see only her eyes coz chocolate was smudged all over her face making her look cute and adorable. She blink her eyes like a doll.he was looking at her without blinking his eyes.

Awww that was so so so cute...I loved this scene...


Ishita- uff it got dry.why u took so long to come.she complained with a pout.

Raman- who told u to eat so many chocolates. Daant sadh jayenge.

Ishita- I didn't have much.only twenty five.she said very innocently.


Awww she is so sweet...& she made him smile...that's the big matter...

She ate 25 chocolates...is that her Birthday? ???


Toshiji- bhalla ji,u can't leave me and Raman alone.how we will survive without u.please understand, Raman is too small.he needs u bhalla ji,please don't go.she said folding her hands crying bitterly.

Ohh that was too bad...how can someone leave his own family like that...

I thought now you will wrote all his childhood...but that was dream...

Such a bad impact on a small child...it's too bad...

He get off from the bed and went to his study table.opened his big sketch book and started making drawings.it was his way to release his pain.he was drawing without looking at the sketch he is making.his eyes were looking at nowhere,eyes were red and puffy,tears were rolling down like anything.at last he stop his pencil when he felt somehow light.he closed the sketch book and went without looking at the picture he made.

Ohh my poor Raman is in so much bad condition...but what did he make!!!! Sketch of girl!!!

He did not see that...but when would he see that??


Raman came out of his washroom and said- I am not going anywhere maa.aapki matarani ke paas kuch nahi mujhe dene ko.

Toshiji- aisa mat bol puttar.dekhna matarani apni sabse pyari cheez tujhe dengi.tu unka pyara bachcha hai.(she will give u something very precious).

Raman- haan, aur phir cheen lengi.mujhe nahi phasna aapki matarani ke chakkar mein.I am not going.


Poor him...he lost all trust on every thing..only because of his father...

Someone open the curtains and sunrays fall on her face.she hide her face in her teddy and said- neelu didi,close the curtains.let me sleep some more.

He come to her and said in her ear- happy birthday kanna.wake up bachcha.


Ohh wow...that was her birthday...

Soon they were off to temple in their car.they reached the temple in sometime.murugan temple and matarani temple r on opposite sides.their car was parked at matarani's temple side while Raman and toshiji's car stopped at murugan temple side.

Soon destiny will bind them together...

He ran to her and pulled her to himself,she landed on his chest.the car just passes a inch away from her ,making her scared.she hug him tightly.

Oh God!!! Birthday ke din hi accident...but Raman saved her...

Raman heard her calling her father and the image of his father come in front of him.he broke the hug and went without looking at her.that's when appa came running to her.he hugged ishita tight and went taking her along after shouting on the driver.ishita turn to see him but can only see his uniform. That was of her school.

He is so hurt...he is not rude...but his situation made him rude...

Ishita- (st)so he is from my school.I will search him and thank him.thinking so she went with her appa.while Raman was going without turning back. They were going in the opposite direction,not knowing that very soon they will be very close to each other.

So will Ishita recognise him?????

Hey Di...my favourite song...after reading this lines...I just thought about that song...& after I read...You had added that song only...

Toshiji- OK ,soon she started doing her puja.she gave the prasad to pandit.he do the puja and was about to put tilak on Raman's forehead when he stopped him.

Raman- don't do this.I don't believe in her.


See such a small child...lost his confidence...lost his trust...at such a small age...only because of his father...

Raman-(st) matarani, this is the first and last time I am asking something from u.if this time u don't give me that then I will never ask anything from u.I lost my father,my childhood, my confidence,my happiness,my smile.just give me a reason to live.mujhe muskurane ki ek wajah de do.

Ishita- (st)murugan I have everything don't know what to ask for. But appa always says that a life spent for others make a life worth living.make me a reason for someone's life.mujhe kisi ke mushkurahat ki wajah bana do.


Raman had everything to ask...he only ask a hope to live...

& Ishita had nothing to ask for...& she only wish to bring a smile on some one's face...that's really sweet...

I hope God will grant their wishes very soon...




Edited by Prayosha.DivAn - 11 May 2016 at 7:02am

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Posted: 17 May 2016 at 5:59pm | IP Logged
beautiful update yaar!
adorable mannat yaar!

IshRa meeting was absolutely brilliant but they did not see each other Awww

almost met!

exciting!

have them meet each other quickly and grant their wishes please!

Raman has lost faith in God?

hope Ishita returns Raman's faith in God!

yeh toh CInderella track jaisa sound kar raha hai!

Prince does not see Cinderella's face so he has to search the kingdom for her!

In this, Ishita (Prince) has to search for Cinderella (Raman) so she has to search her school student population.

just wonderful!

can't see Raman sad.

update soon! please pm me the next part!

excited!

thanks! 

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Posted: 23 May 2016 at 12:08pm | IP Logged
loved the character sketch...
chotu Ishra...
ye toh all time favorite story banane wali hai meri...
m telling u in advance...

felt bad hearing abt RKBs past..
poor he..
itni kam umar me ye sab sehna pda use...
nd ishu as always full of life hai...
reading d next one...

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