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HIS LOVE HER HATE PART 4 PAGE 16 (Page 8)

srija-n Senior Member
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Posted: 05 May 2016 at 10:55am | IP Logged
di... I dnt know about 5 pages of comment...
Plz di update soon...
waiting eagerly... :-(:-(:-(:-(:-(:-(

ky2manan Goldie
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Posted: 05 May 2016 at 11:08am | IP Logged
Awesome idea
Loved both update
Continue soon
Do pm me
firefly09angel Senior Member
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Posted: 05 May 2016 at 11:14am | IP Logged
Loved ur concept...
& its something new...
Loved it...
Do pm me...
Continue soon...
Smile Smile Smile
piyu008 Goldie
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Posted: 10 May 2016 at 12:05am | IP Logged
woah a rough story I must say..
if gadha loves her so much then why on earth he have to behave like this ..poor nandu..

atleast he should be thoda solf with her..
you know what..let him be gadha ..make nandu strong instead..

you know she can punch him, slap him..
and many thing.. my girl should be powerful..toh gadha khud hi siddha ho jayegaLOL

but m curios what changed both of them so much..
update soonish
btw loved the updates
shaan... IF-Dazzler
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Posts: 3012

Posted: 10 May 2016 at 1:29am | IP Logged
Amazing update...
Manik luvs Nandini...den y is he behaving like a monster???
Luved it...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
ashusingh678 Groupbie
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Posted: 10 May 2016 at 5:49am | IP Logged
hey interesting concept but u should update it fast yar
try to give long updates
plz update soon
waiting
aditi16 Senior Member
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Posted: 14 May 2016 at 1:07pm | IP Logged

srija_n...this part is for uTongue

Flashback in italics

Present in bold

PLEASE READ THE NOTE BELOW

Part 3

Bas mukti ab rona bandh karo...plz' Abhi's words fell into deaf ears, like the last hour.

Mukti was continuously crying after her confrontation with manik. Even abhi's agonised face revealed the same.

I cant abhi,,,har roz khud ko kosti hoon kaash I would not meet nandu, kaash nandu haven't met the monster'

par mukti woh tumhara...' abhi's sentence left incomplete as mukti retorted

no abhi don't woh koi nahi hai mera...i hate that monster' mukti malhotra singh stopped her husband before he utters the horrific truth.

Cabir too sighed for the nth time. He too sat there unable to control mukti.

Navya would be here soon, she might be the only person to make mukti see sense.

;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;

Manik had been in his study for the past one hour. Now the room reflected manik's state...messy. Nandini would have hated that.

He ran to his large mahogany desk n opened the locked drawer. Took all his precious and sat on a corner. They were her, their memories of a happier time. When she talked a mile a minute, she laughed loud, she played pranks n most importantly was happy.

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2 years ago when they met for the first time Mukti malhotra never knew that her one wrong judgement and a single decision wouldn't let her sleep one night.

She belonged to the richer class of the society.

Despite having a training in nursing, she was attracted to the glam air-hostess life.

Her parents passed away when she was in her early teens. But her older brother took onto their place very soon.

She had the most loving boyfriend, Abhimanyu Singh. He loved her more than his life.

She had it all.

Then she met the most amazing person, too good to be real, Nandini Murthy.

Smart, strong, focussed, happy n a big casual flirt were her synonyms. She was someone u get attracted to very soon. N mukti immediately felt like an elder sister to her. She fell in love with the child woman.

Nandini murthy, from  a conservative family was a babe disguised behenji.

She feared her family the most. Yet once out of their sight nandu knew how to enjoy life. Finally with the job of an airhoistess n a true friend in form of mukti she finally felt a peace. Life was great.

;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;

It was late evening when Manik walked into their room.

Time for some serious business' he thought

A blue file in hand Manik malhotra walked upto his gf sitting on the bed.

Nandini was up an hour ago...she felt like an alien to the situations as well as her body.

Her body pained...the marks were sore.

She sighed looking at her hands. The bruises that have turned purple. Manik would harm himself when he sees these marks on her, she sighed.

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Mukti and nandini walked into the posh delhi mall. They were here for the day, their flight landed an hour ago.

At the mall...

Nandu ye dress dekh na...how would this be for the date?'

Mukti turned around not getting any reply from her friend. An irritated sigh escaped seeing Nandini passing a flirtious smile to a guy standing at the other end. She was blatantly flirting.

The guy walked up to them...'hey beautiful...wanna grab a drink'

No' mukti's firm voice rejected his offer...

cmmon babe' his partially slurry voice insisted.

leave' mukti said n pulled nandini in the store.

kya yaar mukti...it would have been fun...' nandini winked at her.

u know tu ek din bohot problem mein padegi iss attitude k liye' mukti warned

ok phir tu mujhe bachayegi...y r u so serious...i wouldn't have slept with him...' she again made fun of mukti's warning

chal shop kare...' n nandini pulled mukti n started their pagalpanti...

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Nandini chuckled at the memory of the day.

What so funny baby' manik's voice brought her out of her thoughts...

nothing' her emotionless voice replied

He held her chin in a tight grip n warned 'never use that tone with me...'

Her eyes teared up she nodded...

So nandini, after whatever u have been doing for sometime n the stunt u pulled on me today, I'm done with giving u time...u just don't deserve it nandini'

what manik plz...u promised me..plz manik, abhi toh 6 months hue bhi nahi' nandini panicked at the thought.

Nandini...stop this' his tone warning her to contradict.

papers are here...tomorrow at 10 we will sign our marriage registration' ...Manik Malhotra made the final announcement, that was the ultimatum to her life's end.

I'll give u the night's rest...come lets sleep' he didn't let her speak anymore.

Climbing on their bed Manik held a sobbing nandini close...trying to sooth her. Though he too knew she will cry herself to sleep.

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Every part will reveal a bit of past. Nandini is different. I know u guys will love her, trust me with the story.

Precap: enters navya naveli...one of the main characters of the story

                                          About the story...

Those who commented on the part THANK YOU GUYS...

There is a severe lack of response for the story, given to the no. of pms I send...

From the next part onwards

I'LL PM THE STORY TO ONLY THOSE WHO COMMENT...

YES! NOT THE UPDATE REMINDER BUT THE STORY WOULD BE PM-ED TO THE PPL WHO COMMENT.

I'LL PM U PPL THE STORY, U WILL JUST HAVE TO COMMENT ON THIS THREAD. I FEEL REALLY SAD THAT I HAVE TO DO THIS.

 

 

IN UR COMMENTS DO LET ME KNOW HOW MANY OF U R ON WATTPAD. I WANT TO SHIFT MY STORIES THERE. THOUGH I WOULD BE A REGULAR FORUM VISITOR.

WE DONT GET PAID FOR THE STORIES. GUYS UR COMMENTS R THE ONLY REWARD WE R GREEDY FOR.

LOVE

ADITI

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shaan... IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 14 May 2016 at 1:36pm | IP Logged
Amazing update...
Flashback was awesome...
Manan's gttng married...
Nandini was so different in her past...
Luved it...
Thnx 4 d pm...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...

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