Kaisi Yeh Yaariaan


Kaisi Yeh Yaariaan
Kaisi Yeh Yaariaan


bhagupur IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 24 April 2016 at 7:38am | IP Logged

Thanks for pm.dear

This is amazing story line. ...

Sounds very very interesting. ..

Please continue. ..


mehak_ahuja IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 24 April 2016 at 2:50pm | IP Logged
Extremely interesting will love to read this story
charanyaaj IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 April 2016 at 7:33pm | IP Logged
interesting prologue..
Pls do continue and pm me
arshnz Groupbie

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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 10:52pm | IP Logged
Nice concept...
Congrats for ur new story
Manik seems powerful... Looking forward for the story
Prerana100 Groupbie

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Posts: 56

Posted: 25 April 2016 at 11:54pm | IP Logged
Nice concept.

Update soon
srija-n Senior Member

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Posted: 27 April 2016 at 1:53pm | IP Logged
when ll u update next part??
plz update soon ... waiting eagerly ...
aditi16 Senior Member

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Posted: 30 April 2016 at 12:29pm | IP Logged

So this fic will be named HIS LOVE, HER HATE.


Manik walked into the room. He felt his insides clench as he saw his love lying on their bed slowly getting their consciousness back. Her frown deepened, muttering something incoherent she opened her eyes.

Baby... manik's voice got her to the reality.

Maa...nik she stammered his name. Kya kar diya tumne baby' in a moment he was sitting infront of her and gripped her shoulders really hard.

Sorry her teary voice did nothing to reduce his gripping.

What do you want nandini should i tie you like before' his menacing voice took her back to another nightmare she did not want to visit.

no...no please don't...im sorry manik phir nahi hoga' her voice laced with panic.

Par baby saza toh tumhe milegi na...afterall you tried these silly things again...toh'... manik's voice came to a halt as he smashed his lips on a shivering nandini. After that all that was heard was her screams n his grunts. His possible expression of love almost bruised her body n mind alike. Afterall she was being loved by a monster.

After manik finished she lied there shivering like a leaf with her bruised body.

He took her in his arms n kissed her forehead. Sleep baby...but remember, he gripped her chin really hard, your family wont be spared..hmm'. Her scared eyes n fanatic nod assured him that his message reached her.

Now sleep n he rocked her to sleep.

Looking at her sleepy form, he sighed as guilt finally took over. The guilt of keeping her away from her family n the outside world. But then he cant risk her away from him. He still remembers how she was to leave him.

Manik's reviver broke with his ringing phone. He picked it up to see the so called Dr was calling.

M: haan mukti bol...

Mu: nandini kaisi hai?

M: mukti stay away from nandini...meri gf ki fikar karne ki zaroorat nahi hai.

Mu: had i not come on time YOUR gf would not have been alive, n its u who have driven her to this

M: mukti his shout could have made anyone shiver but not a true friend.

Mu: don't shout manik malhotra...even u know what u have driven my friend into...had it not been you nandini aaj iss halat mein nahi hoti.

M:if u have called to spouf all these nonsense then im not interested

Mu: nandu ko jaane do manik...please[ her voice almost pleading]

M: never...was the last word before manik hung the ph.

He came back to the room to see his love sleeping. How beautiful she looked even now. He felt really good when he saw her neck n upper chest marked by his teeth n nails. A physical proof of who she belonged to.

He also knew it would pain her a lot later. So he took the ointment n started applying on her love' bites.

She hissed as her wounds burned. Her eyes opened to see manik at his regular job after their usual love making. She sighed.

Baby ...he lovingly placed his hand on her stomach n asked 'dard ho rahi hai?'

She as usual nodded her head in no'.

But he like everyday gave her the painkiller, she gulped it without a thought. Had it been old nandini her nakhra would have taken an hour to gulp this medicine. Oh! How he misses his old baby.

As once again tiredness took over nandini slept.

Manik checked the room for anything that might harm nandini...getting nothing like that he called maria over intercom.

Within a minute maria was present in their room.

When she gets up give me a call, im in the study, with these instructions he went down to his study to his study to look for his old nandini. The nandini he loved, but his caging has turned into something else.

5 pages of comments n I'll be back to update again.

Haters stay away I don't need your gyan. If u don't like u are free to leave.




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abhilashaS Senior Member

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Posts: 549

Posted: 30 April 2016 at 12:42pm | IP Logged
if manik loves her so much why is he hurting her...cant he deal with her politely...bichari nandu has to bare so much pain...pata nahi manik kab samjhega...emotional update...manik is too harsh on her...
update soon...cant wait to read further...

Edited by abhilashaS - 30 April 2016 at 12:43pm

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