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ARIYA FF::::: THE CHASE-JOURNEY BEGINS(PART 8 PAGE 35 ON 1/12/16)

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HELLO GUYS GEAR UP FOR NEW EXCITING, ENTHRALLING JOURNEY...
I HOPE TO NOT DISAPPOINT ANYONE WITH THIS STORY.
IF ANYONE FINDS CONCEPT OR CONTENT SIMILAR TO ANY OTHER STORY...LET ME KNOW...IT WON'T BE INTENTIONAL IT WILL BE PURE COINCIDENCE IF IT EVER HAPPENS. JUST LET ME KNOW SO THAT I CAN CHANGE ACCORDINGLY...
AND CONTINUATION OF THIS STORY TOTALLY DEPENDS ON RESPONSE I WILL GET TO THIS. PLEASE BE KIND ENOUGH TO LEAVE YOUR LIKES AND FEEDBACKS. TRUST ME THEY MEAN ALOT TO ME. A STORY BECOMES BEAUTIFUL JOURNEY FOR THE WRITER WHEN IT CONNECTS TO READERS AND THEY BECAME PART OF IT, REVIEW IT AND EXPRESS THEIR TRUE THOUGHTS FOR THAT STORY.
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INDEX
PROLOGUE: SCROLL DOWN
CHARACTER SKETCH: SCROLL DOWN
PART ONE: SCROLL DOWN

PART TWO

PART THREE
PART FOUR: PAGE 13 
TEASER

PART FIVE

PART SIX
TEASER: PAGE 26
PART SEVEN: PAGE 29

PART 8: PAGE 35

PART NINE:
PART TEN:
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 PROLOGUE
 
 

 

"HOW THE MAN WILL REACT WHEN HIS LOVE, HIS REASON OF EXISTENCE IS IN DANGER. WHAT WILL BE REACTION OF PEOPLE CLOSE TO HIM, KNOWING HIM WHEN THEY WILL GET TO KNOW ABOUT THINGS HE HAS KEPT HIDDEN FROM THEM. WILL HE BE ABLE TO KEEP HIS SAFE? WILL PEOPLE CLOSE TO HIM UNDERSTAND HIM AND HELP HIM IN FIGHTING AGAINST THE HIDDEN ENEMY."

 

 

 

THIS IS THE STORY OF AN UNCONDITIONAL LOVE, CHANGING RELATIONS, SCARY FIGHTS, UNSHAKABLE TRUST, HIDDEN TRAITORS, TWIST AND TURNS, ONE ENEMY AND THE CHASE YOU WILL NEVER FORGET. WILL LOVE WIN IN THE END OR SOMETHING ELSE IS WAITING.

 

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CHARACTER SKETCH
 

 

ACP ARJUN RAWTE: SECOND IN COMMAND OF ETF. 28 YEAR OLD HOT HEADED SUPERCOP HAS PAINFUL PAST.

 

 

ACP SAMEER RATHOD: ETF CHIEF, 29 YEAR OLD WAS BEST FRIEND OF ARJUN. IN PRESENT ANGRY ON ARJUN BECAUSE OF PAST, LOVES AYESHA AND YET TO CONFESS HIS FEELINGS, VERY SCRICT BOSS BUT DO CARE FOR HIS TEAMMATES. SAME AS SHOW

 

 

SENOR INSPECTOR AYESHA KAPOOR: DABANG LADY 27 YEAR OLD. HAS RECENTLY JOINED ETF, LIVE EXAMPLE OF WOMEN POWER, ADMIRES SAMEER, ALWAYS GET IN ARGUMENT WITH ARJUN. SAME AS SHOW

 

 

TECHNICAL EXPERT SHREEKANT SEN: 25 YEAR OLD SAME AS SHOW

 
COMMONDO CHANDRAKANT PATIL: 27 YEAR OLD SAME AS SHOW
 
 
LIZA D'CROUZ: 23 YEAR OLD MEDICAL EXPERT
 
 
SAKSHI ANAND: CRIME JOURNLIST NOW APPOINTED IN ETF BY COMMISSIONER
 
REST OF THE CHARACTERS WILL BE INTRODUCED AS STORY PROGRESSES.Smile


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PART ONE




"Please, Mujhe jane dijiye...It's really important", A girl in her early 20's pleaded security guard of ETF who was not letting her inside of conference hall without primal security check.


"Madam, we can't let you in without checking and not before you tell us the reason of you meeting him. Aur aap jin se milna chahti hai wo office me nahi hai"

Guard told her trying to keep his cool and not lash on girl who from last one week visiting ETF asking to meet there ACP and she would wait from morning till evening outside office. Every day she got same answer that he has not came to office. Today was no exception, she was told the same thing but instead of backing out she insisted to meet ETF chief so she was pleading guard to just let her in, while guard as ordered from above that no one should let inside to meet chief without his permission didn't allowed her to go in.


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INSIDE CONFERENCE HALL 12 PM


There was pin drop silence in conference hall. All were busy in completing files for the last case they solved, now and then glancing at closed door of chief's cabin, worried for the happenings inside.


"Ayesha, you know what's going on?" asked Shree in hushed tone to Ayesha, pointing towards chief's cabin.



Ayesha nodded her head in negative. She was also clueless to the reason of their chief's sudden anger from morning. He was pacing restlessly barking on phone, that's how they found him when they came to office and when Sakshi asked him about it he lashed out at her telling her to mind her business. Later they heard lots of noises coming from his cabin where he and their second in command who has returned after complete month came. ACP Arjun Rawte was one of the hell mysterious creatures. No one dares to mess with him, knowing it will result into nothing. Only Sameer Rathod could manage him. They had one odd equation about that confused rest, as they were clueless to relationship this duo shares/shared.


INSIDE SAMEER RATHOD'S CABIN


"What the hell do you think Rawte?"

...


"It's not some kind of joke. This is intolerable."


...

"Answer me dam it! Tum aisa kaise kar sakte ho"



Sameer barked on Arjun who was standing near window with his hands folded near his chest and staring outside.


He shifted his gaze towards Rathod, he just wants to end this discussion and go to see her. It's been a month for crying out loud that he has been away on undercover mission. Today when after lot of hard work he completed it, here was his chief asking him explanation about the risk he took for solving case. Why today his chief was acting as if he cares about him when he himself has told that he doesn't exist for him. He is bearing him just because commissioner forced him.


 
 
Arjun was about to answer to his boss in his usual style when they heard commotion going outside. Glancing at each other they came out only to witness all team standing around someone in circle and arguing over something.

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"Yeha Kya ho raha hai?" Shouted Sameer at top of his voice, can't they let him have talk with stubborn Arjun, a much needed one?




A figure ran past everyone and hugged Arjun crying bitterly mumbling some, incoherent sentences that made no sense to him. Shock would be an understatement to describe everyone's state. They stood holding their breath waiting for Arjun's reaction as they were aware about his temper.



"Sir, I'm sorry. I tried stopping her but she...", Guard gulped fearfully who came running after the very same girl who managed to get inside said.

 

"AJ...They took her...Please ...save her...AJ...wo...wo...please" At the same time Arjun heard her saying.

 

All colour drained from Arjun's face. They took her. That's why he was feeling restless. She needs him. He has to find her. He can't afford losing her.




"Nandini" He called out after composing himself and pulling out of hug.




"Ye kaise hua?" Arjun ask her impatiently ignoring rest of the team and their shocked faces.




"Mujhe nahi pata AJ" Nandini said looking down.



"Ye sab kya hai Rawte?" asked Sameer stepping forward.

 

"Nandini, batao mujhe",Arjun asked again ignoring Sameer's question.
 


"Ek week pehle college work se mujhe aane me late ho gaya, mai jab wapis aayi tab wo ghar pe nahi thi...Maine bahot dhudne ke koshish ki par kuch nahi mila...aur aap...aap bhi yeha nahi the...Aur kal mujhe ye letter mila jo usne aapke liye likha hai...AJ mujhe bahot dar lag raha hai...Please save her...Please!" Nandini pleaded him while crying loudly, fear and panic clearly written over her face.




She gave that letter To Arjun with trembling hand.




Arjun's heart took up pace. He was scared after knowing she was missing from one week. With shaky fingers he opened that letter and started reading it.


"ARJUN,


Umeed hai aapka mission kamyaab raha hoga, aur aap thik honge. Aap soch rahe honge, ham aapse milne ya phone karne ke jagah ye letter kyo likh rahe hai? Uska jawab hai, ki ham nahi jante ham kaha hai, nahi hamare paas koi tareeka tha khat likhne ke siva aaptak pohchne ka. Ham sirf bhagwan se dua karte hai jabtak aap tak ye khat pohche tab tak bahot der na ho chuki ho...
 


Wo log wapas aagaye hai Arjun, aur hame...hame yeha kaid kar ke rakha hai...Hame bahot dar lag raha hai Arjun...Hame aap ke paas aana hai...please hame yaha se le jayiye...Please!

 

Aap jante hai hamare pass aisa kuch hai jo hame aapse dur hone ka ehsas hi nahi hone deta...jante hai wo kya hai jo hame iss mushkil ke waqt me bhi sukun de raha hai? Apka ansh Arjun...Hamare pyaar ki nishani...Aap pita banne wale hai Arjun...Sach..!
 


Jaldi aayiye Arjun, kahi der na ho jaaye...Hame yeha se le jayiye...hamara dam ghuta hai yeha...
 


Ham aur hamare saath saath hamara baby uske baba ka intejar kar rahe hai...Ham dono aapse bahot pyaar karte hai Arjun, bahot pyaar!
 


Aapki aur sirf aapki
Shona"


Arjun in shock lose his balance stumbling on his feet, he held chair for supporting his unsteady legs. Sameer who has stepped forward for steadying Arjun stopped in his tracks as he noticed tears in Arjun's eyes and that girl Nandini holding him by his arms, whose face never showed any emotions today was crying. It must be something very big he thought to himself.

 

"Arjun, what's happening? Kiska letter hai? Aur ye ladki kon hai? Kon le gaya aur kise?" Sameer asked now in worried tone to Arjun who was lost in his thoughts.

 
 

He is going to be father! She is pregnant! This news where filled Arjun with happiness, on the other hand panic gripped his heart thinking she was in clutches of those monsters. No! No! He can't let her stay there not even for minute. He was already angry at himself for not being able to protect her in first place, now he won't let anything happen to his shona and his unborn baby. Tears gathered in his eyes thinking about pain his shona and their unborn must be feeling. He himself was in that condition.

 
 

"AJ?" Nandini called him rubbing his arm little trying to provide and gain some strength. She knew how hard it must be for him to take in. She knows how much her AJ loves his shona.

 

Arjun looked in Nandini's eyes which held trust that he will bring her back. Reading that letter once again he decided his plan of action. He knows what he has to do and he will do it. He will get her back safely.
 
 


With that determination he decided to put his plan in action. He knew who will help him, so he took out chain from his neck and called ETF's technical expert "Shree!"
 


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Don't ever let anyone break your soul. You have to stand on your own two feet and fight. There are those who would give anything to see you fall. Never give them the satisfaction. Hold your head up high, put a determination on your face and stand your ground.-unknown

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awesome one...
loved it...
nice...
continue soon...

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Welcome bck muktai dear.
An other ariya story
I'l love to read

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Vry nice prologue

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