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AsYa FF: Breathe [RESUMING TEASER] Page 34 (Page 13)

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Posted: 07 May 2016 at 2:07am | IP Logged
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Posted: 07 May 2016 at 3:17am | IP Logged
Nice start dear
He love her & wanted to talk to her abt his career plan. They kissed & both lost in their own world. Didn't realise where they were. Hate that Rajat bas***d. Asad proposed her. Waiting for next update soon to know Zoya answer. Thanks for pm

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Posted: 09 May 2016 at 2:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by suearmaniac

sans Hug pehle to concept so close to real life. smthing we cud connect to . gud one on that . also i love the title breathe and talking of chappy 1 written fabulously i always love tra likha kuch bhi ho asad's pov is ryt .and fir one mistake they did to not control . rajat jese log fayda utha lete h just admirable how real this is great yaar will he marry her.. turn of events now love or career awesome u wrote cant wait fr next

yeah close to real life that's y difficult to write nd its not my type light hearted story I can write something like the secret crush very easily but the first chapter of Breathe took almost two days!Ouch r u sure I write good... I don't get flattered by non-realistic praisingDead You won't get dinner when you come home todayAngry

Asad's character is a real man a part of my life! I have seen a relationship go through rough patch! now how and why I won't speak much wait for the story to unfold!
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Posted: 09 May 2016 at 2:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by suearmaniac

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Originally posted by suearmaniac

you won't entertain ghosts ROFL
chal i want pms too.
teaser prolouge ek number
abhi gonna read chapter 1
abhi meine 400 PMs bheje can u believe?Shocked adho ko kabhi dekha bhi nahi!SleepyLOL
filter kr buddy list LOL
meko bhi krna h
feeling lazy to do thatSleepy
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Posted: 09 May 2016 at 2:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by DoremonLove

Hey thanks for pm
Coming to the first chapter it was written very well asad and zoya are childhood friends turned lovers
Asad has plans for his career hence he doesn't want to take. A big step of marriage so he decided he would talk with zoya
Asyas first kiss Embarrassed but rajat Censored cheapo now to save zoya from getting humiliated publicly he asked her to marry him
As asad hadn't decide on marriage but he will marry her now so its gonna be interesting to see how he manages it
Please do pm me for next chap

well that's the story all about that how do they make it, will they stay together or no!
Yeah that''s the tragedy actually ki it was their first kiss and it got filmed! guess Asad went slightly overboardOuch Lets see what both do!Star

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Posted: 09 May 2016 at 2:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Heatsha8176

oh no
because of that b*****d Rajat Asad has decided to marry Zoya
but his dream career
looks like its turnin out as I thought
he will marry her but then resent n blame her for missin his opportunity to follow his dream
I just hope im wrong because Zoya doesn't deserve it plus he is the one suggestin the marriage
thanks for pm nplz keep em comin

well maybe your gues is nearly correct but Asad does understand that he was at fault to he would have better got a room instead of a PDA, as it does make ppl uncomfortable plus it was their college not any mall or something and it turned worst that they were filmed!
Well Career is his first goal Asad will defo try to pursue it! 
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Posted: 09 May 2016 at 2:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jayasree.rao

A different story. Wish to know what will Asad do with his career now.
Please update the next part.


Asad is a career oriented guy in love so lets see what he does!
Will update as I finish writing!
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Posted: 09 May 2016 at 2:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by PriyaCherry

Thanks for PM,Dear.Smile
It was So Interesting Part.Smile
Asad(KSG) wanted to convince Zoya about his Dreams,it was so Nice.Smile
ASYA(KABHI) Romance was so Cute.Embarrassed
But,that RajatAngry spoiled everything..
It was so sad to see Zoya like that.Cry
Asad(KSG) decided to marry Zoya,it was so Interesting.Smile
Please Update Next Part soon,I am waiting here.Smile
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
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Thanks for the comment Priya, your long comments always fascinates me!
Glad you found it interesting and liked the read<3 Ofcourse they were caught in compromising position thus it was a shame for both!
Lets see what marraige does to them!

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