RagLak being with you does not exist in my heart chpt 2 pg 4 (Page 2)

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Hey rose..

Very interesting start..

Update soon

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Interesting prologue 
Please do continue Smile
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Nice prologue.. 
Waiting for the update..
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nice story continue soin
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It seems interesting please continue soon Big smileBig smile
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Interesting prologue 
Please do continue
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hey guys thanks for reviews on the prologue
 here is the CS:

Ragini: after the betrayal of laksh moved in with armaan and her grandmom in whom she sees her mom; a 23 year old business woman acheived major success within 6 months lives in London bold outspoken confident belives in herself. best friend of Armaan.

Armaan: 24 year old prankseter is suave stylish knows how treat a girl best friend of ragini has some feelings is always their for her, he is the pefect one that every girl would love to have. a business man since the age of 20 overtook the empires of his parents which were ran by his grandmom gained quick success at a young age. more important is the sweet man behind the success of ragini.

Grandmom savitri: inspired from geet. cool grandmom loves armaan and ragini found a daughter in ragini doesnt care about her past as she knew everybody in her family had contributed towards her insecurities that made her took those steps to get what she wants; somewhere wishes that armaan and ragini get married.

Laksh: spoilt brat businessman age 24 betrayed ragini in the name of love to get his revenge his tit for tat to end what ragini had started always has his mind empowered by his heart, impuslive short tempered.

Rest characters are the same:


Edited by dreamyrose - 24 April 2016 at 4:59am

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hey everyone here I go with chapter 1 I know its damn long hope I don't bore you plz keep tomatoes at bay LOL and leave your reviews Big smile

6 months later

a girl jerked herself wide awake from her sleep with sweat glands dribbling down her face, causing her to remember that day which had shattered her to pieces, all she ever had wanted was love from her prince charming , he was her universe her breath her everything but what he had did in return she had vowed to never forgive him.

she had moved on in life slowly but steadily she had gained her self-esteem and was no longer the ragini gadodia everyone knew. This Ragini was just ragini who had left everything behind that day since that day she had realised nobody had ever loved her but at every point of life had used her and throwed her away like a tissue paper.

Remembering the thoughts of how everybody close had used her for their selfish reasons she deadly wished that she had understood the fact earlier that they never loved her and would never love her then she would have not took extreme steps to be what she became. but this ragini was a new ragini she wiped her tears promising herself that she would not morn over her past what happened has happened. purely tit for tat and maybe that was how it was supposed to be since he ended what she started.

Ragini again tucked herself back into her bed in order to get some sleep as she had a flight to catch back to india, a country which she had left far behind that day, but before dozing of ragini was determined no matter she would not change to the ragini she was before.

in the mahesawari mansion nothing was left the same the day that ragini was thrown out by the hands of her laksh everybody had broken ties with him, he was left alone nobody cared about his existence at home but the men of the family had maintained only a pure professional relationship for the heck of their business.

Laksh was sitting in the balcony of his room sleep was far away from his eyes, he did not knew the reason but he felt uneasy he was lost in the thoughts of ragini not because he missed her because he believed that she is the reason why nobody cares about him. his heart was overpowered by his hatred the betrayal that ragini had gave him neither about the few lovey dovey moments they had spent he did somewhere think though fake he did enjoy her company but his mind always never let his heart won.

7am: London United Kingdom:

Ragini's phone had rang in a sleepy state she felt like murdering the person who was disturbing her sleep, she loved her sleep she got up and answered the phone in anger "Hello" "ragini my sweetheart have you forgotten the fact that we have a flight" "Armaan i am sorry" what sorry" I am sorry ragini pleaded in a cute tone" "i will have to take my time to think about your apology till then you get ready since girls do take all day to get ready that would give me enough time take care"

"armaan" she shouted in a pissed of tone only to realise he hung up on her she thought to teach him a lesson. Ragini thought if that night she had not met Armaan she would have not been the ragini who she is now and credited her sucess to him. earlier she believed in the saying that "behind the success of a man there is a women" but armaan made her realise that "behind every successful woman their is a sweet man"

she owed it to Armaan; armaan who every girl would have dreamed of he was a perfect grandson he lost his parents a young age, he was a young man who had chivalry who knew how to treat a girl, despite being a cheeky prankster. he always had stood by her their friendship had grown even his grand mom adored ragini to the core, being well experienced with life she could see the truth and innocence in ragini and treated her like her own daughter she found a love of a mom; the love which she had yearned for. on her grand mom insisting to move in she moved in with them she so wished she was here but even at the age of 50 her grand mom did not forget to go on holidays and was busy on a holiday with her friends for the weekend. whereas Armaan was coming back today morning from cracking a business deal and straight after collecting her they would head to the airport to catch the flight back to india.

Armaan knew everything about the past of ragini; and had helped her to overcome and transformed her to the bold ragini she is now with armaan she would be the perfect jerry to tom. with armaan she did not just discover new things about herself everyday but could totally be herself which she was totally unware of.

Edited by dreamyrose - 24 April 2016 at 5:14am

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