RagLak FF "TheyMet,TheyLaughed...AndWhatThen?"part8pg14 (Page 3)

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Originally posted by dewcute

Hey shri...

Nice start yaar...

Can't wait for more...

Different and refreshing..

Update soon

Thanx Jiya...Smile

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All the characters are a work of fiction. Don't be over possessive for any Character or Bash them. All the characters present is a necessary need. Any harsh comment will make the writer stop the story right at the moment.


Part 1

   Laksh reaches home. Sanskaar rushes 2 him.

 Annapurna: Laksh, kahan the beta?

Laksh:Kissi chuhiya ne rasta kaat liya Maa...

All: Chuhiya??????

  Sanskaar understood he was telling about a girl..so he interupted:

 Laksh,,forget about that. Jaa get ready.. we r being late. Ache se taiyaar hona haan...

 Laksh: bhai,, hum tumhare liye ladki dekhne jaa rahe hain be sure she don't choose me if i dress up well...u knw how handsome i am...

 Sanskaar: Shut up Laksh and go n get ready...soon.

      Laksh leaves..


All the family reaches a house where there were people 2 welcome them.. Shekhar garodia welcomes them.. Laksh goes to park the car..

    A girl comes with sharmista and sits in front of Sanskaar.

Shekhar: Our daughter, Swara.

    Laksh parked d car was about 2 go into d house when he bumped to a girl.

 Both: R u blind????

They looked each other's face and both: U??????

 Laksh: tum ab ak mera picha kar rahi ho?? Just for a Sorry???

Ragini: How cheap! How dare u talk to me like that?

 Laksh : What do u mean?

Ragini: I mean u r following me..

 Laksh: JUst shut up! Chuhiya Kahiki...

Ragini: You naughty monkey! How dare u call me a Chuhiya????

Laksh: That u r...CHuhiya...

 Ragini: U...


Someone called from inside: Ragini...

 Ragini: Coming Ma...(to Laksh)dekh lungi main tumhe...

   She leaves...Laksh follows her with an irritating face...

WHen they go inside

 Sarmistha: Annapurna ji she is Ragini, Swara's sister.

Sujata: He is Laksh, Sanskaar's brother.

Shekhar: Ragini, distribute sweet 2 all..

Ragini: Yes papa..

  She distributes but she doesn't gives one to Laksh.. Annapurna notices this but stays quiet.

 Annapurna: Shekharji, We like Ragini,..But it will be better if children talk with each other once.

 Shekhar: Sure annapurnaji, Ragini ,take Swara to terrace,,

They leave.

Annapurna: Sanskaar...

Sanskaar stands up, goes to Laksh: tu chal mere saath.

Saying this he drags him with him.

 All of them go up.

Laksh: I think we should leave them alone.

Ragini:I know, mujhe aapki advice ki jaroorat nahi hai...

 Laksh made an irritating expression again.

Swara: Ragini...

Ragini: Leave it Swara, he deserves it.

 Sanskaar: I think u have met before (slowly to Laksh)

 Laksh: Subah wali Chuhiya...

 Sanskaar gave a shocking look.

Raglak leaves and SwaSan seats..Raglak goes to a corner,

Laksh: Ragini right?

Ragini: Why? Do u have any problem??

Laksh: Amazing name, Sounds like a Abla Naari, RAGINIII!!

He said giving force on her name.

Ragini: (with an o face): stop teasing me u monkey...(Annapurna hears from behind) Apni sakal dekhi hai Ayine me ? Bilkul circus k retired monkey lagte ho...Wild monkey...

  Annapurna hears it and gets shocked.

She leaves after listening RaGlak conversations. Sanskaar and Swara talks with each other which makes them very relaxed and happy. After a little while Laksh n Ragini comes there, Ragini takes Swara from there ,running towards d room and Laksh asks Sanskaar:

   Liked her na???

Sanskaar: Laksh I think we should meet once more...for her...

laksh: Main samajh gya bhai...

 He runs. Sanskaar follows him..

   "Laksh, Ruk..."

 He goes 2 d hall.

Laksh: Papa, YEs...

  All becomes happy.

DP: Shekharji, aap ek baar Swara se puch lijiye...

Ragini comes running.

 Ragini: Papa,...Haan...

All becomes happy again. Annapurna says Shekhar and Sharmistha should give Sanskaar a coconut and 101 rs. To fix everything.

Sharmista: laado, Ja.. Nariyal le kar aa.

Ragini: haan maa...

She leaves. All were busy in giving each other congrats when Ragini was coming down stairs...She was having a bucket of flowers and a coconut in it too...She was so excited that she was about 2 fall at d last step when Laksh hold her. All d flowers fell on them, They had a continuous eye lock until d coconut fell on Laksh's head.

They unhold each other after that when Laksh said: AAAhhh...

All looked there.

Shekhar scolded Ragini: Ragini...Kya hai yeh? How could u be so careless??/

Laksh (looking Ragini feel crying): Ahh...Uncle. Uski galti nahi thi. That was an accident...Plz ignore...

All goes well and Parvati asks maheswari family to rest and return in evening. All agrees. After sometime Raglak along with Swasan went to terrace to take fresh air..Where:

Ragini: Everybody excepted u it does not means that I accepted for my Sis...U have 2 answer my three questions...

Sanskaar: OK.

Ragini: U know how 2 wash clothes????

Laksh: Clothes???U don't know my brother...all washer men take tips from him 2 wash d clothes better...

Ragini(Ignoring him):U know how 2 cook food?

Laksh: Food? You  r asking about food? U don't know my brother...once his aim was 2 become a cook...Our servants...even some hotel managements takes tips from him...

Ragini(again avoiding): U know Singing and dancing na???My sis is very fond of it...

Laksh: HAhahahaha...u don't know my brother he is a very good dancer...

Ragini: Now, another question...

Laksh:wait...tumne bola Three questions...

Ragini: Yeh aap ke liye hai...

Laksh: Mere liye? Han han pucho pucho..

Ragini: Tum kya unke naukar ho????

Laksh: What?//No...

Ragini: To phir unke question ka answer aap kyun de rahe ho???? MR. Naughty Monkey???

Laksh: CHuhiya kahanki...How dare u call me that?? Wo b mere bhai k saamne????

Ragini: THen how can u call me chuhiya in front of my sis...???

Laksh: Don't forget Miss Ragini Garodia.. Main ladke wala hun

Ragini: Toh kya hua? Mere liye aap sirf ek Monkey ho, aur hamesha rahoge... Jungli Bandar!

 Laksh gave an irritating look.


To be continued...



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Posted: 24 April 2016 at 3:37am | IP Logged
Awesome update next one soon plss

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Posted: 24 April 2016 at 3:46am | IP Logged
thanks fr pm

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dewcute IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 24 April 2016 at 4:04am | IP Logged
The update was lovely just like u

I enjoyed reading it...!

Update soon

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Posted: 24 April 2016 at 5:06am | IP Logged
I love their bickering. Although I don't know what Annapurna is gonna do to them. Superb update. Laughed a lot. Do update soon and thanks for the pm

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Senoritaamor IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 24 April 2016 at 5:07am | IP Logged
Shiri lovely update. Raglak ki sweet fights.
Thanks for the pm dearHug

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Posted: 24 April 2016 at 5:44am | IP Logged
Awesome update Smile
Loved it
Can't wait to read next part
Please update soon

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