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*New* AsYa OS "Kuch Toh Tha Tere Mere Darmiyaan" - Page 7

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AkaiBara
Ashii @AkaiBara IF-Sizzlerz Inactive
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Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by kritz4ever


Lovely os 

thank you
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AkaiBara
Ashii @AkaiBara IF-Sizzlerz Inactive
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Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by suganti


beautiful os.
zoya's emotions was described beautifully..brilliant.


thank you dear 
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Binzzz
Binzzz @Binzzz IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by AkaiBara



binshi... asad didn't do anything yaar... we don't know his POV so we can't blame him

yeah we can hope zoya move on ASAP

In Sha Allah

thank you so much for a lovely review 

Yeah..that's also correct...
But what about this sudden decision..y r they not bothered about telling the reason to Zoya...
Yeah...In Sha Allah...
My pleasure ashii😃
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AkaiBara
Ashii @AkaiBara IF-Sizzlerz Inactive
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Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by binuuu



Yeah..that's also correct...
But what about this sudden decision..y r they not bothered about telling the reason to Zoya...
Yeah...In Sha Allah...
My pleasure ashii😃

to be honest i don't know the story of other side

girl's story effected me so much that i decided to put it in words

so don't know Asad's POV at all
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AkaiBara
Ashii @AkaiBara IF-Sizzlerz Inactive
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Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by Aimer_vous


Superb dear👏

thank you
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IAdoreYou
IAdoreYou @IAdoreYou IF-Stunnerz
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Posted: 7 years ago
Dearest Ashii    😊 😊
First of all really sorry for the late reply 😭 😭
Was a bit busy due to exams .
Coming to your OS , it was a treat to read your OS.     👏
👏 for the banner .
Its just beautiful . Loved it .
The OS was such a heart touching piece.
Amazingly written and beautifully portrayed every bit of OS .
It takes a lot to write such piece and you have done it so well.
I just felt while reading that you have written this by putting your feets in Zoya's shoes.
The way you showed Zoya's excitement for her marriage , the way she falls for him ,that 26 days ...
Truly great job 👏 👏
Zoya's pain after her parents said , "Its over"
Beautifully written Zoya's monologue .
I do know it is one shot but would love to read its continuation if you wish to write   😊 😊
Stay blessed and Keep writing .
- Harshada
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jas91
jas91 @jas91 IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by AkaiBara



thank you so much bestu

i'm glad meri effort rang laayi 😛

P.S reema really did a great job



Thanku😲
han rang laayi 👏 but girl need 2 stop thinking over it now

Undoubtedly its fab😉
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AkaiBara
Ashii @AkaiBara IF-Sizzlerz Inactive
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Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by jas91





Thanku😲
han rang laayi 👏 but girl need 2 stop thinking over it now

Undoubtedly its fab😉

thank you bola kyun k mai kch or expect kr rahi thi or jab kch samjh nahi aaya tu kya bola so i wrote TY 🤣

fab toh hona hi tha bestu kiska hoon 😎
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Binzzz
Binzzz @Binzzz IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by AkaiBara



to be honest i don't know the story of other side

girl's story effected me so much that i decided to put it in words

so don't know Asad's POV at all
Ohh...
Then it's okay ashii...koi ni...
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AkaiBara
Ashii @AkaiBara IF-Sizzlerz Inactive
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Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by Alvapriya


Dearest Ashii    😊 😊
First of all really sorry for the late reply 😭 😭
Was a bit busy due to exams .
Coming to your OS , it was a treat to read your OS.     👏
👏 for the banner .
Its just beautiful . Loved it .
The OS was such a heart touching piece.
Amazingly written and beautifully portrayed every bit of OS .
It takes a lot to write such piece and you have done it so well.
I just felt while reading that you have written this by putting your feets in Zoya's shoes.
The way you showed Zoya's excitement for her marriage , the way she falls for him ,that 26 days ...
Truly great job 👏 👏
Zoya's pain after her parents said , "Its over"
Beautifully written Zoya's monologue .
I do know it is one shot but would love to read its continuation if you wish to write   😊 😊
Stay blessed and Keep writing .
- Harshada

hey no need to say sorry

u r always welcome here

and thank you so so sooo much for such an amazing reply

i'm really thankful to u

and yes i wrote it considering myself on behalf of zoya and that's why it came out this good

i don't know but maybe i'll try something...

thanks again dear 😛
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