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Posted: 24 April 2016 at 1:44pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 9:43pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by LiveLoveLaugh96

Awww

Idk what im more sad about: the ending or the fact that this is the last story of the week Cry
But anyway, loved it as usual
I dont think i'll ever hate ur stories LOL

But i love them; they're short, sweet and makes me connect to the characters instantly 

Pls pls write more after ur exams.
You're amazing at these Clap

Thanks for your time and appreciation, Mahirah.
Turns out it was not the last but probably second last for sure. 
Glad that you like my work. 
Will write longer and better ones once my exams are done!! (:

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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 9:44pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...Shibu...

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Thanks a tonnn for all the comments!! (:
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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 9:45pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by moonlight3094

nice oneSmile

Thanks for readinggg!! (:
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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 9:49pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by _innocent_

Awww...Poor Yug, she is trying to dictate how he should feel, and she feels the same but not ready to accept it...And how sad, that the moment he wanted to remember forever as a beautiful moment ended up being worst than a nightmare, and one that he would rather forget than indulge upon!
Good Job Tannu! :DEmbarrassed

Thanks for the detailed reply and commending me, Aisha!! Means a lot coming from you.
The thing is that she cannot keep anything ahead of her family and he is tired of holding back his love. 
At some point the pain will go away, but the scar of memory will stay. What was expected did not happen but maybe this is for the better. Saved by a heartbreak from a person who is not ready to embrace her feelings just now. She will come around at some time, but this is clearly not the right moment for this (:

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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 9:52pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sabihaa.

I've been reading (devouring) your writing, and all I can do is just sigh in awe. Your writing is so clear and concise; I can absolutely feel every emotion while I read this.
The storyline itself is au, and yet in a way it still works as something that could happen in the show - if of course half the leads weren't such idiots of course. 

Thank you for such a wonderful OS, and all the best for your exams!

OMFG. Appreciation from a professional writer herself. Thanks a tonnn!! I genuinely loved your story, believe me, my work can nowhere match up to that. Thanks for the exam wishes!! Still have some to go. As for wishing this for the show, I guess it is already on track now (:

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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 9:54pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Katori

This was lovely. The way you portrayed Yug's feelings and his pain for Kaali's rejection were very good. 

Thanks a tonnn!! Cannot wait for you to update your story. Came on the forum anticipating that today. Please give me a chance to compliment your story tooo!! (:
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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 9:55pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by PrincessAshVik

Aww this was so sad:(:( But beautiful nonetheless :)

Thanks a tonnn. Heartbreak is a part of the process. Better to be hurt than left at the altar where he'd have to face shame and be compelled to marry Gauri instead (:

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