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Rishbala FF: WANTED !- Chapter 8 updated on pg.81 (30/9/16) (Page 34)

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Posted: 27 July 2016 at 11:55pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by PriyaCherry

Thanks for PM,Dear.Smile Welcome Smile
It was Amazing Part.Smile
The Whole Conversation were so Nice.Smile Thank you
Who Killed Balraj? Wait and watch Wink
The Story is getting so Interesting.Smile
Please Update Next Part soon.Smile Trying yaar...
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
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Posted: 27 July 2016 at 11:55pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by .Zoya.

Interesting Update
Thanks dear!
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Posted: 27 July 2016 at 11:57pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by v.p.joshi

Superb update 
Thanks varsha Big smile
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Posted: 27 July 2016 at 11:58pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by radhadd

Awesome update. ...waiting what thrilling and twist is coming. ...thank you for pm. ...
Thanks for liking it Big smile
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Posted: 28 July 2016 at 12:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by RagingBlaze

Chubby cheeks , Dimpled chin                                                 Rosy lips , teeth within
Curly hair very fair, ice are blue lovely too..,
LOL!
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Posted: 28 July 2016 at 12:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by RagingBlaze

Sorry for unresing my comment so late but I really can't help it because I had to read this part of your story twice to actually comprehend that what was going on . No no no the part was not that bad that to understand it I had to read it twice BUT I just couldnt get this chapter into my head that is why I had to read it twice because your Part 2 of this chapter ended somewhere else and Part 3 of the chapter had no connection to the previous chapter even a bit . The ending of the 2nd part was with some Black Man rescuing a girl but this chap starts with some women who is forced to entertain men's . The only connecting part in both the chapetrs were the Ballu scene . So he is dead . I dint expected his death sequence this soon but its OK since this is how you must have planned the story . Let' see what RK does now bcz he was working hard on this case but unfortunately Ballu died . Lets see who is the killer in future episodes . The part was really intriguing and waiting to see a fast update from you so that things becomes clear a bit because I'm actually clueless as to what is going on (IDK if something is wrong with me or you actually presented your readers with a jigsaw puzzle to solve . So in this part of your story I have nothing much to comment since I'm seriously clueless as to what is happening therefore I will be waiting for the next part to see if I can join any dot or not . Sorry Sowmi baby for dissapointing you with such discouraging words ). But the way you wrote the part was really appreciable and you did really well in that . Good going girl !!! 

Its ok dear! I am a budding writer. So feel free to criticize me. Then only I can correct my fault next time. Yeah I indeed confused everyone. Hope I will clear something in the next part...
Come on you are not discouraging! I feel sad that being new here am being so irregular Ouch
Thanks for your appreciation Big smile

I thought to write in between but got confused as I am not used to your paragraph replies Embarrassed
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Posted: 28 July 2016 at 12:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mahimesha

 getting more interestingBig smile
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Posted: 28 July 2016 at 12:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ananya2010

Fantastic update, loved it. Thank you Smile
The story is getting interesting with each update.
Curious to know what happens next.  Aww...Keep guessing
Continue soon, shall be waiting for the next  update.
Thanks for the PM welcome

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