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Rishbala FF: WANTED !- Chapter 8 updated on pg.81 (30/9/16) (Page 3)

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Posted: 23 April 2016 at 2:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 4ever4love

very mysterious.  Good luck.
Thanks for your feedback julieSmileSmile

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Posted: 23 April 2016 at 2:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by cutemindpavi

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Hello madhuballians !! Am souwmiya ! First time I have fostered my courage to write a story in this forum. My inspiration is all the writers of this forum. Please do like and share your reviews. It would mean a lot for a newbie like me!

I dedicate the first part of the story to sudha akka (madhurish) my sweet sister ! she is the backbone of my writing !!

 

                                   PROLOGUE

Hey you am I boring you?' asked madhu pouting

No sweetheart am forever at your service' said sultan eyeing her

Shall we get into business baby?' Asked madhu seductively

Sultan grinned like a predator. Sweetheart never thought that you would be so bold'

Well  expect the unexpected

   The beautiful hotel atmosphere was filled with rich aroma and perfumes. The scented candles and the sexy lady lying on the bed further enhanced the beauty. Neither madhu nor sultan know what's gonna happen next. But something drastic is gonna happen definitely... the unexpected...

After the candle light dinner sultan got up from his seat and neared madhu. He came closer to her while madhu moved backward blushing. Sultan was having difficulty controlling his wild hormones. To be exact they met only a week before but now they have progressed to reach this level. He is not a saint. Yet he hasn't longed for any woman as he did for madhu. He once again admired her from top to bottom . She was all his. Yes his, only his...

Madhu initaiated the first step. She knew what's gonna happen next. Quickly she hugged him. Sultan grinned with excitement. He isn't  a patient man. He held her robe. At the very moment madhu froze. She moved back abruptly.

No no not now ...how ..how come...no she blabbered

What happened' sultan asked without a tinge of concern in his voice clearly displeased that she is postponing it.

Sultan go out...he shouldn't find..'sullu

Who would find madhu ?'

Madhu worriedly looked at him and said my parents are here. I can feel their presence sultan...'

Its no joke madhu. How do you know ? you don't believe me right.'

Shut up' madhu spat out furiously. When I say something  you have to trust me. I expect you to follow it.' Noticing his glare she looked down please go out.

Without a second glance sultan moved out. Madhu calmed her violent heart beat. Parents...she grinned...no she knew who was there. She knew, just knew who it was. No one has ever made her feel like that. When he is around even without seeing him she knew he is there. That is enough to bring peace to her heart. Her love was true. Her heart knew that he also loves her. But she never heeded to her heart. She followed the command of her brain mechanically. She knew there was no happy future for them. She needs to follow her goal, her very meaning of her life. But how could she confess her love to him ? When the biggest obstacle in her life was him. Even now he had come to meet her. But how could she face him ? she started sweating. She took nervous steps towards the exit door. She came to the parking lot only to face those mystic dark eyes. Even in that situation, his gaze made her weak, her heart skipped a thousand beats. The admiration and love in his eyes made her want to hide in his embrace. At the very moment she wanted to escape into her dream world, where there was on one between them. She looked at his eyes to confess her forbidden love but was pulled back to reality by his soft electrifying touch. He was about to say something excitedly, when madhu turned back as always as she had done. Her heart broke seeing his pain. But...no...she couldn't turn back.

She walked further to escape him but her heart wished to see him again. She turned back , to see him standing there. And once again she was hypnotized by his magical eyes. Once again she fell in love with him, with her RK, her true love , her soulmate...

TO BE CONTINUED...

 

Readers it is a crime thriller story. But I hope it doesn't turn out to be that much of a dark story as I hate violence. This is my first try in this genre so please give your valuable feedback...

                            


Loved it dear... 
 Glad you loved it pavi !
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Posted: 23 April 2016 at 2:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by poojitha96

interesting plot loved it tq for the pm
Thanks for the feedback buddy !
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Posted: 23 April 2016 at 2:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sapnaf52

Hurrya ! one more new writer here ! But a half cooked writer LOL
& one more new story on rishbala
congrats sowmi,for story
write more on rishbala will definitely do ! Thanks Smile
Interesting start dear ,
excited for read,
waiting for update . sorry dear you have to wait for a month. My last exam is on 29th but will try to come here between !
update soon thanxs for pm
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Posted: 23 April 2016 at 2:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by snehalata

Wooo new story
Thanks for pm welcome dear !


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Posted: 23 April 2016 at 2:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by luvvivian286

Awesome concept  thank you dear !!
Continue soon will be late sana. Let's see..

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Posted: 23 April 2016 at 2:23am | IP Logged
intriguing start

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Posted: 23 April 2016 at 3:39am | IP Logged
Interesting prologue.
very good first attempt.
what is Madhu's plan? Who is RK?
will be waiting for the next update.

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