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~ Building Life ~ (A Swadarsh FF) ~ Note, Page 76 (Page 69)

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Posted: 02 August 2016 at 12:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by olsen_124

Waiting for the update priti...SmileSmile

Hi Bonny! Last week was a stressful week work wise. I will try and update it this week for sure. Smile

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Posted: 04 August 2016 at 12:42pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Dumpling

Adarsh so nicely explained his reactions in that situation n asad too made him.understand what freedom meant to him.nicely written.

Thanks. They are all super smart, aren't they LOL
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Posted: 04 August 2016 at 12:43pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sana_Jannat

its wonderful priti Clap
Adarsh-Asad convo Thumbs Up LOL then SwAdarsh convo ,clearing confusion is one of the things i liked here.

Thanks Sana. I am this kind of person. Don't like misunderstandings, and if I am at fault, i apologize before anyone and everyone. So, my characters are also like that (at-least most of them). Big smile

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Posted: 04 August 2016 at 12:45pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Stylikson

Res
Unres..

Sorry sorry for such a late reply..Cry
This part was light and amazing.. Thank God Swadheenta and Adarsh cleared out there differences.. Smile
And Asad was amazing.. His love for her sister..Clap
Update soon Heart

Thank you Megs. Yes. I have said this before. I cannot write more than 2 or 3 serious updates. I feel the need to write something light in-between on my own... LOL

I am glad you enjoyed it. 

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Posted: 04 August 2016 at 12:47pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by kennashreign

Lovely update!! I loved the conversation between Asad and Adarsh. It was believable. I also like the part where Swadheenta talks about acceptance of the families. 
Looking forward to the next update.


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Thank you. 

I truly missed not seeing Asad and Adarsh bond in the show. Swa was so important to the both of them. They should have been closer. I hope I can make that happen in my story Embarrassed

About the families, it was one of our common complaints that while Swa accepted everyone as they are in Adarsh's house, he did not accept maamu and maami. The circumstances were different ofcourse, but it would be nice if he had made that effort to understand them a bit more. It will happen in my story Big smile
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Posted: 04 August 2016 at 12:49pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by olsen_124

Oh such a lovely update.I loved it completely.

Loved Asad and Adarsh' convo.Such a mature one and Adarsh and Swadheenta's conversation made  me go completely emotional.

Fantastic update Priti.
Thanx for PM
Update Soon.

Thanks Bonny.

Asad is a bit impulsive, and he understands that Adarsh, Abhay etc are much older and much more accomplished than him. He hence goes to them for advise normally. But he knew Freedom was hurt, and no matter who hurts her, he is her brother and has to protect her. I hence wanted to write that bit where Asad talks to Adarsh and asks him to take good care of his sister Embarrassed

I hope it made you happy emotional. Smile
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Posted: 04 August 2016 at 12:50pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Aimsha

Fabulous part really enjoyed a lot maza agaya  thanks for the update dear will wait eagerly for next 

Thanks. The next part is ready and will be up in a bit. It is not a Swadarsh update. I hope you will still like it. 
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Posted: 04 August 2016 at 12:51pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by MysticRiver

awesome update...

Thanks a bunch. Smile

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