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~ Building Life ~ (A Swadarsh FF) ~ Note, Page 76 (Page 22)

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Posted: 23 May 2016 at 7:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Nyx-

lovely
thanks for pmSmile

Thanks. Glad you liked it. 

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Posted: 23 May 2016 at 7:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Cuty16

It was very good... mamu all time fav type... loved the confession part... will wait for d next one... 

Hey, thanks. Maamu is my all time fav too.. Smile


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Posted: 23 May 2016 at 7:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by yawfeh

The most cute n adorable character is adhuEmbarrassedDay Dreaming
ConfessionBlushingDancing
Pree waiting for the updateEmbarrassed

Adarsh is sweet, I agree... and very cute too.. LOL

Sure. Will try and update soon. Thanks Gayu Embarrassed

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Posted: 23 May 2016 at 12:15pm | IP Logged
Totally loved it..
Mamu is so so understanding and the convos between adarsh and mamu are so well written..mamu is one of my favourite character in the show too..the way he speaks makes ppl warm towards him..be it swa or adarsh..
Adarsh's confession was so beautiful and it was portrayed beautifully too..adarsh practicing what he'll say and swa regaining consciousness just at dat time made the moment more sweeter..his words and her tears confessed their feelings for each other..even imagining both of them in my mind while reading this makes it even more special and wonderful..
Thank you for such an amazing update and ff..this is one of the best ff's i have read..
Waiting for swa's answer and her confession too..and definitely for the swadarsh moments to come.. :) :)


Edited by Sharmi_swadarsh - 23 May 2016 at 12:16pm

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Posted: 23 May 2016 at 12:26pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sharmi_swadarsh

Totally loved it..
Mamu is so so understanding and the convos between adarsh and mamu are so well written..mamu is one of my favourite character in the show too..the way he speaks makes ppl warm towards him..be it swa or adarsh..
Adarsh's confession was so beautiful and it was portrayed beautifully too..adarsh practicing what he'll say and swa regaining consciousness just at dat time made the moment more sweeter..his words and her tears confessed their feelings for each other..even imagining both of them in my mind while reading this makes it even more special and wonderful..
Thank you for such an amazing update and ff..this is one of the best ff's i have read..
Waiting for swa's answer and her confession too..and definitely for the swadarsh moments to come.. :) :)

Thanks Sharmi. I have planned something special for Swa's confession. Hopefully I can do justice to that part. Let me see. 

Mamu is my fav character too. He is so good with everyone... amazing. I truly like him. His is one character that I have kept as is from the show. The CV's did such a perfect job, I didn't have to do anything else to make him perfect LOL

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Posted: 23 May 2016 at 7:20pm | IP Logged
Clap wow! Such a cute confession Clap
Though it wasn't filmy but i liked it ..
Adarsh &his action LOL
Practice looking at wall LOL keep it up Thumbs Up

Swadheenta ,she heard all this just after regaining sense .
Mama such cute person Smile

Thank u for sending me PM Smile

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Posted: 24 May 2016 at 1:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sana_J.

Clap wow! Such a cute confession Clap
Though it wasn't filmy but i liked it ..
Adarsh &his action LOL
Practice looking at wall LOL keep it up Thumbs Up

Swadheenta ,she heard all this just after regaining sense .
Mama such cute person Smile

Thank u for sending me PM Smile

Thanks Sana. 

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Posted: 24 May 2016 at 1:45am | IP Logged
hi just came across the ff
and read all the parts in one go
its lovely
the way you planned there meet , hurt , outburst, realization, friendship and finally cute confession
everything is super awesome
picture perfect
what i liked most  title for each part..
you are fab writer
keep writing more and update soon


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