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SS- Manna, The Lovebirds (Page 2)

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 8:43am | IP Logged
Part-1 The selection
Anna, Manav and Sharad were sitting in a room, breathing in a tensed environment. Anna was crying, as Sharad finally asked her whom does she love. 

Anna- Sharad, ye tum kya...

Sharad- Nahi, nahi Anna! Aaj to is paar ya us paar ho kar hi rahega.

Manav was crying too. He wasn't angry at Anna or Sharad. He was too waiting for the answer, but wasn't forcing her to.

After some time, she looked at Manav, and he nodded. Then she looked at Sharad he nodded no.

Anna- OK! I'm sorry Manav! Magar mai tujhe hurt nahi karna chahti thi. Aur tumne bhi... Sharad!!!

She announced his name, much to theamazement of Sharad, himself.

Anna-... Mana...

Manav already left, crying. Anna was hurt too at what she said.

Anna- Sharad! Mai tumse bahut gussa hu! Tumhe pata hai, usne mujhe khud tumhaara naam bolne ko bola tha! Aur ek tum ho! Idiot!

She left, angry with Sharad. 

Next morning, Manav saw Anna, being angry at Sharad. He ran downstairs, and went towards Sharad. Anna had already left.

Sharad- Manav, mujhe maa...

Manav- Nahi, nahi Sharad! Vo to jo kismat me likha hai vohi hoga. (Wipes a tear) Achcha mai tumhaari madad karta hu. Dekho...

He prepared a plan, in which Manav will first try to convince Anna, or if she does not get convinced, then they would choose plan-B.

Anna- Manav, yahi baat to mujhe tumhaari pasand hai... Tum doosro ke liye khud ko bhi musibat me daalne ko tayaar ho jaate ho. Aur ek voh hai idiot! Apne benefit ke liye kuch bhi kar leta hai. Magar Manav, tum use jaakar keh do, ki mai usse baat nahi karungi, matlab nahi KARUNGI!!!!!!!

Manav returned with a heavy heart. Now how will the lovebirds be together?? Whats the plan-B? To know any details, stay tuned!

To be continued...

Ok I know, my writing skills ain't that good, and its very very small, but atleast read it. The messenger work my bro will do.

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 8:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Krish58

Me mujeh chahiye
Hmm.. Started Krishu..LOL though its small..

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 8:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by --Shamoo--

by manna do u mean manav ana ?
hmm ..intresting ..plz start it asap
Ys... StartedSmile

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 8:56am | IP Logged
Nice update ...  Kunsh ..waiting tovknow what's plan B..bdw did here she knows ke woh log aliens hai.  And yes thoda prolouge dena it will look good 

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 8:56am | IP Logged
nice start...
Anna angry at sharad as usual..
manav as usual dariyadil..
continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm..

PS: Ku darling dont think that u r not a gud writer..
atleast u r courageous to write...

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 8:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Krish58

Nice update ...  Kunsh ..waiting tovknow what's plan B..bdw did here she knows ke woh log aliens hai.  And yes thoda prolouge dena it will look good 
Thanks.. Ya she knew. Ok prologue I'll give
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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 9:01am | IP Logged
nice update
continue soon

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 9:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by coolhi1988

nice start...
Anna angry at sharad as usual..
manav as usual dariyadil..
continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm..

PS: Ku darling dont think that u r not a gud writer..
atleast u r courageous to write...
Thanks for compliment... And thanks for appreciating my work... And again thanks for nicknameLOL

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