RagLak: scenario after Swara's memory loss..

Radhadreamlove IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 6:13am | IP Logged
disclaimer:it is just a scenerio..kind of how I want a to see...I am not intended to hurt any fandom.
I am madly thinking how will be Swara's memory loss track...like it will be too good better best to see Laksh looking at Ragini while Swara will be wanting to grab his attention..
Swara: Laksh..aaj hum kahin baahar chalein?
Laksh is looking at Ragini, who is standing at the room's door n has tears in her eyes..for Laksh...for Swara..
Laksh(not paying heeds,jz looking at Ragini): haan
Swara: phir shopping. .
Laksh (again the same gestures): haan
Swara notices that he is not interested..
Swara: Laksh, tum sun rhe ho na?
Laksh(same): haan..
Swara(frustrated): main tumhe paagal lagti hoon!!!
Laksh: haan..

     kahin pe nigahein
                    kahin pe nishaana

Then Sanskar comes outside the room...a tear skips off his..Swara feels something different but thinks...my laksh is making me such a feeling... n immediately hugs him...
Ragini closes her eyes to let the tears flow n Laksh clenches his fists..he pushes swara..n looks at Ragini
              Main yahaan tu wahaan
                         Zindgi hai kahaan

Laksh: WTH hell Swara!!!! Tum...(he looks at Ragini)
Ragini was shaking her head in no...plz don't...he softens his expressions while looking at Ragini... just because he loves Ragini eternally..
          Kyonki itna pyaar tumko
                         kartein hain hum

Swara: k..k..kya hua Laksh?
Laksh: nhi kuchh nhi...woh jz main ...woh...haan...agar koi aa jata toh..dekho darwaaza khula hai..
Swara turns to the door n Ragini immediately hides..
Swara mischievously: haan toh darwaaza band kar dete...
B4 she could complete Laksh goes out of the room...he sees that Ragini is not there..
              Kaash woh pal paida hi na ho
                    Jis pal mein nazar tu na aaye

Laksh: Ragini?
He goes to her room..n she is not there...he goes to the garden n she is not there...
Laksh: Ragini!!!! Ragini!!! He is roaming in the garden calling her name...
              tu kahaan kho gaya
                         dil tanha ho gaya

Finally he hears some sobs..
He whispers: Ragini...
He runs to the voice... Ragini was sitting outside the house in a small mandir, crying holding two photos..
Laksh panics at that and runs towards her..he starts speaking madly moving his hands on her face..
Laksh: Ragini..tum ro kyon rhi ho..tu..tum theek ho na ...kisine kuchh kaha kya..bataao na..
              teri bechaini ka teri tanhaayee ka
                    Ehsaas hai mujhko sun..
                    Main jo saath tere hoon phir tujhe hai kaisa gum
                    dard baant lenge hum sun

She frees her face from his hand and wipes her tears..
Ragini: nhi toh Laksh, humein kya hona hai..hum bilkul theek hain..
n she smiles
              Muskaata yeh chehra, deta hai jo pehra
              Jaane chhupata kya dil ka samandar

Laksh: kis'se jhooth bol rhi ho Ragini?
N she starts crying vigorously.. she sits at the ground while crying... Laksh sits with her...
Laksh: bas Ragini...plz...mujhse aur nhi hoga...I'll tell her everything..
Ragini: no..no..NO Laksh..u won't...it's the question of her life..n I can't risk it...Laksh she is the only one who stood with me during my hard times..n now it's hers then I won't step back..no u can't do that..
Laksh: and my life Ragini..?.you are my life..I can't live without u..n if swara's memory doesn't come back then?
Ragini: then m ready to sacrifice my love..
Laksh: but I'm not..[angry] who the hell do u think you are...I'm not sacrificing my love for anyone... pehle u came in my life..u wanted me to love u...idiot... tum...aaahhh!! Are u ...n now I love u then u want me to sacrifice my love ...
              sau dard hain sau raahtein..
                         sab mila dilnashin ek tu hi nah

Laksh: u know what..(shouts) u never loved me...
Ragini cried: no Laksh..
Laksh: yes Ragini...
And he turns to go ...he cries silently so that Ragini doesn't hear..but Ragini senses it..
Ragini: Laksh plz mat royiye..
Laksh again thinks to kiss ragini's forehead last..but..he doesn't..He just goes wiping his tears all the way..
He goes between the road n shouts with his all voice in the rain...the pain was more than his scream..
              baar baar ron akhiyaan
                            tainu jo na vekh sakiyaan

Here in the temple ragini cries badly..the two photographs fall from her hand..
                    chhan se jo toote koi sapna
                            jag soona soona laage jag soona soona laage
                         koi rahe na jab apna

The two pictures are focussed n they r of SwaRagini and RagLak..

That's it guys...I know it wasn't good at all..n I messed up with the song...actually I didn't write any song fully..it was jz the lines taken to depict the situations...sorry for boring u..
But this is how I want the story to proceed..n then RagLak n SwaSan union n all...we have to admit that when it comes to reunion CVs and RS are expert in it..u see, SwaSan mandir reunion, SheMishtha's reunion, RagLak extraordinary and knives n slaps reunion...
So like ragini in dilemna n dharmsankat kinda...n at last both speaking sorry to each other..

Bye bye!!!

              yeh moh moh ke dhaage
              teri ungliyon se jaa uljhe
              koi toh toh na laage
              Kis tarah girha ye suljhe

Edited by Radhadreamlove - 23 April 2016 at 12:22am

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reeyacute Senior Member

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Posts: 673

Posted: 22 April 2016 at 6:20am | IP Logged
Swaras cant remember laksh ...she did not love laksh... during swa...lak she always thought abt ragini
I think swara will hv a deep inner feeling for sanskar and will feel thst her heart is pulling her towards him only not laksh

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Radhadreamlove IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 7725

Posted: 22 April 2016 at 6:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by reeyacute

Swaras cant remember laksh ...she did not love laksh... during swa...lak she always thought abt ragini
I think swara will hv a deep inner feeling for sanskar and will feel thst her heart is pulling her towards him only not laksh
hey don't be upset. ..m really sorry if u didn't like it...it was jz like an OS..a RagLak one...so as a RagLak fan I want story to go like this..jz that's it...

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Posts: 1629

Posted: 22 April 2016 at 6:45am | IP Logged
I Really Liked It Dear and This Importance of Raglak Only Happens in FFs or Os lol it Can't Happen in Show lol Any Way It My Kissmat Stucked To This Biased Show And I loved The Way U Written Emotions of Raglak Well Done Yaar thanks for this ;)

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rbb1 IF-Achieverz

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Posts: 103971

Posted: 22 April 2016 at 7:54am | IP Logged
Aww this is really nice Neha hope something like this happens in the show but I guess we have to wait and see

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