Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee


Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

OS : Love Me Like u Do (completed) (Page 16)

Keepdreaming IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 28 April 2016 at 7:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by priya_21

ab maan ki agni parikhsa hai dekhte hai wo kya krta hai[ waiting
agniparikhsa haha thnx di

Keepdreaming IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 28 April 2016 at 7:22pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Geetdrashti

Amazing update
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Posted: 29 April 2016 at 5:05am | IP Logged

                     Last part

             " Maan i think we should go London for wedding shopping what say ? "

                 Sameera was keep blabbing about her dream wedding but there Maan was least interest. He was just keep looking at entrance for Geet

            " do whatever you want " he simply told her . He was getting restless because party already started but geet didn't come yet 'she said she would come just hope she didn't change her mind ' Maan thought 'no Maan she promised you she will surely come and you have to convince her at any cost'...

      Sameera was getting bored for not getting better attention from him. She touch his face make him look at her and said pouting her lips " where are you lost. I am saying something you are not even giving proper answers". ...

        " Stop touching me and i have better things to do other than entertain you " saying this he pushed her hand harshly and left her side ...

           If it was another girl she would mind hearing her boyfriend talking like this but Sameera never mind as its not new to her. Maan always behave like this and she never say anything because she just wants to marry the richest person of India and for that she can tolerate anything be it insult. She is damn sure tonight her dream will come true...

          One hour left but no sign of Geet. Maan was about to call her when he heard Adi " finally Geet you are here. We were waiting for you so long ".

                  Pinky came forward and hugged her best friend " Where have you been from past week ? Was missing you badly "...

       He turned slowly and forzen seeing his Geet in red saree just one word came to his lips "pari" but soon became angry seeing Rishi with her. His blood boiled 'what is he doing here ? ' ...

       She saw Maan coming toward them "good evening sir " she politely greeted but his eyes was on Rishi . Seeing this she hurriedly introduced "sir Rishi my friend i hope you remember i talked about him yesterday and Rishi yeh Maan sir hai meri boss".

                    Rishi smiled shyly thinking 'Geetji kitni achci hai mera bare main apne boss ko bataya' he gave his hand   "hello sir nice to meet you "

               Maan didn't care about shake hand just said sternly " wish i could say the same for you but can't . Looks like last day beating was not enough ".

                    Rishi confused " ji shreemaanji app kya kehe rahe hai hume kuch samajh mein nahi araha hai" ...

        Geet quickly come forward seeing situation can getting worse " kuch nahi Rishi lets go enjoy the party " but before she go Maan held her hand tightly and dragged her to a corner

                   " what are you doing sir ? Sab dekh raha hai. Leave my hand "...

      " what i am doing? what are you doing? Why did you bring that monkey here? What you want to prove? " Maan said angrily still not leaving her hands... With great difficulty she come out from his grip

                     " his name is Rishi and i didn't bring him here to prove anything i just want to remind you about my condition and tell you how serious i am about it " she told him firmly.

                   Maan's eyes blazed " listen to me carefully kuch bhi ho jaye i will do what i want most and you can't stop me " ...

     " you are wrong sir. I am not here to stop you . I came because you want me to support you exchange of my marriage with Rishi that's all "

               Maan gave tight smile " marriage that too with that monkey huh that's not going to..." before he complete Sameera came there held his hand

                     " what are you doing here Maan lets go people are waiting lets do the big thing ".

               Geet gave a tight smile " yes sir you should go everyone is waiting for you".

       He gave her a last look and went with Sameera . She keep looking at their joint hands controlled her tears 'nahi Geet maat ro. You can't cry for this man who give more importance to his revenge than his love '...

          She saw them going to the center looking at the guest finally Maan said " hello everyone thank you so much for coming here to celebrate my success but tonight i am not just celebrating the success of my business but also my personal life. So i want to share my happiness with you all. I would love to introduce you with the love of my life ,who is none other than " ...

       he turned to Sameera . Geet closed her eyes tight not able to see this , unknown to drop of tears fall but she wipe it harshly trying to make a brave face ...

                   " Sameera " he called as she was holding his hand tightly looking at him with a big smile " leave my hand " Maan said with the look of no argument she gets confused but leave his hand ...

      He slowly went to Geet took her hand and looking at the guest announced loudly " Geet Handa".

          There is peace drop silent .. He added proudly " she is the girl i am crazy for. She is the one who stole my heart at first sight and she is the solo owner of MSK " .

                    He looked at her lovingly "she is the one whom i love most ". He picked up her hand toward his lips and kissed her fingers slowly , looking back at the guest he declared

                 " I'm very happy to share the news that very soon i am going to marry my lady love Geet" .

               Hearing his announcement two person thought the same ' it's can't be true' one sam who thought it must be her bad dream and Geet but for her it's the most beautiful dream of her life...

     Tears were flowing from her eyes and this time she didnt care to hide them ..." what happen ? Why this tears? " he looks worriedly at her fearing she may reject him again .

               Geet answered didn't believe all this " really choose me "

             He smiled feeling content , wiping her tears he kissed her for head with so much

                  " no i choose US because i truly love you "...

Edited by Keepdreaming - 17 December 2017 at 2:14am

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Posted: 29 April 2016 at 5:06am | IP Logged
Finally last part updated n im feeling so relax . Thank u all for liking my story . Im very surprised and happy seeing the response from u all again thank u for bearing me n my story now enjoy the last part. Guys plz forgive my mistakes plzzz no epi its just a os abb mujhe jaane do:-( mujhe aur nehi likhna n also i dont know what to write more

Edited by Keepdreaming - 29 April 2016 at 8:37am

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Posted: 29 April 2016 at 5:25am | IP Logged
simply brilliant
loved it.

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khwaishfan IF-Addictz

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Posted: 29 April 2016 at 5:47am | IP Logged
hi thanks 4 an awesome OS! superbly written! LP was fab! wonderfully written! Sam annoys Maan! he is waiting 4 Geet! she arrives looking gorgeous n Rishi is with her! Maan angry! Rishi happy Maan knows him! Maan comments n Geet says she is nt here 2 stop him bt to support him as he will support her marriage 2 Rishi! Maan confesses his love n  his marriage 2 Geet! Sam livid n Geet ecstatic! she is in shock! Maan assures her he truly loves her! he chose them over his revenge! lovely end! please post epilogue!

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Posted: 29 April 2016 at 5:59am | IP Logged
yaar i loved it

Big smile

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Posted: 29 April 2016 at 6:09am | IP Logged
Superb Part!!
When i started redaing this part i didn't have hope that Maan will leave the revenge chap...but his Love his Geet made him do so...
Awwee...Maan announced his marriage with GeetDancing
Plzz give cute sa epilogue naDay Dreaming

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