Posted: 22 April 2016 at 10:45pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Tranquility123
I LOVED YOUR DISCLAIMER 'shittest piece I've ever wrote"
Well I can tell you it was from shit dude! I cant stop laughing at how psycho Yuvi is. I can picture the maniac in my head shooting the gun around the house. Daddy Danger ka bhanja after all
This was a nice break from all the mature and giddy shots on Twinj, not that I mind those, but the confrontation between Yuvi an Twinj was awesome. Kunj, the calm an composed as always. I hate the involvement of guns though because the fear arises of the wrong person being shot, which happened. Glad Twinkle was ok though. At one point, I thought you'd go sadist and kill her off, hamari adhuri kahani and all, the end
but you didnt so thank you
DUDE WHEN YOU SHE SAID 'HAAT' ALL I COULD REMEMBER WAS THE TWINJ BEDROOM SOON WITH 'SUN', 'BOLO' AND THEN KUNJ CRACKS THE SIYAPPA JOKE AND SHE PUSHES HIM AWAY SAYING 'DUR HAAT' LIKE I CANT
This was a nice surprise btw. I love when this 'one shot likhne ka bhoot' takes over you
I had to put it there. I literally know I could've done so much better then what I put out.
Oh my God! I am totally in love with Yuvi's sassiness with Kunj at this point like the way he literally questions him and demands answers from him even in the show has me in fits because there scenes are so unbelievable.
LOL there is a lot of ways Anita is similar to Danger Daddy's clan. Take the easy and short route out of everything regardless of it being wrong. Even that chard, despite being morally righteous took wrong routes.
TBH, I actually did leave Twinkle in a hanging position. initially the bullet brushed past her next. My inspiration for that was from Reid's situtaion in Criminal Minds season 8 finale. I would've left Twinkle in comatose or something like that but then I remembered Teddy's fragile heart and gave Twinkle her life back. Don't even bring me back to "acha sun na!" like that phrase gives my heart so many feels!! It is no longer an ordinary phrase. My friend called me out from behind with 'sun na' and I was like OHMYGOSH FEELS GO BACK INSIDE!!
LOL, i have few more written and saved up in my laptop. Would post soon after refining them! Plus hriddey has requested a romantic One Shot so this Sunday, keep a look out!