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TEI OS: Woh Ek Lamha (Page 4)

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 1:18pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by teddyyy

Originally posted by teddyyy

RESSS Embarrassed allah Ka shukar hai, I was so afraid someone else would be first LOL

Yo whatchu means shittiest piece?! This literally had me on the edge of my bed omg I was like what is this psychopath doing?!?! I loved loved loved how you penned out each character, it was all so fitting and despite the chaos going on in the SARNA mansion, everything came together so well! Like oh my goodness, when Kunj couldn't go forward cause the gun was pressed to Twinkle's forehead and then she got hurt and him before silently praying she was in the room. MY FEELS.

Hands down tho my favorite character was Yuvi LMFAO HES SO UNBELIEVABLY INSANE. His sass, his pitiful behavior and his absolute psychoness. Even Anita was done with his shiz. The part that hit me tho was when BOTH men went to her as she fell and like Yuvi being the junoon freak he is even then just didn't want Kunj touching her like what a crazy child.

Thrilling story my friend haha!

PS. Thank God Anand wasn't useless this time.
PPS. LOL yay @ title creds
PPPS. This was amazing, I seriously loved it!


Honestly you and memo just spoil me with your comments. I am not satisfied with the outcome but I needed to share this story out here. 

I kind of wish I could've been more descriptive with Kunj's character and his placement amongst all. 

Yuvi is my favorite and these days he's growing so much on me because Zain is getting better and better with his acting. Thank you much and obviously the title credit had to go to you! I couldn't come up with anything. 

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 1:19pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by .FlightOfEagle.

areeba this was really good,In future I can imagine something like this happening And this was written very well.
I loved the ending!Big smile

Thanks Hriddey! Means a lot! 
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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 1:19pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by arunacc

Areeba, Ab "shittiest" ka meaning badalna padega Smile

hayye, stop being so kind to me!! Embarrassed

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 1:20pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by 17.sonal

Areeba It ws Really very good... 
Yuvraaj being a maniac perfect described...
And his obsession well depicted... 
Kunj and Yuvi's Face off me.. I guess Twinkle is goin to b a victim... 
Probably this will happen in TEI also...
Nyc thot... 
Pls keep writing dear.. 
Looking frward to a new one 

Thank you Sonal! 

I am such a big fan of his obsession honestly and I do see something similar unfolding soon but not exactly like this. 
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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 1:20pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Priyakna

It's not at all shittiest piece LOL
Infact it was really beautiful Heart

Thank you honestly! I am not satisfied with it at all but i needed to put the basic story out here so posted. 
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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 1:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by areeba_blossom

Originally posted by arunacc

Areeba, Ab "shittiest" ka meaning badalna padega Smile

hayye, stop being so kind to me!! Embarrassed
Sahi pakde hai arunaccLOL

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 1:44pm | IP Logged
'Itni jaldi nahi chhord rahi mein tumhari jaan!'  That is SUCH a Twinkle-like statement to make when she has just fought death! LOL


Loved the OS, you're a wonderful writer :D  

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 10:35pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Iansomer1

areeba stop saying this is a shittiest piece ok this was brilliant

All the while i was ok shits going ot hit the fan now
i thought kunj might get hurt for a minute it seemed cherry would

SUCH a thrilling story i  loved ti

The pshyco yuvi u have nailed to the tee

him going k he is touching her so in tone with yuvi

Twinj scene at end was beautiful and so many feels

Over all whole confrontation with yuvi wa ssuperb.
hats of to ur skills.
this was brilliant

Awe you guys are just amazing really for saying all of this! Thank you so much!

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