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TEI OS: Woh Ek Lamha (Page 3)

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 5:54am | IP Logged
Brilliant OS Clap
Loved reading it
Thanks for the PM

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 5:55am | IP Logged
Areeba seriously you are too harsh on yourself, this piece was really good, have to agree with Teddy it had you on the edge of your seat. It was really good I enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed reading all your writings.
Give yourself a pat on the back.Cool
Well DoneThumbs Up

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 7:26am | IP Logged
I LOVED YOUR DISCLAIMER 'shittest piece I've ever wrote" ROFL

Well I can tell you it was from shit dude! I cant stop laughing at how psycho Yuvi is. I can picture the maniac in my head shooting the gun around the house. Daddy Danger ka bhanja after all ROFL

This was a nice break from all the mature and giddy shots on Twinj, not that I mind those, but the confrontation between Yuvi an Twinj was awesome. Kunj, the calm an composed as always. I hate the involvement of guns though because the fear arises of the wrong person being shot, which happened. Glad Twinkle was ok though. At one point, I thought you'd go sadist and kill her off, hamari adhuri kahani and all, the end Stern Smile but you didnt so thank you LOL

DUDE WHEN YOU SHE SAID 'HAAT' ALL I COULD REMEMBER WAS THE TWINJ BEDROOM SOON WITH 'SUN', 'BOLO' AND THEN KUNJ CRACKS THE SIYAPPA JOKE AND SHE PUSHES HIM AWAY SAYING 'DUR HAAT' LIKE I CANT Day Dreaming

This was a nice surprise btw. I love when this 'one shot likhne ka bhoot' takes over you Cool

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 1:10pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sampriti.

Beautiful story Smile 
loved it ..
Thanks for the PM

Thank you Sam! Embarrassed
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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 1:11pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by harshi2000

This is so amazing
Loved it Areeba
It was ThrilllingROFL
Love your stories

Thanks Harshi!! 

LOL I thought it's usually Kunj lightening up the mood, I should have Twinkle adopt to the same routine in the end. LOL
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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 1:13pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sdea

Omg Areeba how do you even think that this is bad. It was omg sooo thrilling I was so scared. The way you portrayed yuvis character I can see this happening sometime in the future.
I loved it. You should write more stories they are always so amazing


Something similar to this might happen but not like this probably. Yuvi is my favorite and he's growing on me so much more these days!! Thank you for your kind words. 
 

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 1:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by amlavs

Wowww... Amazing...
Brilliant ah ...
UV and his pagalpan...

Thanks hun!! 
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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 1:18pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by teddyyy

Originally posted by teddyyy

RESSS Embarrassed allah Ka shukar hai, I was so afraid someone else would be first LOL

Yo whatchu means shittiest piece?! This literally had me on the edge of my bed omg I was like what is this psychopath doing?!?! I loved loved loved how you penned out each character, it was all so fitting and despite the chaos going on in the SARNA mansion, everything came together so well! Like oh my goodness, when Kunj couldn't go forward cause the gun was pressed to Twinkle's forehead and then she got hurt and him before silently praying she was in the room. MY FEELS.

Hands down tho my favorite character was Yuvi LMFAO HES SO UNBELIEVABLY INSANE. His sass, his pitiful behavior and his absolute psychoness. Even Anita was done with his shiz. The part that hit me tho was when BOTH men went to her as she fell and like Yuvi being the junoon freak he is even then just didn't want Kunj touching her like what a crazy child.

Thrilling story my friend haha!

PS. Thank God Anand wasn't useless this time.
PPS. LOL yay @ title creds
PPPS. This was amazing, I seriously loved it!


Honestly you and memo just spoil me with your comments. I am not satisfied with the outcome but I needed to share this story out here. 

I kind of wish I could've been more descriptive with Kunj's character and his placement amongst all. 

Yuvi is my favorite and these days he's growing so much on me because Zain is getting better and better with his acting. Thank you much and obviously the title credit had to go to you! I couldn't come up with anything. 

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