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TEI OS: Woh Ek Lamha (Page 3)

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 5:30am | IP Logged
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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 5:54am | IP Logged
Brilliant OS Clap
Loved reading it
Thanks for the PM

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 5:55am | IP Logged
Areeba seriously you are too harsh on yourself, this piece was really good, have to agree with Teddy it had you on the edge of your seat. It was really good I enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed reading all your writings.
Give yourself a pat on the back.Cool
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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 7:26am | IP Logged
I LOVED YOUR DISCLAIMER 'shittest piece I've ever wrote" ROFL

Well I can tell you it was from shit dude! I cant stop laughing at how psycho Yuvi is. I can picture the maniac in my head shooting the gun around the house. Daddy Danger ka bhanja after all ROFL

This was a nice break from all the mature and giddy shots on Twinj, not that I mind those, but the confrontation between Yuvi an Twinj was awesome. Kunj, the calm an composed as always. I hate the involvement of guns though because the fear arises of the wrong person being shot, which happened. Glad Twinkle was ok though. At one point, I thought you'd go sadist and kill her off, hamari adhuri kahani and all, the end Stern Smile but you didnt so thank you LOL

DUDE WHEN YOU SHE SAID 'HAAT' ALL I COULD REMEMBER WAS THE TWINJ BEDROOM SOON WITH 'SUN', 'BOLO' AND THEN KUNJ CRACKS THE SIYAPPA JOKE AND SHE PUSHES HIM AWAY SAYING 'DUR HAAT' LIKE I CANT Day Dreaming

This was a nice surprise btw. I love when this 'one shot likhne ka bhoot' takes over you Cool

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 1:10pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sampriti.

Beautiful story Smile 
loved it ..
Thanks for the PM

Thank you Sam! Embarrassed
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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 1:11pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by harshi2000

This is so amazing
Loved it Areeba
It was ThrilllingROFL
Love your stories

Thanks Harshi!! 

LOL I thought it's usually Kunj lightening up the mood, I should have Twinkle adopt to the same routine in the end. LOL
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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 1:13pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sdea

Omg Areeba how do you even think that this is bad. It was omg sooo thrilling I was so scared. The way you portrayed yuvis character I can see this happening sometime in the future.
I loved it. You should write more stories they are always so amazing


Something similar to this might happen but not like this probably. Yuvi is my favorite and he's growing on me so much more these days!! Thank you for your kind words. 
 

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 1:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by amlavs

Wowww... Amazing...
Brilliant ah ...
UV and his pagalpan...

Thanks hun!! 

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