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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 12:30am | IP Logged
areeba this was really good,In future I can imagine something like this happening And this was written very well.
I loved the ending!Big smile

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 12:33am | IP Logged
Areeba, Ab "shittiest" ka meaning badalna padega Smile

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 12:44am | IP Logged
Areeba It ws Really very good... 
Yuvraaj being a maniac perfect described...
And his obsession well depicted... 
Kunj and Yuvi's Face off me.. I guess Twinkle is goin to b a victim... 
Probably this will happen in TEI also...
Nyc thot... 
Pls keep writing dear.. 
Looking frward to a new one 

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 12:48am | IP Logged
It's not at all shittiest piece LOL
Infact it was really beautiful Heart

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 1:28am | IP Logged
areeba stop saying this is a shittiest piece ok this was brilliant

All the while i was ok shits going ot hit the fan now
i thought kunj might get hurt for a minute it seemed cherry would

SUCH a thrilling story i  loved ti

The pshyco yuvi u have nailed to the tee

him going k he is touching her so in tone with yuvi

Twinj scene at end was beautiful and so many feels

Over all whole confrontation with yuvi wa ssuperb.
hats of to ur skills.
this was brilliant

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 3:07am | IP Logged
Wow areeba it was beautiful. Yuvi is so crazy that he can do anything bad boy. This scenario may be possible in future. This is not a shitty piece its amazing. Thanks for the pm. If u can can u continue this as to what happened with uv because he does stunts like this but is never caught.

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 3:13am | IP Logged
This was thrilling not knowing what will happen from one moment to the next.
Loved it.

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 3:39am | IP Logged
Well done areeba.. but that was short one.. i wanted big oneSmileClap

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