Originally posted by: --HANSA--
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YOU ARE MINE #2
Next day...
Ahana enters tanu's room.. di are you ready ??? everyone is waiting for you there...
Tanu turned.. m ready... she replied..
Wooww di.. you are looking stunning...rishi jiju will surely get mad seeing you .. ahana smiles n hugged tanu.. Tanu blushes..
Both comes in the hall.. everyone is there waiting for them..
Beautiful... Manpreet said..
Rishi lightly hits on his head.. bhabhi hai teri.😉. rishi gives a big smile to tanu..
Tanu too smiles ..😳
Raj moves towards tanu.. n cupped her face by his hands.. nazar na lag jaye kisi ki meri bahu ko.. 😊
Tanu touches his feet.. god bless you always.. raj said
Sabhi aa gye hain toh chale... kahin humari party mein hum hi late na ho jaye.. biji said to all.
N all moved outside in the parking..
Rishi comes closer to tanu n holds her hand.. tanu looks at him.
M soory tanu.. I didn't meant to hurt you..rishi explained himself
I know rishi n now please I don't want to talk about that topic.. tanu answered..
N then they leave to the party hall..
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They all have a warm welcome there...
Raj n rano start introducing their bahu to everyone in the party...
Rishi tries to talk to tanu .. but tanu is alongwith raj n rano ...s o she didn't reacted even after noticing rishi..
Bhai !! should we start our plan now?? Manpreet asked to rishi..
Chhote firstly you have to do a favour for me.. rishi said.. n whispered something in his ear..
Manpreet smiles n said itni si baat bhai.. I'll do it for sure..
Manpreet leaves..
Suddenly the lights of hall are turned off.. there is darkness in the hall..
Then a one of the light is turned on focusing on manpreet...
Helloo everyone... as you all know we are gathered here for the celebration of the engagement of my lovely brother rishi.. we aren't able to organize this party on the day of engagement because of some family issue.. but now we are here to join my brother rishi's happiness..
The party seems so boring without music n dance.. so I want my bhai n bhabhi to come here n dance together.. manpreet announces
Biji holds tanu's hand n take her to rishi... n rest her hand in rishi's hand..
Rishi n tanu comes in the centre of hall... N did a romantic couple dance..
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BG music:
Mere hath mein tera hath ho...
Sari jannatein mere sath ho..
Tu jo paas ho fir kya ye jahan...
Tere pyar mein ho jaun fanna...
Mere hath mein tera hath ho...
Sari jannatein mere sath ho..
Tu jo paas ho fir kya ye jahan...
Tere pyar mein ho jaun fanna...
...tere dil mein meri ason ko panah mil jaye...
...tere ishq mein meri jaan fanna ho jaye...
Jitne paas hai khushboo saans ke...
Jitne paas honto ke sargam..
Jise sath hai karwat yaad ke...
Jaise sath bahon ke sangam...
Jintne pass pass khawabon ke nazar..
Utne pass tu rehna humsafar...
Tu jo paas ho fir kya ye jahan...
Tere pyar mein ho jaun fanna...
Mere hath mein tera hath ho...
Sari jannatein mere sath ho..
Tu jo paas ho fir kya ye jahan...
Tere pyar mein ho jaun fanna...
...
The dance ends n everyone appreciates tanu n rishi...
Manpreet goes towards ahana n said slowly... I wanna talk to you pleae its urgent can we meet in the garden outside...
Oye flirtbaaz ab kaun sa naya drama kar rha hai.. m not coming.. ahana replied..
Dekho please tumhari di ke relation ka sawal hai... you have to come.. manpreet leaves to the garden...
Ahana too followed him... swati noticed going them outside.. n follows them
Manpreet explains the whole thing that how chichi n neha want to break the engagement of tanu n rishi to ahana..
Ahana is just shocked to listen that... uss neha ka toh main muh tod dungi... how she dares to do that..
Ahana tries to go inside the hall n talk to neha but manpreet stops her... please don't do something now .. we have a plan n we need yor help in that..
Rishi too joins them in garden... rishi n manpreet tells the whole plan to ahana n ahana agrees with them..
I don't let chachi n neha to spoils my di's life .. ahana said..
Swati listens everything they talk.. if they will do so... mom n neha will caught in a big problem.. I have to tell everything to mom.. swati leaves
Mom there is a very big problem... said swati to baani.. neha is too there..
What happened swati??? Asked baani curiously
Swati tell them their whole plan ...
Oh!!!! Toh yeh baat hai... don't worry hum unhe unke hi jaal mein fasaenge.. baani hun main baani hai ki nai.. bani smiles..
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After the party ends.. all comes in the parking lounge ..
Neha is about to sit in the car n ahan stops her...
Neha will you do me a favour please ... wo atn di ki dress ka jo order diya tha mehndi ke liye unka call aya tha ki dress ready hai... jiju apni dress laine wahi ja rhe hain or unko nhi pta ki di ki dress kaisi hai.. tumhe pta hai kyunki uss din tum bhi humare sath thi.. so kyat um unke sath chali jaogi.. actually mujhe ghr mein kuch kaam hai nhi toh main hi chali jati... ahana said
Yeah yeah ..why not.. neha answered n went alongwith rishi..
Strange.. issne koi natak hi nhi kiya.. chalo acha hai.. ahana thinks.. n leaves..
Poor ahana.. she don't even thimks what will happen with her di... neha thinks...
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TO BE CONTINUED...
😛
Originally posted by: --HANSA--
it ok for me
awesome updt love it the song too good but fear for tanu now hope nothing wrong happen to her
love manpreet n ahana jodi too
Originally posted by: sunshinesamuef
Superb!!! Please do update soon. Your storyline is really nice.
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