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iQraaa IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 4:58pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Lachu-

Originally posted by chandaaaxo

Originally posted by -Lachu-

That was... Unpleasant... didnt expect the culprit to be ... You know

But that doesnt mean the story is bad ... Yes it was bad in the sense of the plot being dark... But it was really good in the story pov.. I think u should write something like this more often... Heard of wattpad ..try posting there .. You will be surprised by the no. Of ppl who love this genre... Really write more often...not fan fics but original stories...I am sure you will be a star
you read/write on wattpad too lachu??

currently I am reading only...started with PJO and HP AUsLOL...now I read crime...never had the guts to write LOL
LOLLOL its a very good place actually! Wink i read Fanfics and Fantasies mostly and recently i am in to suspense and thrill! Big smile i wrote one SS, a Vampirish FF and a medieval one all for One direction ! but never completed them OMG i am a big procrastinator when it comes to writing. LOL

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Posted: 30 April 2016 at 11:06pm | IP Logged
I liked it... Be it dark darker darkest whateverrr... But it was Bew for TPK...
But it was Balwinder... I was thinking its Dhruv... Bcz he looks like that ;)
Your writing is marvellous

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Posted: 10 May 2016 at 12:43pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sukanksha

I liked it... Be it dark darker darkest whateverrr... But it was Bew for TPK...
But it was Balwinder... I was thinking its Dhruv... Bcz he looks like that ;)
Your writing is marvellous


Thanks for reading and the compliment! Glad you liked it.
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Posted: 10 May 2016 at 9:47pm | IP Logged
Bauji...
Here I was thinking about Dhruv.
The title is apt to OS.
Poor Bihaan, what a crude way to kill someone.
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Posted: 31 May 2016 at 12:43pm | IP Logged
Its balluShocked i was thinking him to be dhruvLOL
I am commenting here to bring this OS on the main page.. people need to read this, those who have missed it..
Its brilliant.. I enjoyed it becoz its so different.. one need guts to write such an OS.. ur taste is so different.. and ur writing is different and exceptional too
Its a piece of excellence.. keep up ur great workClapClap


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Posted: 31 May 2016 at 12:51pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Barbie_KK9629

Its balluShocked i was thinking him to be dhruvLOL
I am commenting here to bring this OS on the main page.. people need to read this, those who have missed it..
Its brilliant.. I enjoyed it becoz its so different.. one need guts to write such an OS.. ur taste is so different.. and ur writing is different and exceptional too
Its a piece of excellence.. keep up ur great workClapClap

Thanks! I put plenty of warnings upfront make sure that some gentle soul did not get exposed to such darkness. LOLLOL

Readers were split - between Dhruv and Bauji Smile

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Posted: 01 June 2016 at 9:31am | IP Logged
It was cruel, dark, really really dark. And made me think "Oh!! hell...whats this." But I liked it.LOL Not that I like such kind of killing and violence, but this is a really fine piece of writing.Clap 
But taking away the head with him was kind of...you know...Dead but these things do happen...sometimes people fall to such extent..to being an obsessive, psycho kind of person.
It was so cruel.

Btw can we get an OS where thapki is killed?LOL or maybe thapki killing Bihaan?LOL
If u have any such thing in mind, plz post it soon. If u dont want to post it here then plz PM me, i will like to read that.LOL





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Posted: 01 June 2016 at 10:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Spreeti98

It was cruel, dark, really really dark. And made me think "Oh!! hell...whats this." But I liked it.LOL Not that I like such kind of killing and violence, but this is a really fine piece of writing.Clap
But taking away the head with him was kind of...you know...Deadbut these things do happen...sometimes people fall to such extent..to being an obsessive, psycho kind of person.
It was so cruel.

Btw can we get an OS where thapki is killed?LOLor maybe thapki killing Bihaan?LOL
If u have any such thing in mind, plz post it soon. If u dont want to post it here then plz PM me, i will like to read that.LOL





I am glad you liked it . Thanks for reading. I know it is little dark LOL

Please read the haunting for Thapki and let me know! Wink

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