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Part 1



It was 8am in the morning and trisha was in kitchen. She was preparing lunch box for Reva. Her 3yr old daughter. Ever since reva became 3yrs of age she has started attending nursery school. In Morning hours trisha is extremely busy. She has to prepare breakfast, lunch, and then she has to make Reva get ready for her school. That's were she face difficulty. Just like her father she too loves to irritate trisha. Trisha used to chuckle the similarity between raghav and reva. Reva is a replica of raghav.


Trisha: reva baby kaho tum?


Trisha moved out from kitchen to the hall with a glass of milk for reva. She went towards the front room were reva was sitting and playing her favourite picture cross puzzle. Trisha smiled seeing her daughter.


Trisha: reva aaj school nahi jane hai kya? Bahuth dher ho rahahai beta. Jaldi yeh dhooth peejao.


Reva: mama reva ko dhooth nahi orange juice chaiye.


Trisha shook her head. Just like her father she too wants orange juice after breakfast.


Trisha moved towards kitchen murmuring to herself " dono baap aur beti ek jaisi hai. Dono ko bus muchey parishan karna acha lagthahai. Aur mein ek bewakoof ki tarah dono ke samna apna sar chuktha hai.


Reva who had followed her mother was enjoying trisha's irritation and she had a naughty smile on her face. She saw trisha peeling orange for preparing juice.


She went and pulled her trisha's kurthi.


Trisha looked at reva.


Trisha: abhi dethi hoon tumari juice.


Reva smiled: mama jab aap ghusey mein ho tab aap aur bhi bahuth khoobsoorathi dikthi.


Trisha: reva!


Reva pulled her kurthi and trisha knew she wanted trisha to kneel down and she did the same. Reva put her arms around trisha's neck and kissed on trisha's cheeks. Trisha too kissed her back. And then made her sit on the slab near by. Trisha quickly prepared orange juice for reva and made her drink the juice.


Reva: mama raath ko mere liye pizza banadhogi?


Trisha: bilkul bhi nahi. Kal toh banaya tha na pizza. Roz roz pizza khana sehth ke liye acha nahi hai baby.


Reva pouted.


Reva: please mama


Trisha: reva no


Reva like an obedient kid nodded her head agreeing with her. Trisha smiled seeing reva's actions which she is used to for years. Raghav too does the same whenever trisha goes to boss mode.


Trisha got ready in her formals and made reva ready for her school. Since its a play school they don't have uniform. Trisha made reva wore a white frock and then she made her hair tied in half pony. Reva in between tickled trisha. Reva knew trisha get tickling fast and she likes to tickle trisha in between. She likes when her muma strictly calls her reva and rolls her eyes desperately.


After dropping reva in her nursery school trisha went to cbi office.



CBI HEADQUARTERS!



Trisha was busy with the paper works in her cabin. Raghav came inside her cabin and greeted her.


Trisha: where were you raghav? Aur yeh koi waqath hai office aane mein.


Raghav: sorry boss. Got stuck with traffic. Lagtha hai aap muhey milney betap horahi hai.


Trisha: raghav


Raghav immediately stopped. They discussed about the recent cases they were handling with raghav teasing and flirting with trisha in between.



Dilip chauhan's cabin



Dilip chauhan had called trisha to hand over a new case to cbi.


Dilip chauhan: trisha ek naya case hai. Tumne toh suna hoga rj anupriya ki murder mein


Trisha: yes of course she was quite popular rj in all india radio fm. Uski lash toh fm station se mila hai.


Dilip chauhan: ha trisha anupriya kafi popular rj thi. Aur woh central government based all india radio ki rj thi. Rjs strike pe gayi hai uski mauth ke bath mein. Hame jald si jald yeh case solve karna hai.


Trisha: yes sir hamari team poori koshish karkeyngi. I will leave now.


Dilip chauhan: ek minute trisha kal hum shopping ke liye gayi thi aur jab mein yeh doll dekha toh muhey tumari reva ki baare mein yaad aayi. Tum yeh doll usse de dhena.


Trisha smiled and got it.


Trisha: iski kya zaroorath thi sir. Aapko patha hai woh toh poori ki poori apni papa ki beti hai. Usse dolls nahi balki balls, picture puzzles yeh sabh ka shaukh hai.


Dilip chauhan: reva apni papa ki beti hai yeh kehthey huae tum bahuth proud feel ho rahi thi. Toh kab tak yeh sach sabse chupaogey trisha? Khas torkar raghav se? Don't you think raghav have the right to know about reva?


Trisha: i know sir mein reva ke barey mein chipakar raghav se aur reva se bahuth badi galthi kar rahi hai. Par mein karu toh kya karoon? Aap ko pata hai na humari shaadi kasi hui aur hum sab se woh baath kyun chupayi aur uske baad raghav ka accident, uski missing aur jab woh lauti uski toh yaadash ja chuki thi. Usse toh humari shaadi ke barey mein kuch bhi yaad nahi hai. Uski mann mein toh sirf uski strict boss hai. I think Woh mere liye kuch bhi feel nahi karthi aur uski doctor ne hamey bataya na uss accident ki wajah se usski saar par bahuth chot lagi thi aur unhe bilkul bhi stress nahi lagna chahiya. Agar usko koi bhi shock hogayi toh uski jan ko khathra ho jayega.


Trisha was almost in tears.


Dilip chauhan: trisha mein tume parishan nahi karna chathi thi. Par kab tak aisey chalogi? Reva toh badi horahi hai.


Trisha: i really don't know sir. Par muhey apni pyaar mein poori yakeen hai. Muhey poora vishwas hai ek din phir se raghav muhey pyaar kareney lagega. Aur tab mein usse saab kuch batogi.



Cbi head quarters - conference hall



Trisha was discussing about the new case with her team. RJ anupriya kapoor 24 years old was found dead in the all india fm radio ( AIR) office today morning. She was hugely popular. She has been working in AIR for past 4years. She was the sole bread winner of the family ever since her father passed away in an accident 4years back.


Raghav: boss jitna anupriya ke bare mein suna hai woh ek seedhi sadhi ladki lagrahai. koi usse kyun marna chayega? muhey lagtha hai hume ek baar jakar anupriya ki colleagues se baath karna chahiye.


Trisha: yes. Dr. Arathy aur uski forensic team ne murder spot chek karli. Aur woh turanth hume post-mortem report deyga. Rajbir tum jakar anupriya ki maa aur chotey bhai se milna. Aur bikram tum tab tak cyber cell ko contact karkey anupriya ki call records collect karlo. Hum tab tak fm station jakar aathey hai.


( swathi has got married an year back and so she has resigned from job.)



AIR fm station



Trisha and raghav had came to the fm station for interrogation. Anupriya kapoor was apparently a sweet girl who had clean records in her work and professional relationship.


Trisha: raghav tume kya lagtha hai jitna hum suna hai anupriya is a sweet girl. Koi usse kyun marneyga?


Raghav: pata nahi. Hum sirf yahan ki employe se mili hum ek baar yahan ki ceo se bhi millethey. Agar woh hume kuch bata payi toh.



The ceo was a beautiful women around her early 30s ms. Nirmala rai. Raghav being a psychiatrist understood nirmala is defiantly not what she pretends. He somehow need to get close to her. Even if he had to go against the procedure manual. After interrogation trisha and raghav left the cabin.


Outside the cabin


Raghav: trisha ek minute mein abhi aati hoon.


Trisha: kya hua raghav.


Raghav had already gone back to nirmala's cabin. Knowing raghav she knew he is up to something. But still she decided to wait till he returns.


Raghav's deduction wasn't wrong. Nirmala was a flirtiest women. That's why when raghav came back and started praising her she was happy and readily agreed to come for a date with him in the evening.



Trisha and raghav was driving back to cbi head quarters.


Trisha: raghav tum wapas nirmala ji se kyun milne gaya?


Raghav raised his eyebrows.


Raghav: kuch nahi boss bahuth khoobsurat aurat hai socha usse dinner date ke liye ley chaltha hoon aaj raat.


Trisha: raghav!


Raghav: kyun boss uske liye bhi muhey aapki permission lena padega?


Trisha became red with anger. She just wanted to hit him. But she controlled herself. For him and for the entire world she is agent trisha dewan his boss not his wife.


Raghav noticed trisha's change after saying about his date with nirmala. He wanted to clear that he just wanted to get some clues about anupriya's murder from her. Somehow he feels nirmala knows something about the murder. But seeing trisha's irritated face he just decided to play along.


Raghav: aapko nirmala kaisi lagi?


Trisha: kuch khas achi nahi lagi.


Raghav: really! Woh beautiful hai successful hai smart hai aur bahuth pleasant bhi hai. Phir bhi aapko achi nahi lagi. Kai aisa toh nahi aap usse jalthey ho?


Trisha: what? Mein kyun jealous feel karon uss se? Tumari date tume mubharakh. Kya ab hum kaam ki baath karey?


Raghav just couldn't stop smiling. It was clear that trisha was feeling jealous after hearing about nirmala. Just like he feels jealous whenever a man comes near her.



Night



Reva was enjoying her favourite comic cartoon in tv. Reva wondered why trisha is in kitchen for a long time. Usually trisha spends time with her in evening. Trisha has started teaching reva alphabets and numbers. Trisha being a good singer and trained guitarist sometimes in the evenings she used to sing and play guitar for reva. Reva likes drawing and painting ( like raghav) trisha used to help her. But today her mother is in kitchen ever since she returned from her office. Reva understood something is not right with trisha. She went towards kitchen. She saw trisha was preparing dishes one after another. And the dining table is almost full with different types of dishes. Reva knew when ever trisha is upset or angry she comes to kitchen and starts cooking as cooking gives her peace of mind. She cooks till the grocery in the house finishes. Reva walked inside the kitchen and climbed up the slab near trisha.


Trisha: kya kar rahi ho reva. Tum girjaoegy baby.


Trisha went near her and hold her while she was climbing the slab. After sitting the slab she encircled her arms around trisha's neck and kissed on her cheeks.


Trisha was stunt.


Trisha: ab kyun kiss kar rahi ho baby?


Reva: mama ap aaj bahuth sad hai na. Reva ko bilkul bhi achi nahi lagthi jab mama sad hogayi toh. Isliye reva mama ko kiss karke kush karna chathi thi.


Reva again kissed on trisha's cheeks. Trisha just couldn't stop smiling. She too kissed on reva's cheeks.


trisha remembered after there secret marriage how raghav cheered up the same way like reva.



Flashback


Trisha was extremely upset because her parents have cut all the relations with after knowing about her marriage with raghav. They didn't even let her explain. She had gone to meet her younger sister tejal in her college. But she too refused to meet trisha which had hurt trisha so deeply. She was in kitchen ever since evening preparing dishes one after another. when Raghav came to kitchen and saw her condition he understood what would have happened after she had gone to meet tejal.


He came near her and encircled her from behind with his arms and kissed on her cheeks. Trisha was stunt by his action. She looked at him amazed. He whispered huskily on her ears


Raghav: mana hai meri biwi duniya ke sabse achi cook hai aur muhey khana khaney ka bahuth shock bhi hai par iska matlab yeh nahi hai ki tum poori mahiney ki grocery ek din mein khatham kar ley aur mein khumbhakarn nahi hoon itna khaney ki.


Trisha smiled hearing his words. He again kissed on her cheeks.


Flashback ended...



Trisha came back from her thoughts when she heard reva calling her.


Reva: kya soch rahi ho muma?


Trisha: kuch nahi baby. Mein tumare liye pizza banaya.


Reva: mama aap ne toh kahan tha subah har rozz pizza khana acha nahi hai. Reva toh good girl hai. Apni mama ki bath manthi hoon. Isliye aaj jo bhi mama khaogey toh reva wahi khaogi.


Trisha smiled after hearing her daughter. She wondered how exactly her daughter knew to cheer her up.


After feeding reva trisha sent the extra food to near by orphanage. Trisha put her to bed after making her drink milk and telling her favourite stories reva slept of. Trisha too lied down next to reva but sleep was far from her. Raghav's date with nirmala has irritated her. She know raghav is a gentleman and he usually flirts only with her that too because she is close to him. Sometimes he do uses his charm but that is only to solve cases. Trisha knew date with nirmala too has to be something related to anupriya's murder. But still Trisha couldn't stop feeling irritated and jealous. After all she is his wife. Like every wife she too is possessive about her husband.


Trisha remembered what all happened 4yrs back in her life.



Pre cap: flashback!


Ps: i know you guys will be feeling like murdering me. But i assure in next update i will bring a lot of ratri romance that too chup chup ke wala in cbi office. Let me clear no one knows about ratri marriage in cbi team. Why they had a secret marriage and what happened to raghav after the marriage and how he had memory loss will be cleared in next part. Except for chief no body knows about reva in cbi not even raghav. How cheif came to know about ratri marriage and reva you will learn in next part. All the past issues will be cleared in next part.





Edited by Az07 - 24 April 2016 at 7:56am

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Originally posted by Desaitara1234

Awesome teaser. Please do continue soon


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Posted: 24 April 2016 at 8:27am | IP Logged
Uma nice nd long update. so Trisha and Raghav was married 4yr back and they had a daughter Reva but Raghav did not knew about it due to accident which he met. How trisha will tell Raghav that they have married and they have a daughterEmbarrassed? How they got married? How they will tell CBI members about their relationship and marriegeEmbarrassed? Lots of questions in mind about their past Eagerly waiting for the second update.Smile 

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Originally posted by 1973deepak

Uma nice nd long update. so Trisha and Raghav was married 4yr back and they had a daughter Reva but Raghav did not knew about it due to accident which he met. How trisha will tell Raghav that they have married and they have a daughterEmbarrassed? How they got married? How they will tell CBI members about their relationship and marriegeEmbarrassed? Lots of questions in mind about their past Eagerly waiting for the second update.Smile 
 
all the questions will be answered in next part
glad you liked it
hope you liked reva too

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Posted: 24 April 2016 at 8:51am | IP Logged
First of all, it's a really unique story!Clap
Trisha singlehandedly taking caring of reha really deepens her character of being independent.
Her getting jealous on raghav is completely justified.
Chief insisting her to tell him showed how he really cares about them.
Would really want to know the past which forced trisha and raghav in such circumstances.
Reha is really cute and much like raghav that's sweet.
Do update soon,will wait eagerly!  

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Posted: 24 April 2016 at 8:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Az07

Originally posted by 1973deepak

Uma nice nd long update. so Trisha and Raghav was married 4yr back and they had a daughter Reva but Raghav did not knew about it due to accident which he met. How trisha will tell Raghav that they have married and they have a daughterEmbarrassed? How they got married? How they will tell CBI members about their relationship and marriegeEmbarrassed? Lots of questions in mind about their past Eagerly waiting for the second update.Smile 
 
all the questions will be answered in next part
glad you liked it
hope you liked reva too
Yes I like Reva the most. How cute innocent child.If she asked her mom about her dad then what Trisha could answer this is most emotional part in the story for Trisha 

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Originally posted by 1973deepak

Originally posted by Az07

Originally posted by 1973deepak

Uma nice nd long update. so Trisha and Raghav was married 4yr back and they had a daughter Reva but Raghav did not knew about it due to accident which he met. How trisha will tell Raghav that they have married and they have a daughterEmbarrassed? How they got married? How they will tell CBI members about their relationship and marriegeEmbarrassed? Lots of questions in mind about their past Eagerly waiting for the second update.Smile 
 
all the questions will be answered in next part
glad you liked it
hope you liked reva too
Yes I like Reva the most. How cute innocent child.If she asked her mom about her dad then what Trisha could answer this is most emotional part in the story for Trisha 
well she is a bit small for that only 3yrs old
but you will know in next part about it

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