Hi Uma just sooo lovely dear...
Thanks! Glad you liked it
Trisha being apprehensive about his mischevious nature and she trying to explain her pov was so effortless. Went on so smoothly and then his reply was so natura and Trisha being nervous was expected from her, she being such an introvert.
Knowing Raghav she has to be nervous and yes she is an introvert who is not comfortable with all this.
Raghav not leaving her and she using Reva for her help was so cute. Reva obviously must be enjoying all this between her parents. She had not seen her mother like this ever before, so she had to be surprised.
Yes Reva is surprised to see all this. Unknowingly she became a helping hand to Trisha
The punishment in the bathrooml was very romantic.
How else can he punish her?
Raghav and Reva being partners in prank, Raghav won't leave any chance to win that bet. But obviously he was doing everything for her happiness only.
Yes everything is for her happiness
Again Raghav entering the ladies washroom, he still kept on trying but she was determined not to give up this time. Their triffs are very well presented by you.
Trisha too started playing along. After all Biwi Kiski hai?
Trisha finally accepting his proposal of remarriage just for his sake so that he doesn't lose was so emotional... well written dear.
Yes she will never want to c him upset.
All the ceremonies of marriage right from sangeet to haldi to wedding was very creative, emotional, romantic... everything.
.I just loved the way he made each ritual special for her.
She deserved all this happiness
They started a new life afresh after so many years was very much needed for both. Both had been craving for this and finally this day had come into their life.
Yes they craved all this for a long time.
Their honeymoon, his lovely birthday celebration including the team members... just awesome right from beginning to end.
They finally came together as one family together.
They started there life fresh ahead.
The best part was the birthday gift. Finally Raghav will get to live the moments he had missed all these years due to his memory loss. He must have been on the top of this world.
Yes the best gift he could ever get. He couldn't feel all this during rEva's time
Thank you that really means a lot.
NOTE: I just wanted to make a suggestion, if you allow me to. While I too had been a part of this story of yours, I myself had started imagining what could have happened further? Everything what you wrote was just out of this world but just one thing was missed by me which left me asking for it.
Please I know everyone can't think alike, but its just my pov personally. Thats all; no offences from my side.
I would have personally liked to see Trisha's family present in her wedding. This could have been shown as a gift from Raghav to Trisha. He must have come to know through her diary, how her family reacted to their marriage and that they had broken all their relations with her. She was always craving for their love and support. If they were present on their remarriage and accepted their relation along with Reva wholeheartedly would have been an icing on the cake. I was imagining this in my own thoughts.
I too in between thought to bring her parents. But then I didn't want to drift apart from storyline. Want Ratri to enjoy there secret marriage once again. I have personally seen a similar situation in my family too. Her parents are too hurt and they are right on there part. It will take time for them. Trisha after becoming herself a mother understood her mistake and she is trying to rectify it. Time heals all wounds. She is now in a talking relationship with them. I feel since she left them she only had to take initiative of course Raghav can try but I want it to be this way. Hope you can understand.
ON THE WHOLE THANKS FOR THIS LOVELY STORY. WAITING FOR MORE SUCH WONDERFUL STORIES FROM YOU IN FUTURE.