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Posted: 17 May 2016 at 7:27am | IP Logged
Uma... your story was meant to have a grand ending n it got... what a lovely n apt beginning of life... where Trisha had got both she always wanted to have... Reva n Raghav... ! StarClap
Awesome n phenomenal piece of work dear... !!!StarStar

The challenge became a lovely game for Raghav n he enjoyed it to the utmost... Wink The ways he chose... lovely... inspiring... Wink n very cute... Tongue
Loved to see her saying yes near the lake view n the aura made was fully romantic by you... I cherished it... !!!Heart
Nice moves ahead... ! Gup chup shaadi.. ! N thats again... Wink
The sangeet was awe inspiring... the dress of the wud be bride n the dance... You took me to the RaTri land dear... Embarrassed
The haldi put by one another... n the way they cud not meet then... looked very obvious n cool.. !
The marriage at the temple.. n the way it took place... Its gonna be memorized by me forever.. ! Relished i am.. !
Reva's cute demand ... blushed both the parents... But it was fulfilled... I liked the way you showed the time span n the news coming there way... !
The birthday of Raghav got him good gifts from his wife n daughter... ! Today he has got what he has missed all his life... His lost memory n the yrs he had nothing to recall... Today he is finding it to enjoy the life at its fullest... !
Loved Trisha giving her life time n did not differ from her belief that he is alive... n Loved to see them so understanding n calm over the real happiness they have got after all the bad times they have seen.. !
Very lovely story Uma... You have made me love RaTri once again.. ! Missing the show is one thing... But coming to this story n enjoying the way it had to be as the second season is a bliss for me... ! Thanks a lott for giving me the pleasure to read n write for this marve story... !
God bless... !!!


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wow mindblowing
oho raghav married trisha again with all rituals
reva is so sweet
poor trisha got sandwiched between raghav reva rajbir and bikram
wonderful update
totally worth the waitBig smile

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Posted: 17 May 2016 at 8:10am | IP Logged
Awesome update uma simply loved it. Will give a detailed review little later just a little busy 

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Such a awesome story Uma.this story is the best story on the forum. simply loved reading it from the start .loved this update soo much .loved Raghav trying to convince trisha for remarriage and challenging her that she will agree in 24 hours .loved Raghav holding trisha in his arms in the morning and telling her that he will leave her only if she agrees .loved trisha using Reva to escape from Raghav but then raghavs punishment was so awesome. Such a romantic scene was that .RaTri in shower .that was so cute and romantic .loved Raghav raking revas help to make trisha kiss him in front of her .raghav teasing trisha in front of Reva was soo cute .Reva clapping after that was soo cute .so Raghav in ladies washroom again .loved Raghav and trisha in that scene.so trisha agreed for remarriage because she didn't want to see raghav sad .loved raghavs proposal on his knees after that .their private wedding ceremonies were soo awesome. really loved their sangeet haldi and marriage. loved reva asking RaTri for a little baby .that scene was soo cute .could really Imagine RaTri in it .loved the small honeymoon cum family vacation of RaTri and Reva.finally they all got all the happiness they needed
.loved raghavs birthday a lot .trisha gave Raghav the best gift on his birthday by telling she's pregnant.soo happy for RaTri finally they got all the happiness they needed . loved the ending soo much .will miss reva now .thanks for such a awesome story. loved it soo much .wish we get more stories like this from u .

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sorry for the late review dear

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Hey Uma... hope you have read the reviews... Embarrassed

Busy with studies... ??/ 

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Originally posted by bawaswift

Hey Uma... hope you have read the reviews...Embarrassed

Busy with studies... ??/


I am really sorry I couldn't reply to comments yes I have gone through a bit busy with work and have guest at home soon I will reply to the comments
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Posted: 19 May 2016 at 8:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 1973deepak

Awesome, wonderful, mind blowing, beautiful, romantic, cute all are small words for this story. 
Thank you glad you liked it. These words really mean a lot
All the emotions are well portrayed. Hats off to your your thinking, how you find such a naught, mischievous, cute, and flirtatious scene between Raghav and Trisha. Clap
Somewhere even I am amazed I am actually not comfortable writing these bold stuffs personally 
Reva was the soul of the story. I love this character the most. Her cuteness was a topping for this story. 
Really glad you liked her. It feels so good that a character created by you is loved and accepted 
Now coming to the update, 
Trisha was nervous, why not whenever Raghav challenges Trisha he win for sure. 
Yes knowing Raghav she had to be nervous 
His first attempt was fail as Trisha is a smart lady she used Reva to protect herself from Raghav's challenge. 
After all she is Raghav's wife
Then Raghav's second attempt in bathroom, the kiss scene was well written. But Reva so innocent knocking the door to her mumma and papa. 
Bathroom shower scene is my favourite 
Raghav's third attempt with Reva finally Trisha kissed him. 
Raghav's forth attempt again in ladies  washroom. This time Trisha become clever, smart, and naughty. Trisha played well with him. Thank god no one came in the washroom that time. Wink
Now Trisha know how to deal Raghav so she played along. Swathi resigned so no one to disturb them.
Finally Raghav lose the challenge but Trisha don't want him to lose so she herself agreed for marriage. 
We always see Raghav winning for a change I made Trisha to win this time 
The Marriage was written nicely. 
The mehendi scene where Trisha told mehendiwali to hide Raghav's name so that he found difficulty in finding it. But how can this possible for A Keen observer like Raghav Trisha knew it well. 
Thanks glad you liked it it's difficult to hide something from his eyes. 
Then the marriage and gift given by Raghav i.e. Box of vermilion. Loved it. 
I think that is the best gift he can give to her. That is indirectly he is announcing her as his wife.
Then comes the demand of Reva of a little baby. EmbarrassedSo romantic and cute. 
A kid at her age it's natural for her to ask for her sibling 
On Raghav's birthday Trisha give him his life biggest gift that she is pregnant!!!!. Raghav loves children so his happiness is expected. 
His best ever birthday gift she could give 
The story was nicely end up. 
Glad you liked the ending 

Seriously I love this story and go crazy for each part. Hope you like such story in future for this forrum Smile

I am really happy this story is loved accepted and I was able to involve every one in to this story. Was nervous many times 
Loves
Ananya

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