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Tasha1994 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 18 May 2016 at 6:38am | IP Logged
sorry for the late review dear

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bawaswift IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 18 May 2016 at 7:50am | IP Logged
Hey Uma... hope you have read the reviews... Embarrassed

Busy with studies... ??/ 

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Az07 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 19 May 2016 at 2:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by bawaswift

Hey Uma... hope you have read the reviews...Embarrassed

Busy with studies... ??/

I am really sorry I couldn't reply to comments yes I have gone through a bit busy with work and have guest at home soon I will reply to the comments
Az07 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 19 May 2016 at 8:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 1973deepak

Awesome, wonderful, mind blowing, beautiful, romantic, cute all are small words for this story. 
Thank you glad you liked it. These words really mean a lot
All the emotions are well portrayed. Hats off to your your thinking, how you find such a naught, mischievous, cute, and flirtatious scene between Raghav and Trisha. Clap
Somewhere even I am amazed I am actually not comfortable writing these bold stuffs personally 
Reva was the soul of the story. I love this character the most. Her cuteness was a topping for this story. 
Really glad you liked her. It feels so good that a character created by you is loved and accepted 
Now coming to the update, 
Trisha was nervous, why not whenever Raghav challenges Trisha he win for sure. 
Yes knowing Raghav she had to be nervous 
His first attempt was fail as Trisha is a smart lady she used Reva to protect herself from Raghav's challenge. 
After all she is Raghav's wife
Then Raghav's second attempt in bathroom, the kiss scene was well written. But Reva so innocent knocking the door to her mumma and papa. 
Bathroom shower scene is my favourite 
Raghav's third attempt with Reva finally Trisha kissed him. 
Raghav's forth attempt again in ladies  washroom. This time Trisha become clever, smart, and naughty. Trisha played well with him. Thank god no one came in the washroom that time. Wink
Now Trisha know how to deal Raghav so she played along. Swathi resigned so no one to disturb them.
Finally Raghav lose the challenge but Trisha don't want him to lose so she herself agreed for marriage. 
We always see Raghav winning for a change I made Trisha to win this time 
The Marriage was written nicely. 
The mehendi scene where Trisha told mehendiwali to hide Raghav's name so that he found difficulty in finding it. But how can this possible for A Keen observer like Raghav Trisha knew it well. 
Thanks glad you liked it it's difficult to hide something from his eyes. 
Then the marriage and gift given by Raghav i.e. Box of vermilion. Loved it. 
I think that is the best gift he can give to her. That is indirectly he is announcing her as his wife.
Then comes the demand of Reva of a little baby. EmbarrassedSo romantic and cute. 
A kid at her age it's natural for her to ask for her sibling 
On Raghav's birthday Trisha give him his life biggest gift that she is pregnant!!!!. Raghav loves children so his happiness is expected. 
His best ever birthday gift she could give 
The story was nicely end up. 
Glad you liked the ending 

Seriously I love this story and go crazy for each part. Hope you like such story in future for this forrum Smile

I am really happy this story is loved accepted and I was able to involve every one in to this story. Was nervous many times 
Az07 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 19 May 2016 at 8:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by braveheartdoc

Thanks for updating the story. Will read it asap. Will be there with the review by tonight. Kind of busy during the day. I'm sorry for the delay...

No problem take your own time 
Desaitara1234 Senior Member

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Posted: 19 May 2016 at 10:49pm | IP Logged
Awesome story dear .loved reva soo much in it. Thanks for such a wonderful character. Loved this story soo much

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Az07 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 22 May 2016 at 9:30pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Desaitara1234

Awesome story dear .loved reva soo much in it. Thanks for such a wonderful character. Loved this story soo much

Thank you
Glad you liked reva feels good when a character created by you is loved and accepted
Az07 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 23 May 2016 at 9:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by babita..

This story is very special to me. Was really nervous many times. Glad you guys liked it. Especially reva. Feels nice when a character created by you is being loved.
Well said your emotions Uma, could feel your excitement and nervousness that you have made such a splendid bond between you and your readers ! Hug
Thank you glad I could do that. 
This is stupendous Uma ClapClap Awesomely awesome and very beautiful story that U have presented to us The story is special to us too and Reva has become the RaTri child from now ! Just bowled over by the way you have made the ending so properly magnificent !!! 
It feels so good a character created by you is loved and accepted 

The challenge part is lovely ! Trisha rescuing and Raghav not leaving a chance to make her say yes. Lovely and cute scene followed and reva almost watched them innocently at times. Tongue
For Reva all this is new she is seeing her parents new side and unknowingly became a silent helping hand to both 
I loved her asking Raghav to let mamma go to office and then the punish raghav gave her in the washroom. The office washroom is not left behind here Wink He has all the authorities but still he had to behave well. 
Yes he has complete right on her but still has to maintain professionalism 
The lake scene was beautifully created and the ring in her finger made the challenge accepted and filled. Lovely ambience for the sangeet and the way it was arranged, all dreamy but true as RaTri love !!!! Day Dreaming
Everything recreated which they missed years back 
And later the haldi that they both applied, loved this hidden marriage. The mehendi girl arranged for Trisha, and then for parlour. Proving to be a best hubby Raghav !
Yes he is 
Simple gorgeous dress for her and simple marriage in the temple and gifting vermillion. what a lovely lovely times they were going with. Enjoyed reading all of it. 
I thought that was the best thing he could gift her. It shows the acceptance as his wife in front of the world which he couldn't do years back. 
Loved to see how they start their life afresh after giving their married life a proper name and then going ahead with full of love promised by Raghav to Trisha. She has seen bad days without him and have alone done a great job, but yes his happiness is in her happiness and her good life ahead !
She got back everything which she deserved all the happiness 
Loved the celebrations of Raghav's b'day and Bikram and Rajbir joining them and have become a part of their life with reva as their friend and all enjoying with merry and happy times. 
Yes they have became a part of there family now. 
Trisha playing the guitar for him and sang. What a softness in this couple, they do every thing for each other without any condition placed and any demand asked !
Wanted to show another side of Trisha we know she is trained in arts too in one of the episode she has mentioned about it 
Loved the gift she gave to him 
Raghav opened the gift and was amazed to see it was a picture collage made by trisha which had a few photographs of his childhood with his parents, his photos with trisha and reva and also few photos with there team. Raghav had tears in his eyes. He kissed on her cheeks. 
Raghav: yeh mera sabse acha birthday gift tha trisha. 

I liked the way all was settling and suddenly another gift, that she is pregnant. 
Best gift he could ever get 
Raghav is on the 9th cloud. His and Reva's wishes have come true. Their luck have started the day they met, the unique couple and a life full of love and where they love each other deeply and nothing can come in between them. The family completes and so are their dreams !
Yes they are a unique couple who fell in love got married again separated and once again bonded by love. 

Very awesome ending Uma ClapClap Beautiful story and the lovely grandeur ending. Loved it and loved it and loved it StarStar
Can't thank you enough Uma, all hugs for you and every applauds for you. Loves Heart
Thank you for this lovely comment 

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