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Posted: 26 April 2016 at 6:49pm | IP Logged
Awsm creation.. Hats off to you... Was almost crying while reading this story... Trisha was hurted because Raghav denied the marriage... Her parents did not accept their marriage... Really Raghav actually was not guilty... He himself did not know properly that what had he done... Finally Trisha went to Raghav's resident... Waiting fr next part.. RaTri romance... Update soon.. Nd tnku sooo much for this part

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Posted: 26 April 2016 at 8:00pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shaina744

Awsm creation.. Hats off to you... Was almost crying while reading this story... Trisha was hurted because Raghav denied the marriage... Her parents did not accept their marriage... Really Raghav actually was not guilty... He himself did not know properly that what had he done... Finally Trisha went to Raghav's resident... Waiting fr next part.. RaTri romance... Update soon.. Nd tnku sooo much for this part


Thank you so much
I am glad you liked it I was so nervous while writing the marriage part
It's a huge compliment for me if I had succeeded making you cry reading this part
Raghav's PoV will be in next part he is guilty but guilt and realisation came a bit late
Next part I assure a light hearted one after all emotional shocks I have given u guys deserves one
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Posted: 27 April 2016 at 12:02am | IP Logged
When will you post the next part? Waiting...

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Awesome update dear really loved it alot .Why are you nervous dear pls dont be it is the most awesome part ever. All the feelings have come up really beautifully.Loved the flashback scene very much .Really loved that unexpected twist that changed Ratris life .loved the case in the back drop .Raghav getting worried for trisha in the car cause because her life can be in danger catch the mafia and drug smugglers.loved how  trisha explained him that she is a cbi officer and she is trained for all that . loved them going as undercover journalists for solving thr case but unfortunatly the were suspected .Raghav telling trisha to wear the dhulan's joda so that nobody suspects them . loved the scene in the room trisha telling in the raghav to go in the washroom cause she wanted the mirror to change and raghav telling her not to take much time was soo cute really loved that scene a lot .so raghav and trisha got married in such a situation .must be akward for both of them though they like each other but marrying in such a situation must really get akward .trishas character is so beautiful and wonderful in this story .Really got tears in my eyes seeing trishas con dition .She felt betrayed by raghav .Really waiting to read  raghavs POV in the next update ..Loved how raghav tried to say sorry to trish but trisha being a strong and independant women will surely not agree so quickly .Loved trishas conversation with her parents too.she chose raghav over her parents cause raghav has nobody else then her .trisha going to raghavs house with all her bags .what will raghav do now .waiting to read the next update .pls do update soon .thanks a lot for the awesome emotional update

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Posted: 27 April 2016 at 4:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by braveheartdoc

When will you post the next part? Waiting...


I am in hospital now will try tonight
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Posted: 27 April 2016 at 5:19am | IP Logged
Part 1..



The starting was beneficial to know that Trisha is a mother of a little girl who is just like her father Raghav... But the strange fact came n it shook me how their marriage wud have  happened.. ! 
Reva is a sweet pampered but an obedient child.. n her mom has done a great job raising her all alone... A single parent n so shattered... i felt so bad for her.. !
Dilpi Chauhan cleared many a things .. still so much to be explored... ( in the next ) Embarrassed
Now as Raghav is all set to have a date with Nirmala to know more abt the details of the case... i saw a jealous n raged Trisha so angry with him... But the cases have been solved this way many times... So the only anger is of a wife who cant see her man with anyone else... as do Raghav... he cant see her with anyone.. and knows that she is jealous...

Felt shocked to what Trisha has gone thru all her way... Marriage n  no one knows of it except Dilip... Raghav lost that time memory n have been in the phase of looking her as a boss n teasing her like before.. 
Felt estranged that they have a daughter n Raghav misses a life that he had with Trisha...

Lookiing forward to the next chap. to know more of their marriage n life after that...

Interesting plot... very unusual n unique... Loved the way you have again show a strong n bold Trisha to your readers... StarClap
Thanks Uma... !

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Part 2 A...

Loved the way Raghav was nervous all for Trisha 4 years back... He wanted her to be safe... as they were hailing to a dangerous case... Liked the way Trisha objected to his worries n told him that being a woman she is all ready to go ahead... !
The circumstances on which the marriage happened... It was strange,,, but obvious... ! I liked their contribution to their job... But marrying for the sake of a case was a bit awkward for both... !
Where Trisha was thinking of a life afterwards n a relation going to happen.. there was Raghav who straightly said that this was just an act.. 
The slap did tell her woes... The manao was not enough later on... The confessions n the sorries were not enough to compensate cos as you have rightly mentioned... he has messed up with a wrong girl... A girl who is hurt n cant believe what he did that day... !

The confession to her parents was not easy for her... she as a shattered girl left her home for Raghav... cos for her ... her family had all of them,, but Raghav has only her... Simply beautiful lines... loved them to the core.. Loved the love she has for him n still a faith ,, the trust she fully have.. !ClapStarClap
I wud surely like to know Raghav's POV... cos without that no judgement wud be passed.. !
I know Raghav is sensible n was not intentionally refusing the marriage n in my opinion... he never wanted this marriage to be thrown upon Trisha... He loves her but cant play with her life n emotions... !
N for Trisha... this marriage changed her life in a second... ! N the refusal broke her.. 
Will wait for the next... to see more of RaTri scenes n more exploration... ! No matter what... i am joining Raghav when he will be telling his views.. to Trisha n to us.. 

Thanks Uma... for this very unique subject you have formed in this story... Loved it.. !Star Clap



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Posted: 27 April 2016 at 8:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Tasha1994

Awesome update dear really loved it alot .
Thank you dear I am glad that you liked it
Why are you nervous dear pls dont be it is the most awesome part ever. 
I was very nervous due to storyline glad everybody liked it
All the feelings have come up really beautifully.Loved the flashback scene very much .
Thank you so much dear 
Really loved that unexpected twist that changed Ratris life .loved the case in the back drop .
I am glad that someone mentioned about the case
Raghav getting worried for trisha in the car cause because her life can be in danger catch the mafia and drug smugglers.loved how  trisha explained him that she is a cbi officer and she is trained for all that . loved them going as undercover journalists for solving thr case but unfortunatly the were suspected .
Raghav is always worried for Trisha and Trisha is not like usual girl she is a bold women 
Raghav telling trisha to wear the dhulan's joda so that nobody suspects them . loved the scene in the room trisha telling in the raghav to go in the washroom cause she wanted the mirror to change and raghav telling her not to take much time was soo cute really loved that scene a lot .
That was my favourite part too 
so raghav and trisha got married in such a situation .must be akward for both of them though they like each other but marrying in such a situation must really get akward .
It was unexpected and both of them are shaked as it should not have happened the way it happened 
trishas character is so beautiful and wonderful in this story .Really got tears in my eyes seeing trishas con dition .She felt betrayed by raghav .
Trisha is a wonderful character as such if you had tears in your eyes then I can say it's a huge compliment for me. 
Really waiting to read  raghavs POV in the next update ..
Raghav do have his own reasons for the denial just like Trisha he too is shocked 

Loved how raghav tried to say sorry to trish but trisha being a strong and independant women will surely not agree so quickly .
Trisha is a woman with loads of self respect he had hurt her deeply by rejecting there marriage after all she trusted him 
Loved trishas conversation with her parents too.she chose raghav over her parents cause raghav has nobody else then her .trisha going to raghavs house with all her bags .
It was indeed difficult for Trisha she had to choose between her family and her husband 
what will raghav do now .waiting to read the next update .pls do update soon .thanks a lot for the awesome emotional update

Thank you dear I am glad that you liked it

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