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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 10:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Mananlover2312

Hey,  I just wanted to comment that you are an absolutely brilliant writer.  I love all your stories.  As a literature student I can actually say that the tone you use in your stories is absolutely perfect given the characterisation.  Keep writing!!  Would love to have some feedback from you on my stories. 

Thank you so much Heart
I will tell you a secret, this is the only tone I think I can write inLOL
Maybe angst also
I never could handle romance, too cringe worthy for meTongue
I think I have commented on one of your stories, and I think I loved itTongue
I don't think I have read any other stories from you, I had actually liked the way you write. Will definitely check them outSmile
Thank you so much for your lovely comment Hug

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 10:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sugarbabe14

Wow this is sumthing new 
Totally amazing 
Waiting for next part 
Update soon 
Love Ishita 
Thank you so much IshitaSmile

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 10:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jasmineblossoms

Hi Sanika Smile
I'm a silent reader here but just had to comment here after reading all the three parts! I hope you know you are a gifted writer! Love those small moments btw ShraMan that you have 
written.Can't wait to read more of your work 
Jas Heart
hey Jas Hug
Yeah, I had noticed your like in my previous workTongue
I love when a silent reader comments, they usually have so much to sayLOL
Thank you so much for the complimentSmile It means a lot Heart

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 10:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by _Eternity_

Beautiful parts ...Heart
Thank you Ranju Heart
Originally posted by shivani_agl

AWESOME!
POST NEXT SOON :*
Thank you Shivani Smile
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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 1:12pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sanika.

Originally posted by -ZaYalicious-

AND I AM HERE WITH ONE MORE RESERVED SLOT FOR MYSELF.  

You better unress or I am going to beat your punk ass.Sleepy
Also, scraps pe aaTongue

DONE WITH THIS TOO, GO CHECK! Cool 

Ek tou I commented despite the fact that I didn't want to make an entry before 17th and you find waiting so hard. Ek mere comment ka wait kar liya karo! Not everybody is having board exams, right? and not everybody is having panic attacks and crying sessions because of boards LOL 

P.S. Just because you called me 'pyaari' LOL (But honestly, woman, this editing will serve as a memory) 

Edited by -ZaYalicious- - 22 April 2016 at 2:37pm

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 3:11pm | IP Logged
awesome
loved them all
superb

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 8:11pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -ZaYalicious-

Originally posted by Sanika.

Originally posted by -ZaYalicious-

AND I AM HERE WITH ONE MORE RESERVED SLOT FOR MYSELF.  

You better unress or I am going to beat your punk ass.Sleepy
Also, scraps pe aaTongue
 
DONE WITH THIS TOO, GO CHECK! Cool 

Ek tou I commented despite the fact that I didn't want to make an entry before 17th and you find waiting so hard. Ek mere comment ka wait kar liya karo! Not everybody is having board exams, right? and not everybody is having panic attacks and crying sessions because of boards LOL 

P.S. Just because you called me 'pyaari' LOL (But honestly, woman, this editing will serve as a memory) 
Vaise bhi aati hon forum, comment karne mein kya jaata hai?LOL
Bola na, tumhara comment isspecial hai, wait nai kia jaata ROFL
And thank you for the edi, jaan lekar hi chodti tum meraLOL

Originally posted by -ZaYalicious-

First of all, this reminds me of your 10 reasons on ZaYa LOL WAIT, YOU COULD DO A TEN REASONS ON SHRAMAN TOO! Something like 10 reasons why the new Shravan is better than the old Shravan from Suman's point of view! LIKE DUDE!! Think about it, you could have SO many reasons. 
a) he is hot 
b) his swag level is 101 
c) his smirk can put Draco Malfoy to shame xD 

And I'm sure you could come up with more!! PLEASE, WRITE ONE! 

That is a huge leve of commitment, I told you na, dekti hunTongue

Coming back to these, my absolute favourite is obviously the first one! I mean, it's beauty level: 101 <3 It gave me SO many FEEELSS!! 

Thank youLOL
He smiled to himself as he clicked on another episode of FRIENDS. 
She fit right in. 

SHRAVAN, Shravan, Shravan.. Day Dreaming Day Dreaming

Btw, did I tell you I heard the theme song of Friends on my farewell and now it is stuck in my head. Definitely watching the series this summer, Pakka LOL

Haan, par jab mein bolti hun tou nai dekhne hotaErmm

Write something with angst, please? Pretty please? You should you're the only I make requests to for one-shots etc, koi aur nahin hai mera is forum pe xD 

P.S. Tell me you're a starting a ten reasons soon. I gave you ideas too, no matter how bad they are. 
aaj jao is forum pe, sab acche hi haiLOL
Angst tou aa hi jayega, you know I cant stop writing angsty storiesLOL
My first story on ZaYa was angstyTongue
Thanks Hermy Hug


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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 8:13pm | IP Logged
4.Best kind of stories.

His tall frame leaned against the doorway, blocking the light as he watched her put their daughter to sleep.
She was just finishing her story of how the Prince had rescued the Princess from the captivity of the evil dragon.
"Mumma?" Asked their daughter sleepily.
"Yes beta?" 
"Do all love stories have a prince recus- recus-"
"Rescuing?"
"Haan wohi, princess from the dragon?"
She chuckled. "Not really, some stories are like that. In some,the princess rescues the prince, in some they meet and fall in love, some are love-hate stories and in some," she sighed, "In some stories, two best friends fall for each other. And in my personal opinion," she paused as she met his eyes with a small smile and a wistful look.
"Those are the best kind of love stories."
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5.The K.I.S.S.I.N.G Song


Edited by Sanika. - 04 May 2016 at 1:31am

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