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The ShraMan Fables|Compromises|Page 34| 12/02/17 (Page 17)

...-Riya-... IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 16 May 2016 at 9:27am | IP Logged
Gah! Reading these has filled me with warm, fuzzy Shraman feels.EmbarrassedLOL

You're a fantastic writer!Clap

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potterginny Senior Member

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Posted: 16 May 2016 at 10:18am | IP Logged
The voicemail wala seemed more NiMik than ShraMan, the 'we' factor that they emphasize on in the IVs and the way Namik is full on bold, frank mastikhor guy.. and way the behave when they are together, be it sc or IVs...I am reading it again and again!!!!

The Argh Shravan is also very NiMik as Nikita's always fretting over food and Namik's always trying to calm her down..coaxing her to relax, telling her she's always pretty and not at all fat.. and yeah it's very ShraMan too.

And Sanika, Happy Belated Birthday!!!!!!
Regards from a fellow Mumbaikar..

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Grenade Goldie

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Posted: 16 May 2016 at 11:32am | IP Logged

HI Sanika! Smile

Guess what? I tried to quote you too and realized you have the no-copy thingy enabled too! LOL 

So many ShraMan tales under one roof? Day Dreaming I can't control my excitement! 

EEe! Big smileEmbarrassed Guess I'll comment as I read. :D

1. She Fit Right In

The tale read just like a chunk out of ShraMan's lives. So true to their characters! 

Shravan foreseeing the winning moves on Pushkar's behalf and Suman helping with the food before Vandy could ruin it were exactly things I can see Shravan and Suman doing! 

Cute and funny! Loved it! Embarrassed

2. Her Look

I think we all have a part of ourselves, however small it be, that comes out only in the presence of the special someone. Its true for every relationship. ShraMan's too. I love how you pay attention to the little details. Your writing is endearing. Smile

3. Mornings

Sumo selecting a blaring morning alarm. Haha! So like me! LOL

His cute puckered-lips look! That's SO adorable! Judging by the sleepy Shravan scenes aired on the episodes, I can totally see Shravan, the anti-morning person doing this to Sumo every morning! ROFL

4. Best Kind of Stories

Best friends falling in love. That is a gift from the heavens, so pleasant to watch and lucky to experience! I couldn't agree more with you. Those really are the best kind of stories. Smile

5. The K.I.S.S.I.N.G Song

LMAO. Such a cute and hilarious  ShraMan setting for the infamous Kissing Song! LOL

And did you make the next one up? It was genius! ROFL

6. The Perks of Being Tall

Shit. WOW! The last paragraph turned my insides into a warm, fuzz ball. The hugs and the tip-toed kisses. I swear, nothing could be more adorable! Embarrassed

I think I'm falling in love with your writing. Embarrassed

7. She Knows

I was SO beautiful. I'm falling short of words to describe the effect it had on me. Precise, to the point and yet your writing hits the reader like a ton of brick. I bet you know that. Wink

8 & 9. The McDonald's Order and The Rush

Its absolutely miraculous how you morph simple, basic daily occurrences into beautiful stories. Take a bow! Clap

The Rush was so relatable. It perfectly mirrored Sumo's thoughts. Smile

10. Shut Up

Haha! Pushkar watching Captain America again. I dunno why I find that so funny and cute. Idk why I find everything about Pushkar funny and cute! ROFL

The double questioning. 

Did you, Shravan, did you?

Do you, Shravan, do you?

LMAO! ROFL That takes the trophy! So hilarious it was! LOL

That ending though. Embarrassed

11. Stolen Kisses

Relationship goals right there. I hope the CVs somehow stumble upon your stories and pick them for the show! 

12. Voicemail

OMG. I so didn't see that coming. Blushing 

If Nanu ever gets a heart attack, we know what to expect in his call history. ROFL 

Man, I'm so sick. Tongue

Loved every single dialogue! It was definitely my favorite! 

13. Argh Shravan!

HAha! Loved the nok-jhok of Suman and Shravan. It is so likely of Shravan to keep teasing his Sumo till the very end and then some. I bet its his favorite pastime. LOL

I simply L.O.V.E.D. each little story you've penned down.Embarrassed You've gained a stalker. Wink Keep adding more beauty to this space!Smile

Excuse the long-ish post. I have difficulty stopping once I start. Tongue

Payal. :)

Edited by Grenade - 16 May 2016 at 11:34am

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Posted: 16 May 2016 at 1:30pm | IP Logged
@Payal- Bro, you are my favorite person on the earth right now LOL
Thank you so much for taking the time to review every fable. I will respond to your comment properly, later onSmile
But here, have a jhappi Hug

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jazmeen IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 16 May 2016 at 1:50pm | IP Logged
OMG lol answering machine was like wow lol loved it the most 

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pinky.padda IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 16 May 2016 at 3:19pm | IP Logged
awesome drabbles
absolutely loved them
thank you

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Posted: 16 May 2016 at 4:09pm | IP Logged
Cute stories

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Posted: 17 May 2016 at 6:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Adeeba.Ayub

Oh my !
That was so heart warming . <3

Stolen Kisses : If that happens on the show . Dayum .
We all would be dead .
I know high hopes but this was love . :)

Maybe it will happen, way way ahead in the storylineLOL

Voicemail : Would definitely scare the caller but it was Cute AF . :D

Argh Shravan : When best friends fall in love and get married . That was so adorable .
Whining Suman and Shravan to irritate her more . :D

Eeeks, That made my day . <3
-God bless

Thank you so much! Hug Heart

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