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Originally posted by orion23

Simple, short and superb!
The first one was damn cute, knowing the order by heart, well love it is.Heart

And the second one, just hearing the name of the person you love puts you into overdriveDay Dreaming

I really like how you pick up simple day to day human emotions and make awesome stuff out of itClap

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Originally posted by pinky.padda

wow
totally awesome
loved them

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10. Shut Up!

Shravan stacked up the bundle of papers, filing them. One down, five more to go.' He thought. It was a hectic day at work and he hated it when he had work to bring home too. But things were not going to do themselves.
He sighed as Suman yelled at the tv screen, urging the batsman to run faster so that they could gain another run.
"Sumo?" he said, prodding her.
"Hmm?" She said without taking her eyes off the TV.
"Can you go watch the match in the living room? I have more work to." He said, gesturing at the piles of paper that were strewn across the bed.
"No can do. Chachi is watching Masterchef there."
"Then go to Pushkar's room."
"Can't. He is watching Captain America again!" She rolled her eyes at her husband as she paused the match and turned to him.
"Well then can you keep it down?"
She made a face. "Aise match dekhne mein kya mazza Shravan, tum dad ke study mein jaoo na."
"I have to shift stuff and I really don't want to do that." Shravan whined as Suman crawled out of bed to get more water from the table.
"I thought in a relationship people try to fake interest in others activities or hobbies. Watch the match with me"
"Well if that were the case, you should have read Harry Potter a long time ago."
Suman rolled her eyes again as she crawled back in and readjusted the pillows.
"You would like that, wouldn't you. I said I will get to it. But you never try."
"I did try!" He exclaimed.
"Did you Shravan, did you?" She said as she un-paused the game again.
"Oh don't do the double question thing to prove a point. I hate it when people do that."
"Do you Shravan, do you?"
"Oh shut up!" He said as he grabbed her face and kissed her full on the mouth.
"That is a good way to shut someone up" Suman grinned as she shifted her attention back to the TV.
"It is the only way to shut you up." Shravan grumbled under his breath.
He smiled to himself as Sumo turned down the volume a bit.
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9.The Rush

11.Stolen Kisses



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These stories are short and sweet. Wonderful actually the way you have described ShraMan's beautiful moments is just amazing. You are an amazing writer *speechless* :) Thumbs Up Clap

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This is indeed the only way to shut Suman up! ROFL

Beautiful piece, again. :)

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