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Posted: 03 May 2016 at 3:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by avika444


>>> Avi.. ur emoji.LOL. Itna bhi Emotional nahi tha ye OS dearLOL


Such an emotional os payal ,i had tears in my eyes while reading it yaar . Jalal was so much in pain .
They were a happy family with their cute little princess amaya until Jalal faced some ups and downs in his business .
>>> oh really??Shocked was it that emotionalConfused 

Poor guy didnt want to see his wife disturbed and thus hided everything .
>>> yes, but he was in stress which let him to blurt out his anger on her, sometimes.Ouch

A small misunderstanding parted him away feom his beautiful wife and amaya .
Hahaha rukkaiya jalal's sister , sorry i couldnt stop myself from laughing when i read Jalal considers her as his sister .
>>> I was laughing too aviROFL

And in last wow rukkaiya brought them together , so sweet of her yaar.
>>> very strange haina??LOLLOL

Truly fabulous os payal, u penned jalal's emotions so well that i could feel his pain myself ,hats off to u dearie ,keep writing more .
>>> Thanks a ton for this lovely Comment aviHug

Thanks for pm 
Love you dearieHeart

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Posted: 03 May 2016 at 3:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by lovespari

Its Beautyful payalHug
really...loved it .
n the Last prt was jst BestBig smile
thank u fr pmSmile

Thankyou nidhiHug
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Posted: 03 May 2016 at 3:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Nonie12345

Fantastic OS PayalSmile
Thanks dear!!Smile
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Posted: 03 May 2016 at 3:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by melovesja

I like your choice of plot.Tongue very well put on  how one misunderstanding or a momently mistrust ruin the life of family and how the child go through in that situation. payal you are v good at emotion writing but here you so beautifully written about broken heart man who feel he lost his life and reason to live his love and his princess for ever.

"she is not here to say I am with you jalal..." for a min. I thought she died or what but you very well use those lines to describe his condition. whole scan in front of ruku was one is pour out hurt and anger other was embarrassed and shocked. in her self agony she can't read his facial expression . the man's fault is he want to prevent his family from stress which is not went  well with the situation. I like ruku's role and happy ending which is apt as title. their reunion was lovely.

I love the fb part were he was remembered their precious moment. 

ruku is like sister LOL

all in all it's superb. you have excellent hold on os writing .Clap keep writing with different plots because you are excellently  write  description, emotion and your hots are hot favoriteWink so keep rocking deari.Big smile

Res for comment mitaliTongue
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Posted: 03 May 2016 at 3:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shahbhavini

ClapPayal another mind blowing os...  Sachi mein... I just finished and have tears in my eyes... I can't see Rajat in painOuch  U have written so intently his pain... speechless... I am falling in love with your writing... One by one I am going to read your every single work...  U write emotion and romance equally with passionClap  I think in this OS Jodha over reacted but she was suffering for two months... and she saw Ruk and Jalal ... hugging...  any wife would react the same way... I felt really sad for little girl... That was most painful. I want second part for this OS... Jalal should not forgive Jodha so easily...LOL  me greedyEmbarrassed
Res for comment!!TongueLOL
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Posted: 03 May 2016 at 4:10am | IP Logged
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LOL
Isme hasne ki kya baat h??ConfusedLOL
bas hasi aa gayi...LOL
ohkLOL
do join me...LOL
btw I loved ur sig.siggie namuStarStar
thankyou diiBig smile

khud banai??

okLOL
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Posted: 04 May 2016 at 11:01am | IP Logged
Firstly sorry for being late payal Embarrassed
That was the best shot written by you to till date .. you have written flawlesslyClapStar
Brilliant starting with Jalal in pain drinking heavilyOuch then reminiscing fb scenes totally awesomeClap
So beautifully expressed relationships btw husband nd wife father nd daughter..Star
Jalal's enthu .. to give surprise Jo ...  everything had changed in a matter of minutes Confused... omg her accusation.Ouch.. JO crossed the limits Shocked.. he slapped her.CryOuch. she too waited for two months.Disapprove..
My heart cried for Lill amaya Cry... that was the biggest nightmare for any childOuch..All this happened coz of Ja hiding the matters from his wifeAngry... husband nd wife should not hesitate to share all issues related to work or friends Ermm.Approve.. hiding something means they r not sharing a healthy relationApprove.. oh mei kaha se kaha pauch gayii   ConfusedLOL
Surprise of this OS was Ruks .. she was such a cutie .. haha loved her character first time LOL
Waise ruks pe itna pyar q araha hei hahaha Wink
She played a crucial role in clearing Jos MU Tongue
Amaya nd her dad's reunion was  touchingCrySmileHeart
Superb ending Happy family reunion ... Finally all is wellBig smileHeart
Shall we get part two payal... JJ milan after brief separation Wink
We got a Super good news today naa payal so is OS ka next part toh banta hi hai plzzzBig smile
Thanks for pm dearieHug



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Yes we got a very good news and I am very happy. Will try to write dear!!Big smile

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