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Akdha OS: Come back Jo!! updated (23/4/2016) (Page 13)

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Posted: 24 April 2016 at 1:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ketaki1

Originally posted by sharmacatty

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Originally posted by ketaki1

Originally posted by sharmacatty

Originally posted by ketaki1

Originally posted by sharmacatty

wow.. you are the first one to comment on this os ketaki Big smileand u really liked it. Shocked


Originally posted by ketaki1

to start with it was quite emotional one..
>>> YepSmile

In the beginning I though that jo died or something..
>>> Yes initially I thought to show her deadLOL but then thought to give a happy ending after writing rubbishTongue

then you made it clear that she left him because of the misunderstanding...
and dumb jalal, he was thinking what might have happened that she left...dumbo she thought you were having an affair and you slapped her..think..
>>>>LOLLOL

I literally though that she might not come back, but she did...
It was nice...I liked itClap
>>>> I  am so happy to know that.Big smile

Thankyou so much for reading and commenting!!Hug

How couldn't I...I love your writing ...No matter whatsoever you write, you finally creates an awesome end to the story...Smile
I usually don't blush but right now I am really blushing reading thisBlushingBlushingLOL
Love you dearHug

I am so happy that I can make you blush...Embarrassed
It make me feel so important right now...Smile
You areBig smile
I am loving your commentsLOL
You should...i am typing at 1:34 am Sleepy...I would have been very pissed if you wouldn't ..LOL

 ha ha I was amazed to see ur proper comment at this hour. Thats why I couldn't control and replied immediatelyBig smile
proper comment...Shocked what do you mean by that??(kidding)...
>>> I  mean you wrote what u felt while readingSmile other than "Nice" and "Lovely"LOL

how can I not...I was about to go to sleep but the there came" you have a private message" and after seeing that it was yours that to an os...how would i miss it...Big smile after all I love your writing...
>>>> and I love your commentsTongue


 

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Posted: 24 April 2016 at 1:50am | IP Logged
Thankyou all for your likes and comments. I will reply soon.!!
PS: Avi, Thanks a lot for the lovely comment dear. !!

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Posted: 24 April 2016 at 2:45am | IP Logged
Its Beautyful payalHug
really...loved it .
n the Last prt was jst BestBig smile
thank u fr pmSmile

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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 10:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shruthikarthik

ResSmile

U still at ur mother's place??
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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 12:06pm | IP Logged
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Edited by melovesja - 25 April 2016 at 10:56pm

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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 9:13pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sharmacatty

Originally posted by shruthikarthik

ResSmile

U still at ur mother's place??
yepBig smile

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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 9:18pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by shruthikarthik

Originally posted by sharmacatty

Originally posted by shruthikarthik

ResSmile

U still at ur mother's place??
yepBig smile
OhkLOLSmile

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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 10:54pm | IP Logged

I like your choice of plot.Tongue very well put on  how one misunderstanding or a momently mistrust ruin the life of family and how the child go through in that situation. payal you are v good at emotion writing but here you so beautifully written about broken heart man who feel he lost his life and reason to live his love and his princess for ever.

"she is not here to say I am with you jalal..." for a min. I thought she died or what but you very well use those lines to describe his condition. whole scan in front of ruku was one is pour out hurt and anger other was embarrassed and shocked. in her self agony she can't read his facial expression . the man's fault is he want to prevent his family from stress which is not went  well with the situation. I like ruku's role and happy ending which is apt as title. their reunion was lovely.

I love the fb part were he was remembered their precious moment. 

ruku is like sister LOL

all in all it's superb. you have excellent hold on os writing .Clap keep writing with different plots because you are excellently  write  description, emotion and your hots are hot favoriteWink so keep rocking deari.Big smile



Edited by melovesja - 26 April 2016 at 7:26am

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