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Akdha OS: Come back Jo!! updated (23/4/2016) (Page 13)

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Posted: 23 April 2016 at 6:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by AkankshaENRIQUE

Day Dreaming

Aaj res nahi kia akkuConfused
Os padh lia kya???ShockedShockedShocked

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Posted: 23 April 2016 at 6:49am | IP Logged
Wonderful!!
I loved it!
Thanku for pm

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Posted: 23 April 2016 at 7:18am | IP Logged
Payu diHug
Incredible OS...Clap

Their sweet memories were jotted down exceptionally and I enjoyed them thoroughly...

The best part... Ruqs Finally united the lil cute family... Me for the first time liked ruqs...Wink

The pain... What to say about that part... just mind blowing... Depicting emotions so purely...

Thanks for the pm didu

love youHeart

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Posted: 23 April 2016 at 8:35am | IP Logged
It's superb Payal.
You describe Jalal's pain and their happy memories very well Clap
Poor Ruks.. when she get the slap.. I automatically  remember Laboni track when Jo slap Ruks and imagine their expressions LOL
Continue soon with other story Payal 
Thanks for the pm Big smile

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Posted: 23 April 2016 at 9:02pm | IP Logged
Fantastic OS!!
just love it..
Thanx for pm

Edited by dikshu16 - 23 April 2016 at 9:03pm

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Posted: 23 April 2016 at 10:46pm | IP Logged
Superb update payal. ..
U have written jalal pain very well. ..
At 1 point I thought jo was no more. ...
nd it was clear that they r parted becoz of miss understanding. ...
I like ruks she did god this time like a true sister. ..
I was more than happy that family United again...
Nd very thing cleard in 10 days...
Thanks for pm payal. ..

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Posted: 23 April 2016 at 11:29pm | IP Logged
Such an emotional os payal ,i had tears in my eyes while reading it yaar . Jalal was so much in pain .
They were a happy family with their cute little princess amaya until Jalal faced some ups and downs in his business .
Poor guy didnt want to see his wife disturbed and thus hided everything .
A small misunderstanding parted him away feom his beautiful wife and amaya .
Hahaha rukkaiya jalal's sister , sorry i couldnt stop myself from laughing when i read Jalal considers her as his sister .
And in last wow rukkaiya brought them together , so sweet of her yaar.
Truly fabulous os payal, u penned jalal's emotions so well that i could feel his pain myself ,hats off to u dearie ,keep writing more .
Thanks for pm 

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Posted: 24 April 2016 at 1:48am | IP Logged
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wow.. you are the first one to comment on this os ketaki Big smileand u really liked it. Shocked


Originally posted by ketaki1

to start with it was quite emotional one..
>>> YepSmile

In the beginning I though that jo died or something..
>>> Yes initially I thought to show her deadLOL but then thought to give a happy ending after writing rubbishTongue

then you made it clear that she left him because of the misunderstanding...
and dumb jalal, he was thinking what might have happened that she left...dumbo she thought you were having an affair and you slapped her..think..
>>>>LOLLOL

I literally though that she might not come back, but she did...
It was nice...I liked itClap
>>>> I  am so happy to know that.Big smile

Thankyou so much for reading and commenting!!Hug

How couldn't I...I love your writing ...No matter whatsoever you write, you finally creates an awesome end to the story...Smile
I usually don't blush but right now I am really blushing reading thisBlushingBlushingLOL
Love you dearHug

I am so happy that I can make you blush...Embarrassed
It make me feel so important right now...Smile
You areBig smile
I am loving your commentsLOL
You should...i am typing at 1:34 am Sleepy...I would have been very pissed if you wouldn't ..LOL

 ha ha I was amazed to see ur proper comment at this hour. Thats why I couldn't control and replied immediatelyBig smile
proper comment...Shocked what do you mean by that??(kidding)...
>>> I  mean you wrote what u felt while readingSmile other than "Nice" and "Lovely"LOL

how can I not...I was about to go to sleep but the there came" you have a private message" and after seeing that it was yours that to an os...how would i miss it...Big smile after all I love your writing...
>>>> and I love your commentsTongue


 

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