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Manan SS - The Last Song! (Part 7) up. 17/06

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New story!!!!! 
                              THE LAST SONG!

Prologue 

It is a dark night in Goa. Everyone's off to bed. A man in his forties is sitting by the piano in a church and humming his favourite tune. His shivering hands reach the piano and he slowly, yet gracefully starts playing it. He humms the tune and plays the piano. And only one face flashes before his eyes. His beautiful 7-yr-old lady love. 

"daddy! Once more! Play it again, daddy. Once more!

"sure my darling, here we go again!"

"can I too play that daddy?"

"why not sweetie! Come here! I'll teach you."

"wow! Daddy you're the best! I love you! Muah!"

The man smiles and continues playing the same tune.

~~~~***~~~~

Its burning!! There's fire all around.!! The yellow orange flames are reaching till the heights of the church. The curtains have burnt down and so have all other furniture in there. The beautiful and intricately designed glass windows have shattered in a million littles pieces and the walls are turning black. Slowly, yet rapidly. 

Two firemen carry the old man out of the church in an unconscious state. And then they bring out the... Piano! Piano turned all black.

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So guys, now what you have to say about this??! What do you perceive?  Plz let me know, because...you know...first impression is the last!! 
Come on, join in to another manan saga of love. 

Well, here by the word Love, I do not mean just the lovely bond shared by 2 soulmates, but it's also the love of our family, our support system, our guardians for life. 

'The Last Song' is about a lovely bond shared by a father and a daughter... And...2 inseparable soulmates tied together by destiny!! 

So now...jaldi se read, like, comment and let me know whether to head on with this story!!! Jaldi se post reply ka button dabao! Go! Go! Go!


Edited by MaNaN_trS - 17 June 2016 at 10:25am

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               INDEX!!

Prologue - up 
Characters - Pg 3


Edited by MaNaN_trS - 17 June 2016 at 10:24am
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Interesting
plz continue

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Posted: 21 April 2016 at 2:39pm | IP Logged
Interesting Concept Update Soon Waiting...

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Posted: 21 April 2016 at 3:37pm | IP Logged
Interesting prologue...
Wanna know more...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...

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plz cont

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Seems interesting... 

Continue soon... 

Please update soon the first chapter... 

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Lovely concept
Update soon

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