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"KUCH TOH HAI"-A SHRAMAN THREE SHOT-COMPLETED (Page 8)

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Posted: 24 April 2016 at 3:31pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by chicksoup

res res res! 
You finished it, you wonderful girl! Hug
Will read this tomorrow first thing when I can get to the comp! Day Dreaming


Soup! I cant wait to hear what you think of this story! As always waiting to hear from you. Love your in depth comments! :)

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Posted: 24 April 2016 at 7:32pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Onie...

Thanks a ton for updating so fast!!
Now coming to the last part. Oh Christ!! How beautiful was that! I loved how you portrayed Shravan's hesitation in admitting his feelings. He is scared after all happened years ago. And Suman's leap of courage. 

I am in awe of your writing. This TS was a masterpiece. 



-Onie

Thank you so much! I am really happy you liked it so much. Will endeavor to write more. Shravan's hesitation is normal. Even in the Promo he says "Bachpan ka pyaar, aaj bhi zuba par nahi atha".  I cant think of any other reason than his fear of rejection and his need to hear Suman verbalize his importance, his place in her life!

THAT is what I tried to achieve in this piece. I sure hope they give each of their complex emotions the right outlet in the story too!


Edited by MrDarcyfan - 24 April 2016 at 8:30pm

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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 7:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Gurveen

Their confession conversation was awesome and emotional
You totally nailed it
You depicted their thoughts very brilliantly
Write more ts in future

Thanks. I am just getting around to responding to all comments. If I miss any I am sorry. Yeah their thought process is what always interests me and I try to depict it in the scenes and the conversations. Yes I will endeavor to write more on ShraMan! Now that I started I hope to keep the momentum going. ShraMan and Nimik brought me out of my writer's block! Thankful to them! :)
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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 4:59pm | IP Logged
Lovely story.  Emotions were very well expressed.

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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 5:37pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by peachesandcream

Lovely story. Emotions were very well expressed.


Thanks! I am glad you enjoyed it! :)
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Posted: 09 May 2016 at 1:55pm | IP Logged
Amazing OS! I have read all of your works in this forum and they are very good.
Hope to see some more beautiful os from you.

Pm me when you write something new :)

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Posted: 09 May 2016 at 4:11pm | IP Logged
awesome ending
absolutely loved it
thank you for writing it

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Posted: 14 May 2016 at 10:33pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by dishadishki

Amazing OS! I have read all of your works in this forum and they are very good.
Hope to see some more beautiful os from you.

Pm me when you write something new :)


Just saw this response now. Thank you for it! I am glad you have read everything I wrote so far. Please do read the newest things from the last 2 weeks too and when you get time tell me what you think!

Thanks

Mandy

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