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"KUCH TOH HAI"-A SHRAMAN THREE SHOT-COMPLETED (Page 7)

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Posted: 24 April 2016 at 9:57am | IP Logged
Their confession conversation was awesome and emotional
You totally nailed it
You depicted their thoughts very brilliantly
Write more ts in future

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Posted: 24 April 2016 at 10:00am | IP Logged
This was beautiful
Normal conversation.. Practical talk.. I loved how u brought the image issue between.. The way Sumo is..this was bound to come between them.. Loved how she realised more than image he matters to her more..

I loved this story..

Keep writing on Shraman..

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Posted: 24 April 2016 at 10:27am | IP Logged
Oh man this was so good 
How I loved the talk they had no nonsense and to the point

Finally Sumo has come through all her fears and ego or whatsoever to be with the man who is the most important,

So it;s the end and I am greedy

Do write more 

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Posted: 24 April 2016 at 10:33am | IP Logged
I read all the parts in one go...such an awesome story you wrote...hope something like this will happen in the show too...

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Posted: 24 April 2016 at 10:58am | IP Logged
Thanks a ton for updating so fast!!
Now coming to the last part. Oh Christ!! How beautiful was that! I loved how you portrayed Shravan's hesitation in admitting his feelings. He is scared after all happened years ago. And Suman's leap of courage. 

I am in awe of your writing. This TS was a masterpiece. 



-Onie

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Posted: 24 April 2016 at 11:04am | IP Logged
WoW! That was perfect! I esp luvd the way Shravu pointed dat she was always stuck with an image problem; be it of a cool gal 10 yrs ago and now of a self reliant righteous woman. I see actually see this happening in the show! Grt work dear!
Hoping to read more from you... Big smile

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Posted: 24 April 2016 at 11:18am | IP Logged
Superb ts

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Posted: 24 April 2016 at 11:44am | IP Logged
Wow wow mandyHeart

PERFECT ENDING Day Dreaming

Really awesome

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