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"KUCH TOH HAI"-A SHRAMAN THREE SHOT-COMPLETED (Page 6)

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Posted: 24 April 2016 at 8:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by lazyshambhavi

Hey ...
Read all the parts in one go
That was an awsome fantabulous TS(wish it was longer,dil maange moreWink

All the parts were perfect especially the endingEmbarrassed

All is well that ends with hugs and...Wink

 BTW l am shambhavi 
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Thanks for your comment Shambhavi. Welcome to the forum, and glad you liked this story. I have an index now with 2 more One Shots. The link is on the front page of this story, check it out if you have the time. Hope you are enjoying the forum!

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Posted: 24 April 2016 at 9:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by MrDarcyfan

Originally posted by lazyshambhavi

Hey ...
Read all the parts in one go
That was an awsome fantabulous TS(wish it was longer,dil maange moreWink

All the parts were perfect especially the endingEmbarrassed

All is well that ends with hugs and...Wink

 BTW l am shambhavi 
New to the forumBig smile

Thanks for your comment Shambhavi. Welcome to the forum, and glad you liked this story. I have an index now with 2 more One Shots. The link is on the front page of this story, check it out if you have the time. Hope you are enjoying the forum!
Thank youuu
HugHug
OK i will read the os later ,not now.PROMISE
may l know ur name

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Posted: 24 April 2016 at 9:07am | IP Logged
@lazyshambhavi
Its Mandy! :)
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Posted: 24 April 2016 at 9:39am | IP Logged
that is one lovely TS...loved it...m dreaming...Embarrassed

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Posted: 24 April 2016 at 9:57am | IP Logged
Their confession conversation was awesome and emotional
You totally nailed it
You depicted their thoughts very brilliantly
Write more ts in future

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Posted: 24 April 2016 at 10:00am | IP Logged
This was beautiful
Normal conversation.. Practical talk.. I loved how u brought the image issue between.. The way Sumo is..this was bound to come between them.. Loved how she realised more than image he matters to her more..

I loved this story..

Keep writing on Shraman..

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Posted: 24 April 2016 at 10:27am | IP Logged
Oh man this was so good 
How I loved the talk they had no nonsense and to the point

Finally Sumo has come through all her fears and ego or whatsoever to be with the man who is the most important,

So it;s the end and I am greedy

Do write more 

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Posted: 24 April 2016 at 10:33am | IP Logged
I read all the parts in one go...such an awesome story you wrote...hope something like this will happen in the show too...

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