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Posted: 27 April 2016 at 12:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Arshi67

You've made Arnav's head an absolutely fascinating place to be in RB. 


This is my best Arnav I have written yet. The story is already my personal favorite. Hard to explain why though.


Edited by RockBarbie - 27 April 2016 at 12:28am

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Posted: 27 April 2016 at 2:25am | IP Logged
Well that was interesting.. loved the fourth generation of Watching.. she was quite intriguing character who mesmerised me like Arnav.. happy to see two friends being there for each others support when its needed.. loved the update. Smile

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Posted: 27 April 2016 at 5:29am | IP Logged
It just got into my nerves...so may twists...so many question...now ...update fast...Dying to read more.

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Posted: 27 April 2016 at 11:40am | IP Logged
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Is there anything I can really say to capture the intangible? Kindness, warmth, friendship, guilt... There is relief in all that is painful and melancholy in joy. I wonder if we are all masochists at some level. 




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Posted: 27 April 2016 at 10:07pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by dieforasr

It just got into my nerves...so may twists...so many question...now ...update fast...Dying to read more.


Got into your nerves?

Hope you mean that in a good way!!!
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Posted: 28 April 2016 at 1:16am | IP Logged
Oh, a new story by you!

There's a magnetism and lure that draws out the impatient in me, when I read both chapters. 

In chapter 1, Arnav's conversation with Anjali, has the feel of fingernails scrapping on metal, painful, unsure if it might boil into a full on fight, but needed to get the other of their backs.

Then he talks to Aman, and the unpleasantness gives way to surrender and sadness.

Yet, it is his conversation to Khushi and later Lavanya that bring the fascination with him to the fore. Resignation, recognition, courage, acceptance, yearning...

If this will be one of your favourite stories, then I expect this magnetism to him to reach fever pitch.

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Posted: 28 April 2016 at 9:51pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by albmum14

Oh, a new story by you!

There's a magnetism and lure that draws out the impatient in me, when I read both chapters. 

In chapter 1, Arnav's conversation with Anjali, has the feel of fingernails scrapping on metal, painful, unsure if it might boil into a full on fight, but needed to get the other of their backs.

Then he talks to Aman, and the unpleasantness gives way to surrender and sadness.

Yet, it is his conversation to Khushi and later Lavanya that bring the fascination with him to the fore. Resignation, recognition, courage, acceptance, yearning...

If this will be one of your favourite stories, then I expect this magnetism to him to reach fever pitch.


Maybe it all began when I started re-reading and re-watching Captain America. I know it makes no sense to anyone but it kind of works out in my head LOL There is something about people who feel like they belong to a different time because the choices they have made are irrevocable, the repercussions of their actions have life changing impact on many people. They are stuck between the moment where the choices don't exist and the present; they are constantly getting torn by those two extremes.

makes sense?

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Posted: 28 April 2016 at 10:08pm | IP Logged
This is beautiful !!!

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