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ArHi: Innocence to a half-mad city [Complete] (Page 89)

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Posted: 08 May 2017 at 5:12am | IP Logged
Have started enjoying the pace of your story , initially I was a bit disconcerted, probably because
your kind of writing is far different from most FF's  The fast paced yet succinct updates are
a pleasure to read.
Arnav's family has made rich by arms dealing and he feels guilty on their behalf and wants to atone 
to mankind for his father's sins.
That last call is probably to Khushi, if I am right happy that their relationship has progressed
this far.
Keep writing as and when your heart desires , readers like me are not going anywhere.Smile

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Posted: 08 May 2017 at 9:26am | IP Logged
This was worth the wait...

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Posted: 08 May 2017 at 10:53am | IP Logged
Awesome chapter:)! Loved it:)! Can't wait to read about Arnav and Khushi spending their time together:)! I'm glad that Arnav vented out his frustrations with his family and walked away from his past. Maybe he should start partnership with Khushi's watch company.

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Posted: 09 May 2017 at 2:31am | IP Logged
Ten years sounds good :-*
Loved the chapter 

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Posted: 09 May 2017 at 9:48pm | IP Logged
Welcome back with an awesome chapter! The satisfaction of making the psycho trio fight among themselves! Can't wait for next!

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Posted: 10 May 2017 at 6:06am | IP Logged
Hello. 

It took me a while to place the title of this story. Recently, someone gifted me a book of Maya Angelou's poetry. I must ask - does the poem and what it makes you feel an important part of the writing process? 

1. When I read the story for the first time, I assumed, for reasons  I will expand on shortly, assumed that it would all end with Arnav's family and him moving on their way to fix their relationship and everything would work out. 

My reason for assuming that - You know how they resolve things in white people shows? There's always a conversation held between the two people with poignant background music and an awareness that there's some complex metaphor at play? That. Till a while ago, I sincerely believed that is exactly how things work out. 

Now, and this is the harder part, something I'm still coming to terms with - that is how I want things to work out even though objectively, it's a ridiculous fantasy. But it is something I desire. 

And it is precisely that desire that colored my perception of this story. 

Now, I realize that just because Shyam and Anjali's relationship may (may being the operative word) not work out, doesn't mean Anjali will automatically realize her folly and at least want to resolve things with Arnav. 

I feel like a part of him wants resolution, wants acknowledgement from his family. I now realize that he may never get it. 

And that thought breaks my heart. 



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Posted: 10 May 2017 at 6:13am | IP Logged
I want to dedicate a separate comment to the past - Arnav's father. 

I'm so confused about this part - because I just don't know what I will do if I were in such a situation. Would I have the strength to do what Arnav did? Or would I want to ignore it? Or would I try to handle it internally, without sullying his name? 

I've read this update thrice already, since it was last posted - because I just didn't know what I would do and I wanted answers. I still don't have an answer. 

What would you do? 

-V

PS: saw that your hand is injured? I hope you're doing okay. All my good will. 

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2. His grandmother pisses me OFF. 

I know adults are humans too, and they aren't perfect and no one should expect perfection from them. But I FIRMLY believe once you are a care giver to a child you don't have the luxury of claiming imperfection as an excuse. And I think it's extremely irresponsible of her to do so much damage and "yes I was wrong but it was my son, I'm only human". That's just making excuses for not being in control of your emotions. I can't imagine the abuse he faced. It's very disgusting and I'm glad he told her off for this shit. Also her "maybe if I talk to Anjali you both will stop fighting" is so demeaning to the issue in itself. It's not just a sibling spat, what they're having. The fact that she'd reduce it to that is just so so wrong! 

3. It's unrealistic to expect that Anjali and Arnav will ever truly be brother and sister in the true sense of the word "sibling" and everything it entails. Whatever affection she shows his way (injection incident) seems to be designed to confuse or hurt him. Or maybe, it's just a byproduct of blood and prolonged exposure. 

4. Ten years, please. How incredibly dramatic! I love it! 

Also, story time! 

Spring Break is absolute insanity at NYU and after like a day of partying I'd absolutely had enough. I couldn't bear one more day of it and I desperately wanted to leave. 

So, I did. I decided to drive to the Grand Canyon. It's a 2-3 day drive, depending on the stops and I did it. And the peace I felt when I was on the road is absolutely unparalleled - and I know Arnav deserves to feel this peace. 

What I'm trying to say is, facing situations head on is overrated. Sometimes all you need is music, a car with good mileage and a vague sense of direction. 

Or maybe, you need snow. 

{sorry for not doing these in one comment. I just don't want to go back and keep editing. This is an easier way for me to keep track of how my thoughts are evolving/fixating) 

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