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ArHi: Innocence to a half-mad city [Complete] (Page 86)

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Posted: 08 April 2017 at 10:00pm | IP Logged
As someone mentioned earlier you really take FF writings to another level,
they are deep & intense , dreamy yet  real  ,and also have a  feel -good facor
there are so many nuances , i often read the updates twice or thrice.
The transition from the last chapter to this is a bit too fast for the reader 
for me at least 
I adore Aman  

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Posted: 08 April 2017 at 11:35pm | IP Logged
I really love this story.  All the characters have equal footage and importance. And I like that all characters are linked to each other 

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Posted: 09 April 2017 at 6:55am | IP Logged

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Posted: 17 April 2017 at 3:30am | IP Logged
Hello. 
Came back to the site on a complete whim. lucky to have fo found + read your story. 

I note how the discourse on the Internet that attempts to break the toxic narrative around sexuality, abuse, rape and mental health is reflected in your story. The way these characters muddle through life while simultaneously knowing their worth and what's okay when what's not is refreshing (for lack of a better word). 

Makes me feel less guilty about being nearly 21 and still not knowing what to do with my life. 

I like how the reflection of the discourse weaves through the touch of drama so intrinsic to any self respecting fanfiction - just enough to make it realistic yet elusive. 

I feel that Anjali needs to be delved into more. It's easy to dismiss her as a vapid narcissist with some serious issues, but it doesn't do Arnav or for that matter, this story, justice. 

Coming back to the site was an indulgence. I'm not sure I will be back again. But I am glad to have read the story so far. 
Sorry for the ambiguity, I know it can be irritating. 

Glad to see you up and writing, Barbie. 




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Posted: 18 April 2017 at 1:33pm | IP Logged
very Nice 

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Posted: 18 April 2017 at 8:52pm | IP Logged
Read all the 19 chapters ib one go. I havent been this excited to read stuff in some time now. Thank you so much for writing this. It is beautiful the way Khushi and Arnav's relationship comes to be. All the characters seem so well constructed. Feeling super bad for Aman. It would have been awesome if they ended up together. 
Also, the tone and style of your writing are great. Its easy flowing and yet is equipped with good vocabulary.
Great work. 
Write more chaps soon. Please. Would love to read more

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Posted: 21 April 2017 at 1:09am | IP Logged
Hey Barb! How is it going? Missing you and your babies ;) I love Aman even more now. Love the camaraderie between Khushi and Aman...It's so easy to be upfront when people appreciate and accept honesty. I can't believe it is illegal to love someone of the same gender in our society. My heart goes out to LGBT community and the issues they face everyday.

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Posted: 26 April 2017 at 4:53pm | IP Logged
Nice update 
After a long time I came to IF

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