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ArHi: Innocence to a half-mad city [Complete] (Page 8)

meera30 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 10:48am | IP Logged
There are few forms of preferential treatment that are as wistfully melancholic as your writing. So while Y2K languishes in the want of her maker's attention, readers like me are here soaking up the essence of complicated lives and relationship rainbows. Keep writing. One way or the other, we are winning this race you are running in your head!

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Kishmish IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 10:51am | IP Logged
Interesting meeting between Khushi and Arnav ... 

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elinad Senior Member

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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 11:19am | IP Logged
Wonderful update Smile

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pinkly Goldie

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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 12:38pm | IP Logged
I loved the lighthearted scenes in the beginning. I liked Khushi's precise answers and her understanding.

Anjali is too pushy. Looks like some major incidents have happened in Arnav's family. Because of that there is not much affection between arnav and anjali.

Lavanya was really sweet. She seems like a true friend.

Very nicely written chapter. I liked it. Continue soon

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RockBarbie Goldie

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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 7:38pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Kishmish

Great to be reading more from you KB/RB ... Always loved your writing style ... 
Arnav seems to be in quite a brooding mood ... 
wearing a watch which doesn't work any more ... almost picking up a fight with 
his sister whom he almost prays to LOL

By any chance did the flavour of the tea (jasmine mixed with orange) remind 
him of someone special ? Khushi perhaps ... LOL 
Overall in a funny mood ... 
Only Aman seems to be the love of his life at the moment ! 
Finally walking off from the party and finding himself in front of a shop 
called "Watching!!!" LOL

Looks like new update killed your buzz LOL
amaypranay IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 9:23pm | IP Logged
All I can say I simply love this one...RB your terrific with words... This seems so engaging and captivating!!!

Waiting for the next Smile

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Mrieshka Senior Member

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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 10:01pm | IP Logged
Wow-- another update--awesome. What is going on with Arnav and his family. Seems complicated dynamics in friendship and relationship. What us bothering Arnav- he is in so much melancholany mood with weird sense of humor. It was refreshing to see genuine and original Khushi. Look forward for story to evolve further.

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Sur_10 Goldie

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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 11:34pm | IP Logged
People like Anjali are parasites... At some point, I have stopped feeling sympathy for them. The self righteous claim of doing the right thing for everyone sucks. I am glad your Khushi is not like that. :)

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