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ArHi: Innocence to a half-mad city [Complete] (Page 63)

prati_incept Senior Member

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Posted: 15 September 2016 at 8:10pm | IP Logged
It seems very unlikely for his friends forgetting his birthday.. hope they make it up to him.. loneliness is one of the worst feelings specially on such days.. I'm happy they have each other..

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saack Groupbie

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Posted: 15 September 2016 at 9:53pm | IP Logged
Really sweet!! I loved the way Khushi celebrated his birthday. Just what he needed...simple and uncomplicated.
They both have a lot in common in their past experiences. Hope they help each other get rid of their past baggage, move on and lead a fulfilling life together.
Why are Aman and Lavanya suddenly distancing themselves from him? 

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srmirji Goldie

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Posted: 16 September 2016 at 10:38am | IP Logged
Brilliant update and apt title.
I like the closeness they share... It's different and healthy for recuperation...


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aamir18 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 16 September 2016 at 12:24pm | IP Logged
I absolutely adore this story. There is something so beautiful about it, that goes far beyond the way in which you have written it.

Fabulous work, RockBarbie.

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Arjuhisis IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 17 September 2016 at 12:41am | IP Logged
Good to see u back RB
Good to see Arnav loosening up
The story is really moving well
Feeling good for Khushi - Atlast she is free

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ocean28 Groupbie

Joined: 21 February 2013
Posts: 185

Posted: 17 September 2016 at 11:11am | IP Logged
I am not savvy enough to make any meaningful comment on this fiction.  Except, like all of your other fictions it is more than it seems.  Like the others it also is beyond the mundane.  Thus interpretation becomes difficult.  Your story is filled with symbols.  What does a watch maker khushi signify?  Is she Time herself that heals all wounds?  
Is she the future for the end of Arnav's torments?  Arnav wearing a watch that does not work signify he being stuck in the past and not being able to move on.  For life is about flowing, moving on, isn't it?  Your writing is exceptional, imbued with so much meanings, and I am loving reading this story.  Having said all this I want to wander back to the mundane cannot wait for a troubled khushi and an even more troubled Arnav to fall in love.
Thank you for this very interesting fiction.

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coolpd93 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 23 May 2013
Posts: 3015

Posted: 18 September 2016 at 3:36am | IP Logged
Gawd..i just missed the chapter.i like d camaraderie b/w them.guess they have taken the step ahead unconsciously.may be going with the flow.or this comfort could be a m just enjoying these.sometimes these two never need words.and whats payal trying here?;)
But yeah its not everyday she sees her sis lyk this:)khushi's involvement to go out wid arnav wud hav geared her up a lil..
Hope arnav soon steps out of d lull he built around him and takes that one step:)

Btw i love d caption of this piece;)

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serialwatcher16 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 18 September 2016 at 6:17am | IP Logged

Just coming back to the world of fan fictions after a long real life imposed break and what do I see. 
A good day I guess. 

And this is me talking to myself, So do I directly jump to the next chapter taking advantage of my late entry or should I traverse through the pages strolling and reading everybody's comments as I would have done back then.

Deep breath!

Thanks for writing.

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