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ArHi: Innocence to a half-mad city [Complete] (Page 50)

archnahardik123 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 21 July 2016 at 6:49pm | IP Logged
After reading this update I feel like throwing up. This is horrible what he did to her. 
I think here Khushi is not the imperfect one but Its Teddy who has issue. He is insecure, flawed and imperfect one. He is jealous of her perfection that's why he is making her week day by day. He knows she is innocent and that's why he took advantage of it and twist her mind. 
Payal saw who he is, even Khushi knows but she. Didn't have courage to fight back. Don't know for how long she suffered. Did she fight herself out of got help from Payal?

Right now all I want is to make teddy a teddy bears down punch him all the time. Sick man.
Loved the easy conversation between Arnav and Khushi. She was so horribly tamed by teddy that she could find out how much calories each food have, just by looking at it. Teddy didn't even let her eat I name of calories. 
Their bond is getting strong and she can understand him well. Because she too try to smile while she was broken within.
Too good RB. Marvellous update.

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pinkly Goldie

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Posts: 2217

Posted: 22 July 2016 at 12:05am | IP Logged
It is difficult to read about Teddy's cruelty. Khushi should have been the one to give teddy sleeping pills... Not the other way.

I liked the way arnav revealed little bit of his problems to khushi. I liked Khushi's words to arnav to go back to store with her. Nice chapter.
MysticRiver IF-Addictz

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Posted: 22 July 2016 at 12:11am | IP Logged
very nice update..Clap
docs Senior Member

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Posted: 22 July 2016 at 12:38am | IP Logged
Heart breaking:(
mystique_girl Goldie

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Posted: 22 July 2016 at 12:40am | IP Logged
Oh my God...I have just read Chapter 5...and I am speechless.
I have no words to praise your writing, anything I say would be less. I have no words to express my liking for your characters as well. Anything I say would do great injustice.

Just wanted to say, so much love among the three of them, and yet so much love wasted (in lack of a better word).
-Roshini- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 22 July 2016 at 2:09am | IP Logged
Nice update
srmirji Goldie

Joined: 22 August 2007
Posts: 1230

Posted: 24 July 2016 at 5:39pm | IP Logged
Brilliantly written...I read it thrice both bits...
What kind of a husband is Teddy? I'm sure people like this exist... i have tremors even thinking of being in such a situation... poor khushi.. It's not pity but sadness... Looking fwd to know how she ca me out of this suffocating marriage... To top the shitty marriage brilliant sex too...

Arnav-khushi conversation and the wisdom shared made me suddenly look into my own life and do a mini assessment...

They are giving space to each other in each other's life... 

Thank you for the update
zainza IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 25 July 2016 at 12:09pm | IP Logged

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