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ArHi: Innocence to a half-mad city [Complete] (Page 5)

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 10:21am | IP Logged
Great to be reading more from you KB/RB ... Always loved your writing style ... 
Arnav seems to be in quite a brooding mood ... 
wearing a watch which doesn't work any more ... almost picking up a fight with 
his sister whom he almost prays to LOL

By any chance did the flavour of the tea (jasmine mixed with orange) remind 
him of someone special ? Khushi perhaps ... LOL 
Overall in a funny mood ... 
Only Aman seems to be the love of his life at the moment ! 
Finally walking off from the party and finding himself in front of a shop 
called "Watching!!!" LOL

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 10:59am | IP Logged
interesting start...Clap

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 12:41pm | IP Logged
I am in love even with your 2 line summary. How brilliantly you write!!!

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 7:01pm | IP Logged
I am so excited to see your new story. 
Loved the way you describe characters of your story. 
I agree what that man said to Arnav for wearing watch which is not working. But can understand why he wear it. He wants to feel close to his parents. 
The cat mouse fight between brother and sister was awesome. But no matter how annoying anjali may be, but sometimes  such kind of people helps you keep on going in life. If she would not be around him, he might lose peace of his mind.
So Aman is gay and Arnav knows about his feeling for him. Still they are best friends, interesting. Looking forward to know more about them.
Name of the shop watching carry so much depth in it. You can think of it in any way. 
Let's see if this shop can help him.
Looking forward to read more.
Are you writing this story in your blog? If yes then I will follow there because sometimes I miss update here. I can get notifications from blog,Big smile

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 11:46pm | IP Logged
I have always liked "your" Arnavs...
Watching! 


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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 11:55pm | IP Logged
loved it... very interesting dear...
u are the most unique writter on this forum...!!

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Posted: 23 April 2016 at 1:15am | IP Logged
Awesome start

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Love loved it!
Cant wait to read more!

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