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ArHi: Innocence to a half-mad city [Complete] (Page 48)

SharuAG Senior Member

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Posted: 21 July 2016 at 1:59am | IP Logged
Two broken souls trying to fight to stay Strong and live day by day.

I can see that they will help each other to fix the broken pieces within them

A cruel reality in our world. The sick people who portrays as human beings but acts as wild animals. They would go any length to get what they wanted.

Teddy: I m trying to figure out how sick he was...

Plastering a fake identity, showing that he cares but wants the other person to walk the line he draws. A minor slip is marked as not following what he asked to do..

How controlling one can be, asking others to hold the breath till he gives permission to release...

I can imagine how suffocating it would have been for Khushi... Though she was in oblivion, it shows that she fought it back.

She must have been very strong to fought a battle of pretense.

Cause those who lives with mercural style are hard to fight, and they camouflage so well, changing from one extreme to the other. Only a very determined and strong people can fight against them and get away

Will the slowly building friendship would turn into something beautiful?

The building of clock, would time help tjem to bond?

I belive time is the best medication for all, and I m holding on to the Time and your story..

Edited by SharuAG - 21 July 2016 at 10:12am

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N0306 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 21 July 2016 at 4:54am | IP Logged
Fabulously mind blowing update.. It is like a beautiful delicate smooth cloth is getting unfold in front of you and the intricate designs are getting revealed slowly and the feeling awe.. This is how I felt reading this update..

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Sur_10 Goldie

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Posted: 21 July 2016 at 5:02am | IP Logged
I was waiting for this one... This flashback thing was downright scary. 
That moment when Arnav realizes he has no where to go was so... real. We are all set into such schedules that there's nobody and no place go to, which is a sorry thing.

You write really well. :)

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anjs IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 21 July 2016 at 5:57am | IP Logged

this situation with Arnav is so so complicated...

whereas what Khushi has gone through is total horrible, wonder how she set herself free... it seems like she was very weak earlier, hence my question.

Their bond is getting strong with each day. love their casual talks, its so easy n the camaraderie is awesome

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Lily30 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 21 July 2016 at 6:18am | IP Logged
Loved part 8, brilliantClap
Khushi has had a horrible pastCry
Love the way both are connecting with each other, eager for the next part.
Thank you for the pmBig smile

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MDTharun IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 21 July 2016 at 6:39am | IP Logged
Teddy had broken khushi inch by inch . He is a psycho , how did khushi even managed to live with him ? Payal's  invitation to her  sister for spending some quality time has invited physical & emotional torture for khushi . Teddy guy is crazy , he has given sleeping pills mixed water to khushi so that she doesn't go visit her sister . Khushi' s marriage with Teddy is a nightmare .
Arnav - Khushi are hunting for things to make the antic clock . Arnav is messed up at the moment , he is miserable with & without Aman & Lavanya . Khushi reads him like a book because she had been fake smiling and acting Happy for years . 
Arnav has grabbed the offer to spend some time in Khushi's shop to stay away from the loneliness which is eating him . 
Very nice portrayal of emotions .

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amaypranay IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 21 July 2016 at 7:49am | IP Logged
Outstanding Clap Brilliantly penned...

Happiness is with them now... It's a feeling they'll feel soon!!!

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archnahardik123 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 21 July 2016 at 7:57am | IP Logged
I will be back.

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