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ArHi: Innocence to a half-mad city [Complete] (Page 43)

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Posted: 25 June 2016 at 3:52am | IP Logged
So excited!
~Edit~ 

I was hoping to be able to form a more coherent response to this update if I have it a little time to sink in. But I find that it just leaves me more and more spellbound each time I think about it. 

I could use some words - heartbreaking, stunning, cathartic even - but none of them are adequate to convey just how exquisite this was. 

Oh to love and not to love. The many colours and forms of love. The gift of touch. A touch of love. What the heart craves despite the mind telling you it cannot happen, it will not happen. What the heart wants to give when the mind knows it cannot. Sigh. 

Sometimes there is no alternative to pain and heartbreak. And when that happens to good people, it is truly sad. Sigh.

Must you write so well, Madam Goddess? My heart will squeeze itself in the ribcage and burst. 


Edited by vgedin - 25 June 2016 at 6:55am

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Posted: 25 June 2016 at 5:35am | IP Logged
Loved part 7 Clap
Lovely dialogue between Aman and Arnav Clap
Eager for the next part.
Thank you for the pm Big smile

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Posted: 25 June 2016 at 5:56am | IP Logged
Both Vimal and Aman want something from Arnav. I love how you showed the contrast between an Arnav unwilling to give that something and one unable to give that something. 
Arnav and Aman's conversation was a great illustration of the chasm that exists between being in love, and loving someone. 

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Posted: 25 June 2016 at 6:03am | IP Logged
Vimal Raizada & Manohar Jha had been involved on illegal export of weapons which teen Arnav has found out .Vimal wanted keep all this shady business under wraps which seemed to be impossible . Vimal wanted Arnav's silence which he never got .
Aman is a gay , though Arnav knows his friends feelings for him he is not in the same page as his friend . Aman wants Arnav to reciprocate his feelings which again seems impossible . Wondering how did these two guys survive without ruining their friendship . Aman - Lavanya - Arnav share a complicated friendship .


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Posted: 25 June 2016 at 6:04am | IP Logged
Perfect! Loved the conversation!

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Posted: 25 June 2016 at 6:20am | IP Logged
intriguing update..Clap

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Posted: 25 June 2016 at 10:27am | IP Logged
Hello friend
Oh, so sad, Aman and Arnav, what a situation.
Both love each other, at different capacity
Feels sorry for Aman, could feel Arnav's emotional rollercoaster.
But love them both, beautifully written.
Arnav's past , all is not well in the paradise, Curious to know.
Thanks for the pm and story
Thank u

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Posted: 25 June 2016 at 10:45am | IP Logged
At the risk of stealing someone's words - "Must you write so well, Madam Goddess? My heart will squeeze itself in the ribcage and burst"

Powerful writing. And I might just have fallen in love all over again - knowing that my heart will break. There is beauty in despair. And poignance in yearning. And when it comes from you...

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