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ArHi: Innocence to a half-mad city [Complete] (Page 4)

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Posted: 21 April 2016 at 11:27pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by bakwas_serial

- So from 17 year olds Y2K to 30 year olds Smile   This is different.  A 30 year old rich man, maybe in a one-sided relationship, a close gay buddy who is interested in him but he is not, a sister who chooses to live in a dreamland . 

He seems unsettled, for a lack of better word.  Wonder if  Watching will repair more than his dad's watch.  Jasmine tea calms my frazzled nerves, maybe he needs to drink more of it. Smile

  Waiting for the story to unfold.   


Jasmine tea for the win Big smile

And with this I turned to poo-color. W*F man! LOL


Edited by RockBarbie - 21 April 2016 at 11:26pm

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Posted: 21 April 2016 at 11:28pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by rk2127

New story and that to novel length Thumbs Up


Aman and Arnav's bond seems interesting. A gay best friend who is falling for Arnav but knows he is in for a heart break.

Looking forward to read more and more.


Maybe not Smile
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Posted: 21 April 2016 at 11:30pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by N0306

Originally posted by RockBarbie

Originally posted by N0306

Love the shop name.. Ha ha. Just a quick question are you nervous or in hurry? just felt like this was not your best shot.. Love the start, characterisation everything... Just felt a little rushed...

But I m super excited to read the story further..did you say novel length.., for that muaaahhh


Not nervous. Not rushed. Nope.

Its intended to be this way.

Sorry, if it was disappointing.



I hope I didn't offend you.. You are one of the authors that touch my heart with your writing..

If it was intended to be like that.. I will just wait for the story to unfold..

You will never disappoint me.. You are amazing..


Not at all. Sometimes some works just won't make a dash of sense to you or you wont connect with it. It happens with me too. And that's okay.

No worries Smile

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Posted: 21 April 2016 at 11:34pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Tiramisu_coffee

:-) good to see ya, Barb! I wish I had a Mojito to go with this update! My boo's heartbroken :-( Aww I want to give him a hug and a smile n tell him that he will find his Arnav one day! Anjali is oblivious - that handicap must be really hard to deal with for ppl around her! Lavanya is smart n polite - why must u venture outside the stereotypes? All skinny beautiful girls are bitches ... And i really hope WATCHING is not owned by some 55 years old perv who's living his jawani ke din vicariously!!  


I am super happy to see you are rooting for Aman :=) Humanity is the villain in this story Smile
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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 12:27am | IP Logged
Very different concept.
Chap one written fabulous

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 3:19am | IP Logged
Interesting concept please do continue
Looking forward to reading more

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 3:29am | IP Logged
Loved summery
Plz continue

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Loved it...i'm a great fan of ur works... 

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