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ArHi: Innocence to a half-mad city [Complete] (Page 39)

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Posted: 10 June 2016 at 11:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shafqee80

Nyc update ...what is d problem wd anjali ...is she self obsessed ...her pain her happiness ..her everything matters alot ..doesnt it


Thanks. She is...Anjali. More on her later.


Originally posted by docs

Wo teddy is that person who wants to control  the wife in all aspects as if she has no mind to make her own decisions. And yeah it's highly romanticised over the ages! 
Payal ...I haven't formed an opinion yet. 
Anjali... you have ruined not just your relationship with your brother but his spirit as well...
Waiting for more 


That is Teddy, yeah. More on Payal in future chapters. We have just started :)

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Posted: 10 June 2016 at 11:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SANJANA9167

Why suddenly anjali showing white flag to arnav!!??
Seeing arnav and giving pain if words may tired her,what exactly will it do to arnav if she lived as a little brother after all the odds she had thrown at him.
No doubt arnav still wants anjali back,but was he ready to face her love coated words after hearing ears full of poised words for years .
I doubt that.
Nice update
Thanks for pm.


Is she really showing white flag? Or is she being herself? Arnav will always want Anjali in his life for the things that she has done and what they have gone through.

Thanks for writing in.


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Posted: 10 June 2016 at 12:00pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by archnahardik123

Marvellous display of emotions in this update. I loved Arnav of your story. He is simple, sensitive and don't hesitate in showing his weakness in front of his friends. 
Can understand why he feel so sad about his broken relationship with anjali. After reading this chapter 
we see how loving and caring anjali was before their parents death. Don't know why she believe that he is responsible for their death, but hopefully she might have realised her mistakes and now she is trying to make upto him. 
But now he is too afraid of her speaking normally. 
I couldn't come back to comment on Khushi's life because of some urgent work. But I was really hurt reading how Khushi suffered in her marriage. And she was in that marriage for I think 16years. I am scared what else that sick man might have done to her. Was it an arrange marriage or he himself purposed her, seeing how innocent she is and he could mould her according to his likes?
Payal is right it's miracle that  Khushi is still functioning. Because after living so many years with that phsycho, anyone would have ended up in mental hospital. 
Will these two broken soul find peace in each other? Will Khushi think of being in relation with anyone after living in hell? Will she give a  chance again to her heart?
I waiting to know.
Thanks for marvellous and heart touching update.


I think its time for an anecdote from the past. Maybe not the whole shebang but at least the basics of it - his relationship with his parents, Anjali and stuff that they were going through.

Take your time to comment. No hurry.

She hasn't spent entire 16 years with her husband. Some. Enough to destroy her self worth.

Thanks!

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Posted: 10 June 2016 at 12:00pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Awaari-

A Beautiful piece of work in this fully-mad world Heart
Would love to read more Smile


Thank you :)

Welcome :)

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Posted: 10 June 2016 at 12:07pm | IP Logged
How can one do that to their brother ?

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Posted: 10 June 2016 at 12:30pm | IP Logged
If it's irony, it's very clever. His name is Teddy, but Khushi is his toy to mold however he wants to. I want to hug all of Arnav's pieces, put him back together and give him the years he lost to insecurity and loneliness as Anjali shut him out of her heart.

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Posted: 10 June 2016 at 3:41pm | IP Logged
Brilliant update

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