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ArHi: Innocence to a half-mad city [Complete] (Page 33)

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Posted: 06 June 2016 at 8:46am | IP Logged
Khushi had been married to cold blooded psycho . He had controlled khushi like a puppet . Even as small as perfume she used had to be qualified by that scum . What happened to Teddy ? How did even khushi survive for two years in that marriage .?
Payal has learnt her lessons , she has met ASR to ensure that her sister is being friends with sane & good man . Looks like she approves Arnav , so she has given the green signal for making the grand father clock 

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Posted: 06 June 2016 at 1:19pm | IP Logged

A kid, she is mere 18, already married.  Forget about having necessary education/expertise to be financially independent, does she even possess self- knowledge, or is even emotionally mature.

So he strung her like a puppet.  He is a master of the carrot/stick game- cannot use the perfume but you get to meet your aunt.  Not sure why it a sign of  love when your spouse dictates what you wear. Is it a need for approval?  (trying to understand the likes of Payal, Khushi is too young, she is conditioned not thinking independently). 

Many a time self takes a back seat for the sake of a relationship.  Do we even know when to draw a line?  Couples, friends, amongst siblings or a parent/child.
 

There is an ease in relationship between Arnav and Khushi.   Just like with Lavanya, Arnav relationship with Aman is unbalanced- he gains (unintentionally maybe) more from it than Aman.

 

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Posted: 06 June 2016 at 1:53pm | IP Logged
I am a big fan of yours as you write stories that are so out of the box ,but your characters carry so much character in the way they look at the world ,they have their faults ,and insecurities but it adds to the storyb,and givesit added power ,we the readers are pulled along with you,on this journey where we discover new concepts and new way of viewing the world ,looking fwd to more .

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Posted: 06 June 2016 at 9:14pm | IP Logged
What an unhealthy relationship between Khushi and Teddy. However it is not uncommon especially in so many arranged marriages even nowadays. Young girl is told whole life to please hubby and family and they loose their own identity completely to please them and worse is that everyone take them happily married couple/family and some of them spend their whole life in this pseudo kind of happiness. Waiting to know more about Khushi and this Teddy, I hope they are not together anymore.

It was nice meeting between Payal and Arnav. I can see already easy comrademanship developing between Khushi and Arnav. Both understand each other very well without using much words. So they are going for hunting clock-- may be it will be a unique kind of date for them( picturising in my headTongue
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Posted: 06 June 2016 at 9:58pm | IP Logged
I'm wondering how long did Khushi actually stay with Teddy? Such a lunatic

Khushi needs perfume to bloom her life with a fragrance of love, which I believe walked right into her door, now that's something!!!

A very apt conversation between Payal and Arnav! It's good times ahead for all, feeling the positivity around them :)))

Amazingly penned,Rb!

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Posted: 06 June 2016 at 11:19pm | IP Logged
Wow, you are updating this frequently *crosses fingers*
This was creepy, the flashback and all. Kind of explains Khushi's behavior and it's amazing she's still standing after all this.

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Posted: 07 June 2016 at 12:11am | IP Logged
Interesting! 

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Posted: 07 June 2016 at 3:22am | IP Logged
very interesting and awesome update 
Arnav past is upsetting but he is bless to have terific friends like Aman and Lavanyah and the threesome tries best to make each other happy. I hope someday Arnav equation with his family change for good. 
The peak in Khushi's past was very weird. He was manipulating her and seems a pshyco. It's wonderful that Khushi came back to pisitivity in her life after spending miserable time with him. 
Looking forward to read more

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