ArHi: Innocence to a half-mad city [Complete] - Page 3

Intriguing... 😊 wud b luking fwd to the next update...

Nice start
Looking forward to it

:-) good to see ya, Barb! I wish I had a Mojito to go with this update! My boo's heartbroken :-( Aww I want to give him a hug and a smile n tell him that he will find his Arnav one day! Anjali is oblivious - that handicap must be really hard to deal with for ppl around her! Lavanya is smart n polite - why must u venture outside the stereotypes? All skinny beautiful girls are bitches ... And i really hope WATCHING is not owned by some 55 years old perv who's living his jawani ke din vicariously!!  

Originally posted by: meera30

The Aman and Arnav dynamic is interesting. Friendship and romantic love are always just one moment of physical awareness away. Gender has never been a barrier to those - or so I believe... Can't wait to see more of them together.

"Watching" this space now my friend.

PS: It was a tough call between green tea and this little jasmine orange brew you have going...Only time will tell if this is more Rocks or intense Holics

Its something I want to explore; the awkwardness, the social stigma...just a thought process.

Its more of barbs here 😆

Originally posted by: bakwas_serial

- So from 17 year olds Y2K to 30 year olds 😊   This is different.  A 30 year old rich man, maybe in a one-sided relationship, a close gay buddy who is interested in him but he is not, a sister who chooses to live in a dreamland . 

He seems unsettled, for a lack of better word.  Wonder if  Watching will repair more than his dad's watch.  Jasmine tea calms my frazzled nerves, maybe he needs to drink more of it. 😊

  Waiting for the story to unfold.   

Jasmine tea for the win 😃

And with this I turned to poo-color. W*F man! 😆
Edited by RockBarbie - 8 years ago

Originally posted by: rk2127

New story and that to novel length 👍🏼


Aman and Arnav's bond seems interesting. A gay best friend who is falling for Arnav but knows he is in for a heart break.

Looking forward to read more and more.

Maybe not 😊

Originally posted by: N0306

I hope I didn't offend you.. You are one of the authors that touch my heart with your writing..

If it was intended to be like that.. I will just wait for the story to unfold..

You will never disappoint me.. You are amazing..

Not at all. Sometimes some works just won't make a dash of sense to you or you wont connect with it. It happens with me too. And that's okay.

No worries 😊

Originally posted by: Tiramisu_coffee

:-) good to see ya, Barb! I wish I had a Mojito to go with this update! My boo's heartbroken :-( Aww I want to give him a hug and a smile n tell him that he will find his Arnav one day! Anjali is oblivious - that handicap must be really hard to deal with for ppl around her! Lavanya is smart n polite - why must u venture outside the stereotypes? All skinny beautiful girls are bitches ... And i really hope WATCHING is not owned by some 55 years old perv who's living his jawani ke din vicariously!!  

I am super happy to see you are rooting for Aman :=) Humanity is the villain in this story 😊

Very different concept.
Chap one written fabulous

Interesting concept please do continue